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Unknown Family

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Penulis: Lalay_Neshan

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Seraphina is a girl that thinks she knows her family, but she is in for a rude awakening. One day she meets an attractive stranger, but that's where her life gets turned upside down. She learns things about herself and the people around her during her journey to becoming a stronger person.

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Status Power Mingguan

Rank -- Peringkat Power
Stone -- Power stone

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Linda_Neshan_8405

This is my daughter's story and I feel that she's talented. I hope that she can get lots of readers. She tries to write in all of her free time, but 3 kids takes a lot. Way to go my girl!

5yr
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Daoist776158

Wish that the chapters were longer and the updates were more frequent, but so far I’m intrigued. Can’t wait til the story progresses. Seraphina seems like a relatable character and something about Lucien is interesting

5yr
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Daoist776158

I can’t wait for updates. I’m very interested in knowing where this story is going to go. I have hope for this story and it may become one of my faves.

5yr
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gddincorporated

I Love the suspense and attention to detail! I get sucked into the story and feel like I can put myself in the shoes of any given character depending on my mood. Looking forward to the latest!

4yr
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Linda_Neshan_8405

Read it. Read it. Read it. This is a must read because it has potential to be good. I cant wait to see what the finished product is. My criticism is that there are some slight editing issues but that can be fixed.

5yr
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Daoist852392

I love the names that the author used for the characters. I read her comment and she says this is her first attempt at a story. You can tell, but it is pretty intriguing so far.

5yr
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