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One day evil will spread in the fictional world as it prevailed in reality hahahaha good novel it was fun frankly, you have to reduce the powers of the hero it is too much, a lot of supernatural abilities leads to confusion, thanks for your hard work the most important thing is that the hero is evil, because it will cover the story Even if it's bad
parece una historia interesante con una buena escritura pero el mc tiende a ser demasiado op además de que parece que no tiene un mate definida
overall a wonderfully well written fan fiction that features a competent evil MC that is cunning relatable and very entertaining as long as it stays out of harems and romance we got a winner here
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Such a good book, it has really good character development and i love how strong he becomes by the middle of the book and different universes is really good
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I simply like this, except for its update rates. If you grown tired with a heroic MC, protected by countless plot armor, while filled with cliche abusive plot. Then try this one. This fanfic really freshen up your reading taste, while also make you feel harder to find an enjoyable fanfics lmao.
there is no development of mc, except that it is worth being a villain without further explanation on the subject. Fight them nonsense, he fantasizes such stupid and stupid things. I understand that you wanted to make a naughty MC, but you have to make sense of these actions, right? oh yes one more thing about the development of ichigo, it became much stronger in the original story because it has them big fights and not the reverse and also the synchronization between two people does not happen in less than one months (see a lot less) even if they are xd soul mates. he can choose them what the mc chooses i don't know if he chooses them complacently or by chance, but in any case that has the case to be the case which i find complacently stupid.
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Great fanfic . The thing i love most about it is that the mc is evil The updatings could be a litle quicker but its a good fanfic none the same Keep up the good work 😇
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It's disturbing how amazingly stupid mc is. He is like a 3rd rite villain but worse. I don't mind evil mc I actually like it but this is just cartoon level dumbness. Fights are drawn long, lots of fillers and most certainly mc is really badly written.
I love the book keep it up😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
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Good fanfic 140 word yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee3eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeereeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeettttttttt
I don't know why people got so mad with the MC not being super super evil People need to calm the f*** down the world is not black and white there's different tiers of evil and good people not every villain is a psycho rapist that kills every single person he comes by and not every hero or good person is going to help everybody no matter the situation It's not a terrible novel was not my taste though cuz I prefer good MCs over bad ones but it's definitely not terrible some people just need to calm down
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Hello, First of all, the writing quality and stability of the fanfic are excellent (1 chap per day, notices when the author is not uploading chapters, etc). But i have several problems with a couple of things, lots of canon characters are in a way that seems to me not natural, for example, the captain of the first division, for me him deciding to not interfere in the final battle seems a lot, not cannon (in the battle against Aizen he acted but still not used it's Bankai, the captain had always a twisted sense of balance between worlds, he would definitely interfere and make sure that the threat is eliminated even if it meant killing himself, 2-3 captains. Another thing the World Background is definitely nonexistent, don't tell me he didn't see things that were not present in the manga or anime because a world like bleach is pretty large and has multiple dimensions . I don't know if it's a lack of imagination or a lack of determination and honestly, it's a shame because having a beautiful background story to the world would add urgency to the hero and a twisted sense of accomplishment to the villain. However, the author has made really good use of powers and reaction to it . But for me, it lacks depth. It still needs works but it's a good start.
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This book is like a beautiful chorus of heavenly beings singing “Aw!” I love every bit of it! It seems to be well paced an the details aren’t just thrown at your face all at once. It gives you time to adjust. It also gives you plenty of world knowledge so even a newb can understand this.
Duh, duh, duh! I love it! BOOM! I love it! It’s on a different plane! It’s not even close to space! I am addicted to this lore! I got no time to waste! I must read it! I must read it all! SO GOOD! Thanks author!!
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An awesome story!!! It's always more fun being the villain and it's surprising that more people haven't written about Bill and. Love the story and hope it gets to like chap 500!!
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No goodie goodie mc here. Great story with many twists. Not very often you read a good story with a evil or chaotic main character. Cannot wait to see where this story will go.
Good villain. He isn't ridiculously smart and he doesn't lead everyone around by the nose always. He's an actual villain that will debate about whether or not him letting the hero go through with his plan is villainous arrogance that will get him killed. Then he will kill one of the people vital to the plan and imprison another so that he can see the faces they make when it falls apart. He isn't stupid enough to let the protagonist find out that he killed someone important to them so that they don't get a friendship powerup. His plans remind me of the protagonist of reincarnation paradise for anyone that's read it. He schemes and gets everyone in the position he wants them in, and at the end of the day it doesn't matter if they find out about it because his plans although smart, rely on the fact that he can kill everyone if it comes down to it. For anyone wanting another good villain story, especially for the author to take inspiration from, read reincarnation paradise. Basically people that are a part of reincarnation paradise get sent to anime worlds by a system and based on their performance get paradise coins to increase their stats and buy equipment. The protagonist has sh!tty luck though and doesn't get many loot chest to drop from enemies. Then he finds out that you get the most rewards for killing the most important people in the story, more rewards the more plot armor they have. If you don't like that I basically promoted another story in my review, just tell me and I will repost my review without mentioning reincarnation paradise.
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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
One day evil will spread in the fictional world as it prevailed in reality hahahaha good novel it was fun frankly, you have to reduce the powers of the hero it is too much, a lot of supernatural abilities leads to confusion, thanks for your hard work the most important thing is that the hero is evil, because it will cover the story Even if it's bad
parece una historia interesante con una buena escritura pero el mc tiende a ser demasiado op además de que parece que no tiene un mate definida
overall a wonderfully well written fan fiction that features a competent evil MC that is cunning relatable and very entertaining as long as it stays out of harems and romance we got a winner here
Its good . ............................................................ ................... ......... ................... ................
Such a good book, it has really good character development and i love how strong he becomes by the middle of the book and different universes is really good
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I simply like this, except for its update rates. If you grown tired with a heroic MC, protected by countless plot armor, while filled with cliche abusive plot. Then try this one. This fanfic really freshen up your reading taste, while also make you feel harder to find an enjoyable fanfics lmao.
there is no development of mc, except that it is worth being a villain without further explanation on the subject. Fight them nonsense, he fantasizes such stupid and stupid things. I understand that you wanted to make a naughty MC, but you have to make sense of these actions, right? oh yes one more thing about the development of ichigo, it became much stronger in the original story because it has them big fights and not the reverse and also the synchronization between two people does not happen in less than one months (see a lot less) even if they are xd soul mates. he can choose them what the mc chooses i don't know if he chooses them complacently or by chance, but in any case that has the case to be the case which i find complacently stupid.
Membuka SPOILER Great fanfic . The thing i love most about it is that the mc is evil The updatings could be a litle quicker but its a good fanfic none the same Keep up the good work 😇
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Membuka SPOILER It's disturbing how amazingly stupid mc is. He is like a 3rd rite villain but worse. I don't mind evil mc I actually like it but this is just cartoon level dumbness. Fights are drawn long, lots of fillers and most certainly mc is really badly written.
I love the book keep it up😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
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Membuka SPOILER Good fanfic 140 word yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee3eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeereeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeettttttttt
I don't know why people got so mad with the MC not being super super evil People need to calm the f*** down the world is not black and white there's different tiers of evil and good people not every villain is a psycho rapist that kills every single person he comes by and not every hero or good person is going to help everybody no matter the situation It's not a terrible novel was not my taste though cuz I prefer good MCs over bad ones but it's definitely not terrible some people just need to calm down
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Hello, First of all, the writing quality and stability of the fanfic are excellent (1 chap per day, notices when the author is not uploading chapters, etc). But i have several problems with a couple of things, lots of canon characters are in a way that seems to me not natural, for example, the captain of the first division, for me him deciding to not interfere in the final battle seems a lot, not cannon (in the battle against Aizen he acted but still not used it's Bankai, the captain had always a twisted sense of balance between worlds, he would definitely interfere and make sure that the threat is eliminated even if it meant killing himself, 2-3 captains. Another thing the World Background is definitely nonexistent, don't tell me he didn't see things that were not present in the manga or anime because a world like bleach is pretty large and has multiple dimensions . I don't know if it's a lack of imagination or a lack of determination and honestly, it's a shame because having a beautiful background story to the world would add urgency to the hero and a twisted sense of accomplishment to the villain. However, the author has made really good use of powers and reaction to it . But for me, it lacks depth. It still needs works but it's a good start.
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This book is like a beautiful chorus of heavenly beings singing “Aw!” I love every bit of it! It seems to be well paced an the details aren’t just thrown at your face all at once. It gives you time to adjust. It also gives you plenty of world knowledge so even a newb can understand this.
Duh, duh, duh! I love it! BOOM! I love it! It’s on a different plane! It’s not even close to space! I am addicted to this lore! I got no time to waste! I must read it! I must read it all! SO GOOD! Thanks author!!
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Membuka SPOILER An awesome story!!! It's always more fun being the villain and it's surprising that more people haven't written about Bill and. Love the story and hope it gets to like chap 500!!
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No goodie goodie mc here. Great story with many twists. Not very often you read a good story with a evil or chaotic main character. Cannot wait to see where this story will go.
Good villain. He isn't ridiculously smart and he doesn't lead everyone around by the nose always. He's an actual villain that will debate about whether or not him letting the hero go through with his plan is villainous arrogance that will get him killed. Then he will kill one of the people vital to the plan and imprison another so that he can see the faces they make when it falls apart. He isn't stupid enough to let the protagonist find out that he killed someone important to them so that they don't get a friendship powerup. His plans remind me of the protagonist of reincarnation paradise for anyone that's read it. He schemes and gets everyone in the position he wants them in, and at the end of the day it doesn't matter if they find out about it because his plans although smart, rely on the fact that he can kill everyone if it comes down to it. For anyone wanting another good villain story, especially for the author to take inspiration from, read reincarnation paradise. Basically people that are a part of reincarnation paradise get sent to anime worlds by a system and based on their performance get paradise coins to increase their stats and buy equipment. The protagonist has sh!tty luck though and doesn't get many loot chest to drop from enemies. Then he finds out that you get the most rewards for killing the most important people in the story, more rewards the more plot armor they have. If you don't like that I basically promoted another story in my review, just tell me and I will repost my review without mentioning reincarnation paradise.
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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?