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What's A King Without A System?
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(Author's note:
Story will be updated on August 3, 2020. I'm having my last semester in college so I'll focus on that for a while. Also, a remake will be done so reading this version would still be worth it.
For those who were looking forward to more content, sorry but you'll have to wait longer. But my personal life has to come first, and this hobby can wait. If you're willing to wait, I'll give you your due reward, but not for a while. Thank you, and hope you like what you'll see.)
The world as we know it is about to end. Billions of lives will be lost, countries devastated and society left in ruins. But if you have the power to save it, would you?
Zel Huertazuela has had a life that's full of let downs. His mother was a debt-ridden mess, his father was an abusive angry bull while he gets nothing but insults when trying to fix them. He doesn't even know how to move forward with his life.
โNever mind, I donโt really know what I want, why not just do what people tell me to? Money is needed you say? Iโll be an engineer then, those pay well right?โ
โGet a work that you would do even if you donโt get paid for it? What the hell kind of fantasy is that?โ
But that would have been it if it weren't for his sudden ability to live a lifetime in the span of a dream that lasts a night.
"Wait, this isn't the hospital?!"
"Where's my wife!"
"Now that I'm back, I'll be rich!"
"I'll fix the mistakes I made, there won't be any more regrets for this guy!"
"Monsters?! No problem!"
"We won in the dream, why can't we win in reality?"
"What do you mean it changed?"
"Help! How do I fix this?!"
If you were given a second chance, would you take it? Even if you have to lose everything you built up today?
Find out how a man finds himself saving the world by being the man who rules it!
(The first volume is basically a very long prologue. The 'Battle of the Beginning' chapters will be more representative of what to expect from future volumes.
This story is something I had in mind for a long time now so many of the ideas and scenarios can be seen in my other works but they are only similar, not literal copies. Enjoy!)
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This story is great!... The life drama is realistic and I believe it 'Cause The older I get the more that I see my parents aren't heroes They're just like me And loving is hard, it doesn't always work, you just try your best not to get hurt
I love kingdom building and Iโve been searching for it so I hope this novel is supper good ass it goes on and donโt drop the novel!!!๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
This is one gigantic convoluted mess of unconnected plotlines bundled together in a confusing way. Half the time you won't even know what the f#*k you're reading.
Really entertaining and thrilling novel. The concept of time-travel is well explored. MC and other characters are well built with multiple POVs allowing for greater immercsion in the story.
Ok... i never use this but the novel is great... with big great and i love this novel ...................................................................................................................................................................................................
Very weird story progression. Firstly, the "extra" contained vital info that would make the book ten times more confusing without. Additionally, the book is all over the place. It's just confusing when there is no explanation where you are, when the MC can see the future etc.. All the author has to do is put time and location stamps everytime a scene swaps. Then there is the random focus on side characters; honestly, it's hard to tell what's going on most of the time when the story is so choppy. Yes, character building is fine. However, in the middle of character building, I also have to go through the author acting mysterious about the two characters that are being developed? Finally, the stupid smile the MC has. I've never encountered a book that made me hate a MC smiling. The emphasis on it gets really annoying(its truly obnoxious.)
I read this story somewhat. I was then looking for books on amazon and saw a pretty much exact copy of this book on there dont know if its you or not. Story is called System Overlord by Oreya Kane
I don't have much time to write up a long-winded review, but I wanted to get this posted before I forget. As requested on the forums, I gave the first 11 chapters a read through. I was thoroughly entertained. The grammar could use a bit of cleaning, but the story carried itself well without causing any confusion. The world seems fascinating, while the characters all have decent and mostly realistic dialogue, allowing me as a reader to fall into the story easily. I did skim ahead to the R-18 chapter, but more out of my own curiosity than anything. I don't typically read novels with steamy content, but I applaud the author for taking the risk and making things seem as tasteful as they can be. Your stability of updates seems great, but I'm not one to talk - being that I tend to fluctuate my releases from once a day to even having months in-between chapters. Altogether its a fun story with a competent writer, what's not to like? =D
Great story! I like system! Also author-san may want to add 'game elements' on tagging? because of how detailed those status. Good chapter length as well. Excellent work. Keep it up.. :)
It like those chinese novel where the main character become op but in modern time with out all the bull**** that come it like my ceo wife and some other Work of fiction with stupid ass plot hole so thank for making this novel with those cliches even though you have some yourself it not as much although you dont have hundreds of chapter to make it so clear yet but you have potential so I'm giving You a five so you can finally get a rating
Sorry, had to give up on this story at Chapter 5. Maybe it gets better I will never know. The MC seems to have serious mental issues. Overall, MC is trash and his motivations (if any) are hard to figure out.
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I really like these kind of stories so i first thought it would be a little bit boring to read, but i was pleasantly surprised while reading to find out that i had a lot of fun. keep up the good work.
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The appealing storyline and engaging characters give this story an entertaining quality that is highly enjoyable. The writing quality is surely above the average here on Webnovel and while sometimes there are minor mistakes concerning grammar (everyone makes them, itโs human,- I certainly make them as well) it is not disruptive to the reader. Overall, I believe this is a good story that shows quite some potential.
Good job, very good job. An original and entertaining story, capable of making you not separate from the phone to continue reading. The update is good and it is not necessary to wait so long. Thank you author for your great work.
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It's has a nice story. The characters are good and the plot line also excites me. The stability of update is awesome 14 chaps in 1 week... wow! Keep it up!
This story is great!..This story is great!..This story is great!..This story is great!..This story is great!..This story is great!..This story is great!..This story is great!..
Hi Author here! I actually have another novel before this one but I am still revising that one while I put this out because I felt that ideas I had for that one would be too much of a waste if I put it all into one novel. I don't really like MC's that get everything done perfectly and get a pass on things so expect things to get quite dicey. I'll try to get it done daily while I work on my other novel: If I Can't Conquer, Who Can? Anyways, the novel promises to have a rather strange end of the world setting with our MC hopefully finding a way to survive. I won't spoil anymore but I promise that things will be rewarding not only for our dear MC, but also to you viewers. Join me on this journey as we get the King on his throne!
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