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I like how this story starts. Contrary to the famous "saw her, want her, own her" quick transition for other werewolves stories, this does not have that. Usually others tend to be more animalistic and act on instincts. Although, there is definitely some attraction going on here. But that's it so far. Attraction. And it seems like the common thing that happen with high school crushes. Your eyes is always on the person, your body is conscious of where the person is, you hope to make contact... but it doesn't happen so now you sound like a stalker πππ Anyway, the romance element starts out quite naturally while we get to know more about the setting and the MC. Wohoo! More cupcakes to you, author-san!
This story is a surprise for me. It took me by surprise that the author of 'The daily life of foodie in the office' and ' His human mate'are the same. Both are so different stories. I must say that the author has a great story telling style with ease and perfection. The characters and background is too good and not to mention negligible grammatical error which is rare these days on wn. The story of creatures like werewolf, vampires, witches etc excites me a lot and this is definitely the one if you are looking for great story with unique background. This story has piqued my interest and I'm looking forward to the story and Erick of course. Keep up the good work dear author and I'm looking forward for the story development.
Good storyline. Strong beginning. Need improvement on the flow. Great descriptions on the characters and places. In short, recommended to read!
mOoooooReeeEe! :D keep it up! π I'm lovin' it π thnks for updating πΉ Ps. ROELLLLLLLLLL β€β€ the other heart is from a certain doggo hahaha
This novel is worth the try because i love how things are turning so far. I also like how smooth the writing is :D Author-san is able to explain everything(character design, world building etc.) In just the early chapters of the story, unlike any other fantasy novels that has too complicated conworld. I personally like the main characters because I love shameless charactersπ I hope to see more of this lot! πππ
I really love the story author dear.. π Amber is so cute and lovable. She is such a mood haha! I'm looking forward to more of their interactions α(ββΈβΌβΆ)α ganbatte! From a certain Shameless Talking Chick~ π£π
The story has only begun with one chapter, so there's still a lot of space for development, but from the first chapter, I have to say that it's really good and it's definitely a hidden gem π The description made the story flow very well and it's easy to imagine them in your head. It was as if you're there and see them with your own eyes. For the writing quality, I'll give it 5/5 I'm not that good in grammar, but I didn't see anything wrong, so full score from me. for the stability of updates, it's only the first chapter, so I'll also give 5/5 Story development, character design, and world background might still change, so I'll give them all 5/5 I'll be waiting for new updates of this novel~ This is certainly a promising one, thank you for posting this, TheTalkingCupcakes πππ -From a TalkingSky π
Nice story, looking forward to read more chapters nd hope it comes soon ..........................................................................,......................................................
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I like how this story starts. Contrary to the famous "saw her, want her, own her" quick transition for other werewolves stories, this does not have that. Usually others tend to be more animalistic and act on instincts. Although, there is definitely some attraction going on here. But that's it so far. Attraction. And it seems like the common thing that happen with high school crushes. Your eyes is always on the person, your body is conscious of where the person is, you hope to make contact... but it doesn't happen so now you sound like a stalker πππ Anyway, the romance element starts out quite naturally while we get to know more about the setting and the MC. Wohoo! More cupcakes to you, author-san!
This story is a surprise for me. It took me by surprise that the author of 'The daily life of foodie in the office' and ' His human mate'are the same. Both are so different stories. I must say that the author has a great story telling style with ease and perfection. The characters and background is too good and not to mention negligible grammatical error which is rare these days on wn. The story of creatures like werewolf, vampires, witches etc excites me a lot and this is definitely the one if you are looking for great story with unique background. This story has piqued my interest and I'm looking forward to the story and Erick of course. Keep up the good work dear author and I'm looking forward for the story development.
Good storyline. Strong beginning. Need improvement on the flow. Great descriptions on the characters and places. In short, recommended to read!
mOoooooReeeEe! :D keep it up! π I'm lovin' it π thnks for updating πΉ Ps. ROELLLLLLLLLL β€β€ the other heart is from a certain doggo hahaha
This novel is worth the try because i love how things are turning so far. I also like how smooth the writing is :D Author-san is able to explain everything(character design, world building etc.) In just the early chapters of the story, unlike any other fantasy novels that has too complicated conworld. I personally like the main characters because I love shameless charactersπ I hope to see more of this lot! πππ
I really love the story author dear.. π Amber is so cute and lovable. She is such a mood haha! I'm looking forward to more of their interactions α(ββΈβΌβΆ)α ganbatte! From a certain Shameless Talking Chick~ π£π
The story has only begun with one chapter, so there's still a lot of space for development, but from the first chapter, I have to say that it's really good and it's definitely a hidden gem π The description made the story flow very well and it's easy to imagine them in your head. It was as if you're there and see them with your own eyes. For the writing quality, I'll give it 5/5 I'm not that good in grammar, but I didn't see anything wrong, so full score from me. for the stability of updates, it's only the first chapter, so I'll also give 5/5 Story development, character design, and world background might still change, so I'll give them all 5/5 I'll be waiting for new updates of this novel~ This is certainly a promising one, thank you for posting this, TheTalkingCupcakes πππ -From a TalkingSky π
Nice story, looking forward to read more chapters nd hope it comes soon ..........................................................................,......................................................