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This story is kind of my taste. I like how a villain or a villainess will get their happy ending and overturning the tables. Brcause I don't like the concept that a person is predestined to have everything in the world and in their lifetime
Incredible slow burn romance. The female lead is very interesting. She's brave and will do anything for self-preservation ahahaha. Don't let the first few chapters fool you. This isn't your mainstream entertainment transmigration story. The main plot is very enthralling and the other characters are really lovable.
I want to preface by saying that I only read the first book. I was pleasantly surprised that I ended up liking the main couple together. The first 75 chapters of their interactions were aggravating and annoying. However, after they have a talk and establish proper communication it got so much better. I also liked their development. I like that annoying characters don’t over stay their welcome. 7.5/10 The weakest area of the first book is the story and world. The world is divided into three clans: the Yellow, Blue, and Red Clans. We don’t need to learn much about the Yellow Clan, but we do need to learn about the Blue and Red clan. The inner working and power structure of these two clans is important to understanding and learning about their conflict but is never explored. We only ever see one leader from the Blue clan, and we don’t really know anything about them. We don’t know how they feel, their values, their behaviors, what they really think of the Red Clan, and so much more. This causes the Blue Clan to be the faceless bad guys with no nuance at all. It is especially a problem consisting that the Red and Blue Clan have been in this conflict for a long time. The Red Clan couldn’t have been just taking hits the entire time. What have they contributed to this conflict that breeds hate from the Blue Clan. Speaking of the Red Clan, why is the King still in power. The King being in power is the source of a lot of Han Minhyun’s ( the male lead) problems and his general situation. This would lead one to believe it would be a least partially explored why and how this internal struggle in the Red Clan works. But it isn’t. Why is Han Sungmin taking so long to rebel when he has so many chances? Where is the Prince? Why was he mentioned but never appeared? If Oh Jaeho hates the king so much, why didn’t he work with one of the other leads to take him down within the Red Clan instead of using the Blue Clan? So many questions. The internal conflict in the Red clan is very important in understanding the characters, their choices, their positions, but it is never explored or really brought up at all. Plot points involving this conflict are even dropped or forgotten about. This leads to the (in my opinion) rushed ending that is supposed be the end of the story since they defeated the Blue Clan. Uh wait they didn’t. They conflict with the Blue Clan has been going on for a while, so winning one battle will not make that go away. The ending also forgets about any other plot point or story beat to focus solely on this halfed-baked resolution. Some characters die to make it more dramatic but it barely meant anything since it end abruptly after without giving anyone time to process and grieve. One thing I want to mention is that I thought the misunderstanding between Han Minhyun and Ahn Eunwoo was silly and pointless. The fact that it get resolved with one conversation telling Eunwoo the truth just highlights how pointless it is. The fact that Han Minhyun never had this conversation with him is dumb. If you want protect him, why would allow him to be in such a position? The Red Clan members will attack him because he works for the Blue Clan, and the Blue Clan members don’t trust him since he’s from the Red clan and might get rid of him at anytime. Leaving him in this position is more dangerous than if he just stayed in the Red Clan. It would be safer if he knew the truth and was with you. On that note why did Han Minhyun tell him? The excuse that he was just a kid is kind of invalid since he wasn’t that much older than Eunwoo. If the decision was framed as a mistake that Minhyun needs to fix, that would be one thing. However, it more so treated like some great sacrifice he has to make. This misunderstanding is simply here for drama. The story overall has some pitfalls and places it could be better. I do however like the characters and the interactions between the main leads. I won’t say all of the characters were well written, but they were enjoyable. Overall 7.5/10
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So this started out good. It’s written well and funny, but 40+ chps in….it gets repetitive. What once was FL’s funny and cute points eventually turns annoying and cliche. IT’s like really, this act again, can you come up with something new or at least havE some character growth
author please upload the volume ll. I'm really curious of what will happen next. So please upload the chapter as soon as possible and frequently.
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I've read the other tags but have not reached that/those areas in the story. However, what I've been reading so far I've enjoyed plus the story is complete. It has the Kdramatics twist in it along with transmigration and system. The FL is sassy which I like, the ML I'm not so sure yet however my view of him is not negative per se. I"ll continue to read this story.
I really like this story. It doesn't shy away from cliches but because it's written so well you don't mind them. And everyone loves reading a good cliche story.
first book that's actually caught my eyes for months!! I really enjoy the plot and the characters, they're so awesome. I actually thought that the story wasn't going to be that good but the author really proved me wrong. this story is great,, keep up with the good work author!!
very good, google job author. its been a long time that i did not read a nice novel like this one. i really loved the mains characters. ....
the bool just get you addicted loved charcter just read and you wont regreted weel done auther cant wait to another book of yours🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
I love it!!!! Everything is just so amazing like omg the writing and the whole story and omg the characters are hilarious!!!! Couldn't have read a better story!!!!🤣🤣🤣
The 1st few pages were promising but a couple more pages & it gradually became a task of a read... I lost interest by the mid of chap 67 so I stopped... but I'm crossing fingers & will leave it on my reading list... maybe I could give it another chance later since I don't like not finishing what I've started reading.
this is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love her quick witted personality and the male leads personality as well!!! they are so funny together 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
i still havent finished but so far this book has most of the things I've been looking for in a transmigration gene of books i recommend to people who are new to the transmigration gene its easy to understand and not too complex
the story so far is very interesting. I love this kind of stories very much as i love female to get the husband she wants and counterback all her enemies
I love this book like how every mission leads to a death route and she just has to do it probably if it was me I would have been dead like ages ago
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Ahhh- This is such a good book! I genuinely love this book! I could read it over and over again! I love the second story the most with Ryu, But I also love the second story! I recommend over and over again!
Fun book! The female lead is very interesting and although there are a few grammar mistakes it doesn’t take away from the fact that the book is pretty entertaining
I really don't leave reviews to any novel well i guess it will be an exception. Dude this novel is soooooo awesome i am in love with the author seriously. Writing quality is good there are close to none grammatical errors. The reading experience was really good. Author has worked hard for the development of the story. I was literally having heart attack while reading. I threw my phone on the scene when han minhyun died seriously and although i am not someone who would cry easily i cried there 😂😂. Every character has it's unique characteristics i can't bring myself to hate anyone oh jaeho can be an exception i guess. World background. Writing has really good imaging and shaping the world in the novel. It was really thrilling to read. The novel world the the underground everything was new. Every second novel here is same but finding such novel with a complete different storyline was refreshing. Keep up the good work authornim. And i am really tempted to try out your other work . I really really recommend this book to all out there. Thank you
I like this one. Would recommend. The MC is strong and funny. The male MC however is teasing quite a lot. Hopefully the romance will develop steadier
I’m on chapter 32 and so far I really like this book. There are a bit of grammar errors, but o really like it and I think I’m going to keep reading!!!😁😁😃
I like the character of the male and female villain (aka fl) knowing that jiwo was just acting all the time yet the male villain always pampers her (in public though)❤❤❤
I like this story I like how a villain or a villainess will get their happy ending and overturning the tables. because everyone deserves a chance for Happinese
Me encanta super super genial es de mis lecturas favoritas sigue asi buen escrito ya la e leido desde el principio asta donde queda muchas veses😘😘😘😘
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I loved reading about their silly antics. One of the best books I’ve read so far. Though plot twists keep adding up and the story gets complicated, it’s very entertaining to go along with Lee Soohyun’s shameless self.
It is quite good book specially the ML is myterious and you can't geusw what he is gonna do next and the FL is .......... no words despite bieng not an actress in the past life she is quite good at acting.
I started reading this book from Wattpad and the 16 chapters captured my interest. It continues to become funny as time goes on. However most of it is locked but I am getting the fast pass because I can’t put the book down
It was a good story actually, but not that very good. for a romance yes, it gives you happiness for the both of them, but there are some concerns I have. well the fmc have a flirty attitude, that's quite nice actually, that doesnt matter, what matters is the 'characters' that felt like they haven't even saw another person in their life that a small tease from the fmc and they begin to blush lols, another authors fault is introducing a character that felt like a filler, disregarding them later on, why introduce them at the first place? you know what I cant see another reason for the small kid to be there other than to make the male mc jealous. I also doesnt understand what the main plot of this story is about, yes they are under attack and their is scheming but is that it? will that end? how do they plan to stop the war? their is loose ends for this story but I guess we cant do anything about that the story focuses on fmc. for the author, I hope you can develop your stories more :), I love it but I need to be fair there is some things that you are lacking. lets see, on the first part before the shocking mystery reveal the comedy was great, but it looks lime after that it stops, make sure to continue it and not quiting halfway, just like what you did on characters, even if they are side characters make the readers felt as if they are alive and thinking properly, have a goal, the antagonist of this story doesnt have that. oh right unneseccary deaths lol, I can't thats a big zero for me aside from your character disregarding later on whats the difference between both of them anw. lastly chapter chopping, like at the end of this chapter where you expect something happens and then new scene, like what? **. be more creative, open minded, learn r18 stuffs I was kinda expecting some detail atleast when they know/admit their feelings for each other, that makes it more good. yeah right a tsundere character really and in the end it felt like a force that they like each other? anw. good job and good luck for your future prospectives as for the readers, decide on your own after reading my post I can atleast say that you wont regret reading this :)
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Reincarnation books are like one of my favorite books and this book is just amazing.It has been like one of my favorite book and to top all of it, it’s completed too!I spent 2 whole days just reading this book and it was soo cute.
This book is very addicting, so girls get you coins ready because you cannot go to sleep once you start this! This is not a drill people, this book is the bomb!
Let me be shameless and leave a review on this novel! • The female lead in this novel wants to live the most, and her determination to live will seen be all throughout the novel. • The Male Lead is the Villain to the novel, who is involved with the underworld according to the novel, and therefore, the female lead is careful of him in the beginning because she is afraid he will be killing her. • However, once she learns that he won't harm her, she will be showing her real self to him. Anyways, I hope you can read up to the 76th chapter at least (The first sixty chapters are small) before judging! Thank you very much for reading this <3
This story is kind of my taste. I like how a villain or a villainess will get their happy ending and overturning the tables. Brcause I don't like the concept that a person is predestined to have everything in the world and in their lifetime
Incredible slow burn romance. The female lead is very interesting. She's brave and will do anything for self-preservation ahahaha. Don't let the first few chapters fool you. This isn't your mainstream entertainment transmigration story. The main plot is very enthralling and the other characters are really lovable.
I want to preface by saying that I only read the first book. I was pleasantly surprised that I ended up liking the main couple together. The first 75 chapters of their interactions were aggravating and annoying. However, after they have a talk and establish proper communication it got so much better. I also liked their development. I like that annoying characters don’t over stay their welcome. 7.5/10 The weakest area of the first book is the story and world. The world is divided into three clans: the Yellow, Blue, and Red Clans. We don’t need to learn much about the Yellow Clan, but we do need to learn about the Blue and Red clan. The inner working and power structure of these two clans is important to understanding and learning about their conflict but is never explored. We only ever see one leader from the Blue clan, and we don’t really know anything about them. We don’t know how they feel, their values, their behaviors, what they really think of the Red Clan, and so much more. This causes the Blue Clan to be the faceless bad guys with no nuance at all. It is especially a problem consisting that the Red and Blue Clan have been in this conflict for a long time. The Red Clan couldn’t have been just taking hits the entire time. What have they contributed to this conflict that breeds hate from the Blue Clan. Speaking of the Red Clan, why is the King still in power. The King being in power is the source of a lot of Han Minhyun’s ( the male lead) problems and his general situation. This would lead one to believe it would be a least partially explored why and how this internal struggle in the Red Clan works. But it isn’t. Why is Han Sungmin taking so long to rebel when he has so many chances? Where is the Prince? Why was he mentioned but never appeared? If Oh Jaeho hates the king so much, why didn’t he work with one of the other leads to take him down within the Red Clan instead of using the Blue Clan? So many questions. The internal conflict in the Red clan is very important in understanding the characters, their choices, their positions, but it is never explored or really brought up at all. Plot points involving this conflict are even dropped or forgotten about. This leads to the (in my opinion) rushed ending that is supposed be the end of the story since they defeated the Blue Clan. Uh wait they didn’t. They conflict with the Blue Clan has been going on for a while, so winning one battle will not make that go away. The ending also forgets about any other plot point or story beat to focus solely on this halfed-baked resolution. Some characters die to make it more dramatic but it barely meant anything since it end abruptly after without giving anyone time to process and grieve. One thing I want to mention is that I thought the misunderstanding between Han Minhyun and Ahn Eunwoo was silly and pointless. The fact that it get resolved with one conversation telling Eunwoo the truth just highlights how pointless it is. The fact that Han Minhyun never had this conversation with him is dumb. If you want protect him, why would allow him to be in such a position? The Red Clan members will attack him because he works for the Blue Clan, and the Blue Clan members don’t trust him since he’s from the Red clan and might get rid of him at anytime. Leaving him in this position is more dangerous than if he just stayed in the Red Clan. It would be safer if he knew the truth and was with you. On that note why did Han Minhyun tell him? The excuse that he was just a kid is kind of invalid since he wasn’t that much older than Eunwoo. If the decision was framed as a mistake that Minhyun needs to fix, that would be one thing. However, it more so treated like some great sacrifice he has to make. This misunderstanding is simply here for drama. The story overall has some pitfalls and places it could be better. I do however like the characters and the interactions between the main leads. I won’t say all of the characters were well written, but they were enjoyable. Overall 7.5/10
Membuka SPOILER So this started out good. It’s written well and funny, but 40+ chps in….it gets repetitive. What once was FL’s funny and cute points eventually turns annoying and cliche. IT’s like really, this act again, can you come up with something new or at least havE some character growth
author please upload the volume ll. I'm really curious of what will happen next. So please upload the chapter as soon as possible and frequently.
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I've read the other tags but have not reached that/those areas in the story. However, what I've been reading so far I've enjoyed plus the story is complete. It has the Kdramatics twist in it along with transmigration and system. The FL is sassy which I like, the ML I'm not so sure yet however my view of him is not negative per se. I"ll continue to read this story.
I really like this story. It doesn't shy away from cliches but because it's written so well you don't mind them. And everyone loves reading a good cliche story.
first book that's actually caught my eyes for months!! I really enjoy the plot and the characters, they're so awesome. I actually thought that the story wasn't going to be that good but the author really proved me wrong. this story is great,, keep up with the good work author!!
very good, google job author. its been a long time that i did not read a nice novel like this one. i really loved the mains characters. ....
the bool just get you addicted loved charcter just read and you wont regreted weel done auther cant wait to another book of yours🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
I love it!!!! Everything is just so amazing like omg the writing and the whole story and omg the characters are hilarious!!!! Couldn't have read a better story!!!!🤣🤣🤣
The 1st few pages were promising but a couple more pages & it gradually became a task of a read... I lost interest by the mid of chap 67 so I stopped... but I'm crossing fingers & will leave it on my reading list... maybe I could give it another chance later since I don't like not finishing what I've started reading.
this is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love her quick witted personality and the male leads personality as well!!! they are so funny together 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
i still havent finished but so far this book has most of the things I've been looking for in a transmigration gene of books i recommend to people who are new to the transmigration gene its easy to understand and not too complex
the story so far is very interesting. I love this kind of stories very much as i love female to get the husband she wants and counterback all her enemies
I love this book like how every mission leads to a death route and she just has to do it probably if it was me I would have been dead like ages ago
Membuka SPOILER Ahhh- This is such a good book! I genuinely love this book! I could read it over and over again! I love the second story the most with Ryu, But I also love the second story! I recommend over and over again!
Fun book! The female lead is very interesting and although there are a few grammar mistakes it doesn’t take away from the fact that the book is pretty entertaining
I really don't leave reviews to any novel well i guess it will be an exception. Dude this novel is soooooo awesome i am in love with the author seriously. Writing quality is good there are close to none grammatical errors. The reading experience was really good. Author has worked hard for the development of the story. I was literally having heart attack while reading. I threw my phone on the scene when han minhyun died seriously and although i am not someone who would cry easily i cried there 😂😂. Every character has it's unique characteristics i can't bring myself to hate anyone oh jaeho can be an exception i guess. World background. Writing has really good imaging and shaping the world in the novel. It was really thrilling to read. The novel world the the underground everything was new. Every second novel here is same but finding such novel with a complete different storyline was refreshing. Keep up the good work authornim. And i am really tempted to try out your other work . I really really recommend this book to all out there. Thank you
I like this one. Would recommend. The MC is strong and funny. The male MC however is teasing quite a lot. Hopefully the romance will develop steadier
I’m on chapter 32 and so far I really like this book. There are a bit of grammar errors, but o really like it and I think I’m going to keep reading!!!😁😁😃
I like the character of the male and female villain (aka fl) knowing that jiwo was just acting all the time yet the male villain always pampers her (in public though)❤❤❤
I like this story I like how a villain or a villainess will get their happy ending and overturning the tables. because everyone deserves a chance for Happinese
Me encanta super super genial es de mis lecturas favoritas sigue asi buen escrito ya la e leido desde el principio asta donde queda muchas veses😘😘😘😘
Membuka SPOILER I loved reading about their silly antics. One of the best books I’ve read so far. Though plot twists keep adding up and the story gets complicated, it’s very entertaining to go along with Lee Soohyun’s shameless self.
It is quite good book specially the ML is myterious and you can't geusw what he is gonna do next and the FL is .......... no words despite bieng not an actress in the past life she is quite good at acting.
I started reading this book from Wattpad and the 16 chapters captured my interest. It continues to become funny as time goes on. However most of it is locked but I am getting the fast pass because I can’t put the book down
It was a good story actually, but not that very good. for a romance yes, it gives you happiness for the both of them, but there are some concerns I have. well the fmc have a flirty attitude, that's quite nice actually, that doesnt matter, what matters is the 'characters' that felt like they haven't even saw another person in their life that a small tease from the fmc and they begin to blush lols, another authors fault is introducing a character that felt like a filler, disregarding them later on, why introduce them at the first place? you know what I cant see another reason for the small kid to be there other than to make the male mc jealous. I also doesnt understand what the main plot of this story is about, yes they are under attack and their is scheming but is that it? will that end? how do they plan to stop the war? their is loose ends for this story but I guess we cant do anything about that the story focuses on fmc. for the author, I hope you can develop your stories more :), I love it but I need to be fair there is some things that you are lacking. lets see, on the first part before the shocking mystery reveal the comedy was great, but it looks lime after that it stops, make sure to continue it and not quiting halfway, just like what you did on characters, even if they are side characters make the readers felt as if they are alive and thinking properly, have a goal, the antagonist of this story doesnt have that. oh right unneseccary deaths lol, I can't thats a big zero for me aside from your character disregarding later on whats the difference between both of them anw. lastly chapter chopping, like at the end of this chapter where you expect something happens and then new scene, like what? **. be more creative, open minded, learn r18 stuffs I was kinda expecting some detail atleast when they know/admit their feelings for each other, that makes it more good. yeah right a tsundere character really and in the end it felt like a force that they like each other? anw. good job and good luck for your future prospectives as for the readers, decide on your own after reading my post I can atleast say that you wont regret reading this :)
Membuka SPOILER Reincarnation books are like one of my favorite books and this book is just amazing.It has been like one of my favorite book and to top all of it, it’s completed too!I spent 2 whole days just reading this book and it was soo cute.
This book is very addicting, so girls get you coins ready because you cannot go to sleep once you start this! This is not a drill people, this book is the bomb!
Let me be shameless and leave a review on this novel! • The female lead in this novel wants to live the most, and her determination to live will seen be all throughout the novel. • The Male Lead is the Villain to the novel, who is involved with the underworld according to the novel, and therefore, the female lead is careful of him in the beginning because she is afraid he will be killing her. • However, once she learns that he won't harm her, she will be showing her real self to him. Anyways, I hope you can read up to the 76th chapter at least (The first sixty chapters are small) before judging! Thank you very much for reading this <3