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Maganda po yung story kaso sa typos lang po talaga nagkulng haha, sabi nga po nila perfect is boring so maganda po basahin kase po kahit na may typos ay naiintindihan pa rin yung flow ng story tsaka nakakaexcite basahin lalo na yung part na nagkita si shan at veon at yung part na umlis na sila sa school nila ^ ^
Shameless review of the author. Tagalog version of ATS, but as I edited and translated it to English, I changed most parts to make it more “realistic” since I created this story when I was in high school. Other than that, this story is currently being translated and edited by my friend so it won’t be so conyo. 😂 I’d like to leave an in-depth review, but I already left one in my English version. Do check it out, Army of True Salvation (English), along with my other stories, The Arcane Book (this is free) and my other contracted works: 1. The Soul Eater’s Possession 2. Accidental Harem: Let’s Kiss Again!
Re-reading this story, can't get over with it. ♥️♥️♥️ I miss reading this story been inactive here but I'm back. 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
I don't understand this book but i have read the english one and i liked that so i'm going to give 5 star. 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
maganda Ang kwento pero Alam ko may pagkajeje Ito noon high school pa so ate Ngayon na inedit Niya ibang parts its good! tho my typo errors pero ok lang Ganda parin kwento
Yes, this is the cringe-worthy story you made back when you were in high school with the TagLish popularity in stories. Will give 4 in everything except update stability because this story is finished and you only posted what you wrote when you were younger. I am expecting more from your newly written English stories.
Way to go, Amara. I'd say, keep up with the work and keep up some more. ☺. It's wonderful to realize I personally know an author. 😂. Anyways! I like "Sheloah". It's a unique name. 👏👏👏💕💕
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3 Habits of a Healthy Heart: Psalm 119: 112-116 1. Know WHAT to HATE -we know what are the things that we love but we should also know the things that we must hate. Hate sin. Hate fears, worries & anxiety Hate unforgivess & hatred Hate the things that will make draw you apart from God 2. Know WHERE to HIDE -in difficult times we all have a hiding place where we can be comforted. Choose to Hide in God's presence through His Word. 3. Know HOW to HOPE -holding God's Word gives us hope that God never fails to fulfill what He has promised in our lives. God's time is always perfect. When God says Yes, it will always be Yes! Word for tonight ha Lifegroup. God bless
3 Habits of a Healthy Heart: Psalm 119: 112-116 1. Know WHAT to HATE -we know what are the things that we love but we should also know the things that we must hate. Hate sin. Hate fears, worries & anxiety Hate unforgivess & hatred Hate the things that will make draw you apart from God 2. Know WHERE to HIDE -in difficult times we all have a hiding place where we can be comforted. Choose to Hide in God's presence through His Word. 3. Know HOW to HOPE -holding God's Word gives us hope that God never fails to fulfill what He has promised in our lives. God's time is always perfect. When God says Yes, it will always be Yes! Word for tonight ha Lifegroup. God bless
🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩 One of the best zombie story thatI read, I'm happy that I can read it over and over again. One of my recommended story.
Maganda po yung story kaso sa typos lang po talaga nagkulng haha, sabi nga po nila perfect is boring so maganda po basahin kase po kahit na may typos ay naiintindihan pa rin yung flow ng story tsaka nakakaexcite basahin lalo na yung part na nagkita si shan at veon at yung part na umlis na sila sa school nila ^ ^
Shameless review of the author. Tagalog version of ATS, but as I edited and translated it to English, I changed most parts to make it more “realistic” since I created this story when I was in high school. Other than that, this story is currently being translated and edited by my friend so it won’t be so conyo. 😂 I’d like to leave an in-depth review, but I already left one in my English version. Do check it out, Army of True Salvation (English), along with my other stories, The Arcane Book (this is free) and my other contracted works: 1. The Soul Eater’s Possession 2. Accidental Harem: Let’s Kiss Again!
Re-reading this story, can't get over with it. ♥️♥️♥️ I miss reading this story been inactive here but I'm back. 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
I don't understand this book but i have read the english one and i liked that so i'm going to give 5 star. 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
maganda Ang kwento pero Alam ko may pagkajeje Ito noon high school pa so ate Ngayon na inedit Niya ibang parts its good! tho my typo errors pero ok lang Ganda parin kwento
Yes, this is the cringe-worthy story you made back when you were in high school with the TagLish popularity in stories. Will give 4 in everything except update stability because this story is finished and you only posted what you wrote when you were younger. I am expecting more from your newly written English stories.
Way to go, Amara. I'd say, keep up with the work and keep up some more. ☺. It's wonderful to realize I personally know an author. 😂. Anyways! I like "Sheloah". It's a unique name. 👏👏👏💕💕
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3 Habits of a Healthy Heart: Psalm 119: 112-116 1. Know WHAT to HATE -we know what are the things that we love but we should also know the things that we must hate. Hate sin. Hate fears, worries & anxiety Hate unforgivess & hatred Hate the things that will make draw you apart from God 2. Know WHERE to HIDE -in difficult times we all have a hiding place where we can be comforted. Choose to Hide in God's presence through His Word. 3. Know HOW to HOPE -holding God's Word gives us hope that God never fails to fulfill what He has promised in our lives. God's time is always perfect. When God says Yes, it will always be Yes! Word for tonight ha Lifegroup. God bless
3 Habits of a Healthy Heart: Psalm 119: 112-116 1. Know WHAT to HATE -we know what are the things that we love but we should also know the things that we must hate. Hate sin. Hate fears, worries & anxiety Hate unforgivess & hatred Hate the things that will make draw you apart from God 2. Know WHERE to HIDE -in difficult times we all have a hiding place where we can be comforted. Choose to Hide in God's presence through His Word. 3. Know HOW to HOPE -holding God's Word gives us hope that God never fails to fulfill what He has promised in our lives. God's time is always perfect. When God says Yes, it will always be Yes! Word for tonight ha Lifegroup. God bless
🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩 One of the best zombie story thatI read, I'm happy that I can read it over and over again. One of my recommended story.