Reviews of Becoming Immortal by SpareTire - Webnovel

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Oleg_Nikitin

Ново, свежо и необычно. С нетерпением жду продолжения истории. Спасибо за полученное удовольствие и желаю автору творческих успехов и удачи в жизни.

12mth
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Jorge_S

I think this story is abandoned, otherwise my grade would be much higher. It's a shame I was very interested and it was a very original approach to the saga.

1yr
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Joy_of_Journaling

love the story and character development wish it wasn't dropped

1yr
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SontheBrazil2021

Simplesmente incrível História interessante muito bem trabalhada personagem com ótimo desenvolvimento plano de fundo muito bom para informações importantes do contexto do mundo foram acrescentadas. Ótimo crescimento do personagem a transmissão adaptação treinamento os avanços na história passagem de tempo tudo feito com fluidez. Infelizmente atualização não pode mais ser feita mas é assim uma história muito interessante seria ótimo poder ler livro completo.

2yr
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Alecia_Howe

Just as I get hooked, there hasnt been an update in a year it seems. Dont read if you get frustrated with unfinished stories And apparently you cant post a review if its not long enough so thats why im continuing

3yr
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Nightmare_Monarch

I’m literally disappointed fr!!! Why would you dropped this fanfic????? This is literally gold but I’m gonna rate it 3 since it’ll only left me disappointed when I got so hype that it’s acc bronze age and twilight at the same time like fr that’s literally a good start but you had to dropped it.

4yr
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SrLao
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me gusta, por favor no dejes morir este fanfic 🙏___________________________________________________________________________________________

4yr
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ReMormius

Довольно интересно. Жду новы главы. ♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣

4yr
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Shirofortuna

Love the story, characters and the pace. The author is good at using an existing world, and make it his own. Hope the story will be updated soon.

4yr
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4yr
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SketchyScotch

This was a good novel but what i hate is that first of all it was dropped an sometimes it had some of the typical weird logic and thinking of the main character that you can see in webnovel as most of them do because 1st of all they dont have a lot of experience in writing 2.english is not their main language which is also met in this novel.So if you want to then read it but i don't really recommend it as its 13 chapters long and it leaves you dissapointed.

4yr
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voidgod

You should continue writing this story. It's really good and has potential. You should continue writing this story. It's really good and has potential.

4yr
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Gmilt3

It really draws me in and keeps me guessing I like how rounded the main character seems to be although strangely calm, methodical and very rational even when he is panicking or in a rage

4yr
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Kaxhi13

so anyone know any twilight fic like this? it's hard to find any. uhmm, author, you gonna continue this?//.........................................

4yr
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DragonSorceress

Awesome story, love it! Please keep writing! 😁 👍 😁 👍 😁 👍 😁 👍 😁 👍 😁 👍 😁 👍 😁 👍 I can't wait to read what he does to the fake Minos.

4yr
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usernanne

A hidden gem. I just wish the story was continued. .........................................................................................

4yr
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POIX
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I hope to god the author doesn’t drop this, because honestly in my opinion this story is ducking amazing and I would be pissed if the author dropped this.

4yr
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4yr
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Cpsimp111

I love this story one of the best books on this website and would have a 5 star rating if the author would continue this story I want to know the conclusion.

4yr
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Malefic

I love it ,its so interesting and story develops quickly. This is first story about vampires of that high quality. It is original,you wouldn't feel that you are reading fanfiction.

4yr
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Oleg_Nikitin

Ново, свежо и необычно. С нетерпением жду продолжения истории. Спасибо за полученное удовольствие и желаю автору творческих успехов и удачи в жизни.

12mth
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Jorge_S

I think this story is abandoned, otherwise my grade would be much higher. It's a shame I was very interested and it was a very original approach to the saga.

1yr
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Joy_of_Journaling

love the story and character development wish it wasn't dropped

1yr
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SontheBrazil2021

Simplesmente incrível História interessante muito bem trabalhada personagem com ótimo desenvolvimento plano de fundo muito bom para informações importantes do contexto do mundo foram acrescentadas. Ótimo crescimento do personagem a transmissão adaptação treinamento os avanços na história passagem de tempo tudo feito com fluidez. Infelizmente atualização não pode mais ser feita mas é assim uma história muito interessante seria ótimo poder ler livro completo.

2yr
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Alecia_Howe

Just as I get hooked, there hasnt been an update in a year it seems. Dont read if you get frustrated with unfinished stories And apparently you cant post a review if its not long enough so thats why im continuing

3yr
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Nightmare_Monarch

I’m literally disappointed fr!!! Why would you dropped this fanfic????? This is literally gold but I’m gonna rate it 3 since it’ll only left me disappointed when I got so hype that it’s acc bronze age and twilight at the same time like fr that’s literally a good start but you had to dropped it.

4yr
Lihat 0 balasan
SrLao
LV 11 Badge

me gusta, por favor no dejes morir este fanfic 🙏___________________________________________________________________________________________

4yr
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ReMormius

Довольно интересно. Жду новы главы. ♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣♥ ❤ ღ ❦ ❥❣

4yr
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Shirofortuna

Love the story, characters and the pace. The author is good at using an existing world, and make it his own. Hope the story will be updated soon.

4yr
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4yr
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SketchyScotch

This was a good novel but what i hate is that first of all it was dropped an sometimes it had some of the typical weird logic and thinking of the main character that you can see in webnovel as most of them do because 1st of all they dont have a lot of experience in writing 2.english is not their main language which is also met in this novel.So if you want to then read it but i don't really recommend it as its 13 chapters long and it leaves you dissapointed.

4yr
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voidgod

You should continue writing this story. It's really good and has potential. You should continue writing this story. It's really good and has potential.

4yr
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Gmilt3

It really draws me in and keeps me guessing I like how rounded the main character seems to be although strangely calm, methodical and very rational even when he is panicking or in a rage

4yr
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Kaxhi13

so anyone know any twilight fic like this? it's hard to find any. uhmm, author, you gonna continue this?//.........................................

4yr
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DragonSorceress

Awesome story, love it! Please keep writing! 😁 👍 😁 👍 😁 👍 😁 👍 😁 👍 😁 👍 😁 👍 😁 👍 I can't wait to read what he does to the fake Minos.

4yr
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usernanne

A hidden gem. I just wish the story was continued. .........................................................................................

4yr
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POIX
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I hope to god the author doesn’t drop this, because honestly in my opinion this story is ducking amazing and I would be pissed if the author dropped this.

4yr
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SpackRox

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4yr
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Cpsimp111

I love this story one of the best books on this website and would have a 5 star rating if the author would continue this story I want to know the conclusion.

4yr
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Malefic

I love it ,its so interesting and story develops quickly. This is first story about vampires of that high quality. It is original,you wouldn't feel that you are reading fanfiction.

4yr
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