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The formatting of this is absolute garbage. This a perfect example of go home and do it again. The story? It might be nice. I couldn't get past the script posing as a first chapter.
No one talks about the problems of this fanfic? It really is disappointing overall. The dialogues are forced and unnatural, the MC is exaggeratedly weak, he has 5 times more strength, speed and durability than a normal human and yet he is weak and powerless in most fights and the author does not know that the points received for leveling up they are for leveling up stats and perks, I really doubt he played Fallout seriously because apparently he has selective memory and forgets moderately important events and important villains, at some point I thought he was a transmigrator without deep knowledge about Fallout and was just a casual player too distracted and without knowledge about the plot of Fallout. His comrades are constantly dying and he loses troops/weaponry and yet he remains passive doing nothing more than saying a couple of sentences alluding to the subject and then forgetting and doing something else. In conclusion this fanfic is the bottom of mediocrity. PS: It is extremely annoying to read that MC has 2 names. Google has a function to search for words, use it, it's free
This reads like a newbie theater script, and i would know im gay. No but seriously if the author redid all the dialogue so it can be read properly this would be one of the better falloutfics
it's a good slow build but spend up at times, then good hooks and anxiety of next thing. it needs a new update so it can add other facts missing
Great novel so far, I really hope that you will continue this story and not drop it. There are some grammatical errors but no show stoppers. You have an interesting story that makes you want to continue reading. I wont say much on world building as fan fictions tend to have this in the bag but your added additions do help make it unique which is why that gets 5 stars. Your characters are not 2 dimensional and reasonably developed. Fallout fan fics are to rare to let this good one drop off so please keep up the good work.
A clean mind makes a good novel i thank you for not dropping it like many others. I`m not an expert at grammar and other thing so i give 5 cuz i like your fantasy with all it errors if any.
A really good Fallout fan-fiction, I'm really interested to see what happens with his father, and his mother's secrets. The author is good at writing emotion into his characters, and making sure they are human.
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Is it me forgetting or aren't you supposed to get perk points every time you level up.but he's only gotten 1 in 9 level ups.I know he's started of 5 times stronger then human Which I still don't understand becouse before that he was knocked out by a fucking toaster and bleeding to death.**** his own mother is more badass then the mc himself. The pip boy is there to make him stronger and build a beter world,but all he's done with it is strengthin his clothes and build things.no levelling up stats to be become stronger because, not being able to save your mother because of a fucking toster is not a wake up call enough .whats most sad about it is that I actually like the second mc ( grit jones)more then the main own charachter (spector)that you've created.
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Awesome story we got here.... don't mind if I. ..just. ... read it forever? Do you? MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA MUEHEHEHEHEHE *cough* *cough* ... Was that a fly? Why are there flies in here?
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Well the fanfiction is totally worth reading, Fallout fanfic is quite rare on this website even more a good one. Overall I think the author has pretty interesting ideas for both of his fanfiction. Sadly his writing style on the other fanfic is quite hard to read, because I would really enjoy reading it,just for the idea he had in mind. On the fallout fanfic his writing makes great improvements which makes it really fun to read. So All in all give this author a chance and time to improve. Keep it up author!!!
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This is an Extremely Great Fanfiction. Best Fallout Fanfiction so far. I can see that this Fiction can become top 5 material. The pace of developing the story is very great. The creativity the author has put into this clearly shows their dedication. 100% Wonderful.
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great novel im looking forward to what's going to happen ..............................................................................................
Theirs never enough fallout fanfics, I love this novel I cant wait to see what he does in the fallout world. I also hope he finds his father for revenge and starts becoming op af but at the same time I want him to work his way up like most raiders. I also hope he can start to make new things for instance if the institute can make teleport technology why cant they get rid of radiation or teleport it into space or somethin it makes no sense that no1 was able to figure it out after over 200 years tbh. I also dont like the fact that the Chinese and other countries dont have a lot of story in the game so I hope the author makes some creative ideas for the rest of the world maybe he can conquer the world or the universe because of those damn alien probes lol.
one of my long time favs came back after a while will always love this novel hope someday it's reworked or more chapters added
The formatting of this is absolute garbage. This a perfect example of go home and do it again. The story? It might be nice. I couldn't get past the script posing as a first chapter.
No one talks about the problems of this fanfic? It really is disappointing overall. The dialogues are forced and unnatural, the MC is exaggeratedly weak, he has 5 times more strength, speed and durability than a normal human and yet he is weak and powerless in most fights and the author does not know that the points received for leveling up they are for leveling up stats and perks, I really doubt he played Fallout seriously because apparently he has selective memory and forgets moderately important events and important villains, at some point I thought he was a transmigrator without deep knowledge about Fallout and was just a casual player too distracted and without knowledge about the plot of Fallout. His comrades are constantly dying and he loses troops/weaponry and yet he remains passive doing nothing more than saying a couple of sentences alluding to the subject and then forgetting and doing something else. In conclusion this fanfic is the bottom of mediocrity. PS: It is extremely annoying to read that MC has 2 names. Google has a function to search for words, use it, it's free
This reads like a newbie theater script, and i would know im gay. No but seriously if the author redid all the dialogue so it can be read properly this would be one of the better falloutfics
it's a good slow build but spend up at times, then good hooks and anxiety of next thing. it needs a new update so it can add other facts missing
Great novel so far, I really hope that you will continue this story and not drop it. There are some grammatical errors but no show stoppers. You have an interesting story that makes you want to continue reading. I wont say much on world building as fan fictions tend to have this in the bag but your added additions do help make it unique which is why that gets 5 stars. Your characters are not 2 dimensional and reasonably developed. Fallout fan fics are to rare to let this good one drop off so please keep up the good work.
A clean mind makes a good novel i thank you for not dropping it like many others. I`m not an expert at grammar and other thing so i give 5 cuz i like your fantasy with all it errors if any.
A really good Fallout fan-fiction, I'm really interested to see what happens with his father, and his mother's secrets. The author is good at writing emotion into his characters, and making sure they are human.
Membuka SPOILER Is it me forgetting or aren't you supposed to get perk points every time you level up.but he's only gotten 1 in 9 level ups.I know he's started of 5 times stronger then human Which I still don't understand becouse before that he was knocked out by a fucking toaster and bleeding to death.**** his own mother is more badass then the mc himself. The pip boy is there to make him stronger and build a beter world,but all he's done with it is strengthin his clothes and build things.no levelling up stats to be become stronger because, not being able to save your mother because of a fucking toster is not a wake up call enough .whats most sad about it is that I actually like the second mc ( grit jones)more then the main own charachter (spector)that you've created.
very good !!expexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexp
ttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttthhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnkkkkkkkkkkkkkk yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyoooooooooooooooouuuuuuuuuuuuuu
Just counteracting HugAttack's spam reviews. 140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140
Awesome story we got here.... don't mind if I. ..just. ... read it forever? Do you? MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA MUEHEHEHEHEHE *cough* *cough* ... Was that a fly? Why are there flies in here?
Awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome
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Well the fanfiction is totally worth reading, Fallout fanfic is quite rare on this website even more a good one. Overall I think the author has pretty interesting ideas for both of his fanfiction. Sadly his writing style on the other fanfic is quite hard to read, because I would really enjoy reading it,just for the idea he had in mind. On the fallout fanfic his writing makes great improvements which makes it really fun to read. So All in all give this author a chance and time to improve. Keep it up author!!!
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This is an Extremely Great Fanfiction. Best Fallout Fanfiction so far. I can see that this Fiction can become top 5 material. The pace of developing the story is very great. The creativity the author has put into this clearly shows their dedication. 100% Wonderful.
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!MORE
Membuka SPOILER great novel im looking forward to what's going to happen ..............................................................................................
Theirs never enough fallout fanfics, I love this novel I cant wait to see what he does in the fallout world. I also hope he finds his father for revenge and starts becoming op af but at the same time I want him to work his way up like most raiders. I also hope he can start to make new things for instance if the institute can make teleport technology why cant they get rid of radiation or teleport it into space or somethin it makes no sense that no1 was able to figure it out after over 200 years tbh. I also dont like the fact that the Chinese and other countries dont have a lot of story in the game so I hope the author makes some creative ideas for the rest of the world maybe he can conquer the world or the universe because of those damn alien probes lol.
one of my long time favs came back after a while will always love this novel hope someday it's reworked or more chapters added