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This Novel is very good. There is good plot progression and the idea itself is awesome. The Mc is NOT retarted. The grammer has little to no issues (Only some typos). And the First world is INUYASHA! THROWBACKKKK~ Anyway, give this a go. Its very good. The only downside is that the Author releases big chs after every 2-5 days instead of constant small chapters.
the writing is legible, the story has no sense the MC is a lie he stays there only for decoration and the only mutant for him not to be the op is his own choice, and the chapters are just slow and boring monologues explaining why the MC being a beta the writer even tries to make it look cool but it’s so lame that it makes you angry.
What will happen when he visit nurarihyon no mago world? Will he meet another him? Meet nurarihyon in its prime? Meet rikuo in story timeline? So many doubt..
I have read the chapters and I must say that your story has potential but with regard to the worlds where the protagonist will travel will be limited to yokai-themed anime, because otherwise it would look ridiculous for him to do his night parade of the 100 demons with anything other than yokai There are many yokai-themed animes such as Ao no exorcist natsume yuujinchou Inari kon kon Gingitsune Dororo These and a few more that I haven't mentioned.
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Overall I love the novel the grammar is great the story is great but the overall length of a chapter is still too low for me and the updates are not that constant hope u make the chapters more lengthy and update more regularly
OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,AND SO GOOD,GOod,GOOD,GOOD.More chaps.pls
World travel...Stupid OP MC....but so far not much story to judge granted only 3 chps but theres no pazzaz? like something to make it unique? it kinda cliche in the sense that MC relives with wishes though the MC is SI-nura rihan here...And...well it is in inuyasha..[sadly never watched it....so author man...provide some info on the relevant ****].........keep MC smart and OP...dont make him a perverted idiot.....add some romance and fluff but pls build it...also pls make MC travel to worlds before cannon.......if harem keep it small.....either way goodluck and goodshow?
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I can appreciate the fact that you didn’t choose one of the more common worlds to start off in inuyasha is not a fanfic world that I see used a lot just for that alone I’ll be reading 😍😍😍
So far so good 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😚😄
A very good story that seems to have been abandoned by the author who unfortunately .................................................................................... .............................................................................................................................................................................. .............................................................................................................................................................................. .............................................................................................................................................................................. .............................................................................................................................................................................. .............................................................................................................................................................................. ..............................................................................................................................................................................
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great novel .........................................................................................................................................................................................Exp............................................................Exp..............................
Membuka SPOILER This Novel is very good. There is good plot progression and the idea itself is awesome. The Mc is NOT retarted. The grammer has little to no issues (Only some typos). And the First world is INUYASHA! THROWBACKKKK~ Anyway, give this a go. Its very good. The only downside is that the Author releases big chs after every 2-5 days instead of constant small chapters.
the writing is legible, the story has no sense the MC is a lie he stays there only for decoration and the only mutant for him not to be the op is his own choice, and the chapters are just slow and boring monologues explaining why the MC being a beta the writer even tries to make it look cool but it’s so lame that it makes you angry.
What will happen when he visit nurarihyon no mago world? Will he meet another him? Meet nurarihyon in its prime? Meet rikuo in story timeline? So many doubt..
I have read the chapters and I must say that your story has potential but with regard to the worlds where the protagonist will travel will be limited to yokai-themed anime, because otherwise it would look ridiculous for him to do his night parade of the 100 demons with anything other than yokai There are many yokai-themed animes such as Ao no exorcist natsume yuujinchou Inari kon kon Gingitsune Dororo These and a few more that I haven't mentioned.
Membuka SPOILER Overall I love the novel the grammar is great the story is great but the overall length of a chapter is still too low for me and the updates are not that constant hope u make the chapters more lengthy and update more regularly
OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,AND SO GOOD,GOod,GOOD,GOOD.More chaps.pls
World travel...Stupid OP MC....but so far not much story to judge granted only 3 chps but theres no pazzaz? like something to make it unique? it kinda cliche in the sense that MC relives with wishes though the MC is SI-nura rihan here...And...well it is in inuyasha..[sadly never watched it....so author man...provide some info on the relevant ****].........keep MC smart and OP...dont make him a perverted idiot.....add some romance and fluff but pls build it...also pls make MC travel to worlds before cannon.......if harem keep it small.....either way goodluck and goodshow?
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I can appreciate the fact that you didn’t choose one of the more common worlds to start off in inuyasha is not a fanfic world that I see used a lot just for that alone I’ll be reading 😍😍😍
So far so good 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😚😄
A very good story that seems to have been abandoned by the author who unfortunately .................................................................................... .............................................................................................................................................................................. .............................................................................................................................................................................. .............................................................................................................................................................................. .............................................................................................................................................................................. .............................................................................................................................................................................. ..............................................................................................................................................................................
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