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Killerpanda124

Love the story it gets better and better

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AmitKRavi

very nice to read.. rather, read even more on pat'n a few times as well

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TheChaosdragon

It started out really good but I looked at it because of the #overpowered tang and kisuke being mc He just stopped growing in power with the excuse that kisuke is more a scientist and wins fights mostly by outsmarting his opponent Yeah right then take the op tag off He is literally one of the weakest in the main cast from the first time he went to danmachi till chapter 1000+ as far as I have read and he isn’t getting any power ups at all There are just mentions of power ups but it feels like he is getting weaker like bruh this is a huge waste of time

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Shashbear

Holy Hell is this one of the most peakest fanfics I have ever read. Each main antag is threatening and reading about DxD characters reacting to otherworldly abilities and vice versa gets me giddy.

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Chris_Goldstein

it,s a great fanfic πŸ‘ πŸ‘Œ but the power system or power scalin is a bit off, but other than that, is he going to a different anime again like Naruto or a different one

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_ReaderPassingBy_

CURRENT READING: Chapter 1293 OVERALL RATING: 4-4.5 stars SHORT REVIEW: Out of all Fanfics and maybe even in web novels/light novels, this is one of the best if not, one of the good/better ones when it comes in the following genre: Action, Slice of Life, Fantasy/Magic and Romantic Subplot. It can be considered a masterpiece if it gets completed and has a good/perfect ending. FOR THE LONG REVIEW: WRITING QUALITY: It is great, there were few errors, grammar is good and what's great is that the author describes each character and place very descriptively which makes it easy to imagine each of them (Though you can search in google for images since it's a fanfic). Note: My grammar and spelling is not good so bear with it if you ever read this review (ToT). Also I am currently writing this in my phone which adds to it. STORY DEVELOPMENT: It is an enjoyable read with a very well-balanced plot. The author was good in balancing the Main Plot and the Non-main (slice of life portion). It is good because it has a non serious side where there interactions between each characters that builds up the relationship may it be in the romance part, or just being allies/friends.The build up for the another world(other stories) was also good which I first did not like, but as the story goes ,it just makes sense and start to click then I started to enjoy it. Also, It was good that it still follows with the original plot of the main source of the fanfic (DxD and Danmachi) and that the original mcs in those story (issei and bell) are still relevant (allies of the fanfic mc) in this fanfic and are not being discarded. It may not be obvious but there is a literal character development for each characters in the story. Though it may differ to others, but for me I felt that each character are fleshed out or you can say have real characters. One downside of this fanfic though is that some characters are being left out but I understand why. If you think about it, there are too many characters in both DxD universe, much less in Danmachi universe which makes it hard to focus on each one of them. Next for romance. I think that it is a matter of preferences if you guys like pure romance or harem but for me I'm all in for either of the two (This story is harem btw). What I like in it, although it is a harem is that there was enough build up in the relationship and not just casually adding members in the list which is what I like. Additionally, I also like that there is a balance in the relation ship between each members and also the fact that they are not just there for the sake adding to the list in the harem. What I mean is that, the girls are not 'flower vases' but has a role in the story. I like that they are not being cast aside just as I said and that they are not the damsel in distress type because they get their own power up later on. PS1: there are currently 9-10 confirmed members for the harem. I know that there are many, but the interactions/relationships between MC-girls, and Girls-girls are very good which balances it out. PS2: I would also like to add that the comedic undertone in the story was good although sometimes overused but it is still good in my opinion. Next is power level. I like the fact that the MC is not OP, yes he is one of the top most powerful in the story but I like that it is not the type of "One shot one kill" power. I know that people like very OP characters, but it gets very boring because it makes the plot predictable and that's why I like the MC's power which we can say is in the "Strong to stronger" type. Just as the author said, the MC uses strategies and his smarts to fight which I think is good and not just all brawns. Because if you think about it, the world they are in is the type where there are factions and politics are prominent along with being powerful, we cannot just expect that everyone is dumb and weak and the MC is smart and strong. For me, what makes a battle/strategy type story good is that there are adverseries for the MC to overcome and strategize carefully and not just "oh a straight path to success" type of story. This is why I like that the MC of this fanfics both has the brawns and brains and that the enemies also utilizes the same as well. PS3: There are original characters and settings(correct me if I am wrong) that were made by the author and this addition was good because it progresses the story and also fill in the gaps of the story that the original source have. PS4: I don't know if it was just me but there are some parts where it feels kind of like those chinese novels (hahaha) because of some way the characters act. Also maybe it is because of the fact that there are over 1000 chapters (lol , no sarcasm intended) which I only find in chinese novels(Xianxia specifically) and maybe some in korean novels. These parts were also good and also not overused which was a good thing :) PS5: Lastly, some may not like that there are settings that are not part of the original storyline but guyssss this is a fanfic so it is normal for it to deviate or differ. One kf the things you may find different is our MC's (Kisuke Urahara) personality, yes it is indeed slightly or maybe really different but I think it was a good one because it became good when the character development kicks in. Just think of this story as well as the characters as a Alternative Universe where different/multiple What if's are woven together. Just read it and do not judge in the early chapters, maybe read until 100-200 chapters or so before you judge. CHARACTER DESIGN: For character designs... No comment really, as it is a fanfic of stories mainly DxD, Danmachi and Bleach (as of now) and they are not the Author's OG character. However, as I said, there are original characters made by author (I think?) and there are times when MC and co. uses disguise and I think that the character design was good. What I like is that, although there is an original source for the characters of the OG source, I still appreciate that the writer reminds us of what they look like from time to time. I also like that the descriptive or the way the author describes each character is not overly exaggerated. UPDATING STABILITY: For here... Idk because I just binge read this a week ago, so I do not know the frequence of updates. Looking at the updates date, I see that it was consistent up until now. WORLD BACKGROUND: It is a fanfic so we know and cannot judge the author for it. However, I can comment that the concept of another world or multiverse in the story is good. I also like that the the World background for Danmachi was altered especially for the power level of the gods to match of DxD. I also liked the tweaks in the original story or background because it made everyting fit together almost perfectly. PS6: I appreciate the editors of the fanfic and also find it entertaining the section where Author/Writer and Editors interact

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surya_wijaya

truly a masterpiece if you ignore some weird grammar and incomplete sentences. i can feel urahara vibe from this story and the jokes are killing me

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Arthanis_wxyz

Esta genial la historia lo ΓΊnico que no me gusta es que como se fue a la mierda el balance del poder y mΓ‘s con todos esos conceptos que son difΓ­ciles de comprender

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ShriNG

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Holy_Hunter

What is L + ratio? L + ratio is used as a mocking insult on social media, often in reply to a post or opinion considered particularly bad. The letter L is used as a slang term for loss (as in the opposite of win). The word ratio is used in its social media sense referring to a situation in which a post has a high proportion of replies compared to likes or reposts, which usually indicates a barrage of negative replies criticizing and often mocking the post.

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Anime_Sama_8317

I’m at chapter 324 right now, I really like this so far besides errors in writing but overall I enjoyed it so far

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MarinXGrayfia

dxd world and not harem is a big crime. if you can't make harem might as well change it to others world

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PUERKO_Junior

Me gusta, es muy bueno tiene buena historia lo ΓΊnico que no me gusta es como avanza la historia un poco lenta pero sigue siento entretenido y divertido

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GupGodLicker

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Gabriel_Cuevas_1898

TenΓ­a mucho potencial pero Harem? EnseriΓ³ deja mucho que desear Esperaba mΓ‘s del autor no se por que tienen una obsesiΓ³n con el Harem Es realmente aburrido siempre van por el mismo camino que convierte la diversiΓ³n a lo genΓ©rico

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felix_juarez

me encanta urahara, me encanta como desarrollaste la historia de los personajes y el mundo 😎

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Flash_YT

Is this a harem story or not bc I can’t tell

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Daoist007877

i started re reading this again because i forgot what chapter i was on. how manny are in his harem/ and who are they also will he travel to other worlds

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prof_Nuclear

( coughing) . . . This is a shameless advertising for my own book . Go check it out . My own spin of into the infinity genre

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red1reaper

The story is very good overall the only drop in quality are the parts in Orario, man are the Orario segments boring... except for the character development of the girls it feels like filler and that character development does not justify the hundreds upon hundreds of chapters spent in the Danmachi world. The segments with DxD are good, the very original segment about medusa was very good, the most recent segment in the Bleach world is good, the segments about the ExE are super good... But the segments in danmachi are just bad, it is not even danmachi fault, it is just that the danmachi world is not a very interesting world to have Kisuke in, the only interesting thing that happens is the characterization of some of the girls but they could have gotten that characterization in a place that was more interesting

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MalleShi

Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good.

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The_flame

it's an amazing story, but after the dxd chapters the mc become more of a side character while showing up as the focus for every few 200 chapters later on because it more focused on his lovers level ups and they become the main focus in the story later

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Gomuningen

After almost 1200 chapters both Kisuke and Yoroichi don’t really have any major power up and still haven’t reached transcendence, just some random mentions of new useful power systems. The MC goes to Orario but still the author NERFed the whole world’s power system saying that it makes poeople too dependent on gods etc. Instead of taking it as an opportunity to allow MC to power up by going through the levels. Author seems pathalogically averse to powering up the MC

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Rohit_Yadav_5054

It's one of the best fanfictions I have read

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red1reaper

This story is awesome, while the part at orario was a bit dull, everything else is amazing.

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jhersen

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jhersen

I liked the story πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜‚πŸ˜πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜ πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

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John_Rex_98

I'm giving it 5stars before reading, because it's dxd x bleach...... let's see

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High_Marx2

I have enjoyed it so far im only waiting for more chapters to be released

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Professor_Genki

i liked It before It turned into a harem, because i can't see the reason some girls are a part of it, i do not understand why everyone was pushing him to accept sona's feelings, i mean she likes him, he did not want It, she cried, then everyone acts like he HAS to accept her. then there are the others, i can understand Koneko, but not that other girl who became a shinigami. Akeno is freaky so she probably would end up a part of it bit even then she ended up causing more problems, kuroka is related to koneko so It makes a bit of sense.What i want to say is that i did not like how the decision of entering the "harem" is made by only one side of the "relationship" or by other members of the harem like they do not need to see how the mc feels.

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Killerpanda124

Love the story it gets better and better

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AmitKRavi

very nice to read.. rather, read even more on pat'n a few times as well

1mth
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TheChaosdragon

It started out really good but I looked at it because of the #overpowered tang and kisuke being mc He just stopped growing in power with the excuse that kisuke is more a scientist and wins fights mostly by outsmarting his opponent Yeah right then take the op tag off He is literally one of the weakest in the main cast from the first time he went to danmachi till chapter 1000+ as far as I have read and he isn’t getting any power ups at all There are just mentions of power ups but it feels like he is getting weaker like bruh this is a huge waste of time

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Shashbear

Holy Hell is this one of the most peakest fanfics I have ever read. Each main antag is threatening and reading about DxD characters reacting to otherworldly abilities and vice versa gets me giddy.

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Chris_Goldstein

it,s a great fanfic πŸ‘ πŸ‘Œ but the power system or power scalin is a bit off, but other than that, is he going to a different anime again like Naruto or a different one

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_ReaderPassingBy_

CURRENT READING: Chapter 1293 OVERALL RATING: 4-4.5 stars SHORT REVIEW: Out of all Fanfics and maybe even in web novels/light novels, this is one of the best if not, one of the good/better ones when it comes in the following genre: Action, Slice of Life, Fantasy/Magic and Romantic Subplot. It can be considered a masterpiece if it gets completed and has a good/perfect ending. FOR THE LONG REVIEW: WRITING QUALITY: It is great, there were few errors, grammar is good and what's great is that the author describes each character and place very descriptively which makes it easy to imagine each of them (Though you can search in google for images since it's a fanfic). Note: My grammar and spelling is not good so bear with it if you ever read this review (ToT). Also I am currently writing this in my phone which adds to it. STORY DEVELOPMENT: It is an enjoyable read with a very well-balanced plot. The author was good in balancing the Main Plot and the Non-main (slice of life portion). It is good because it has a non serious side where there interactions between each characters that builds up the relationship may it be in the romance part, or just being allies/friends.The build up for the another world(other stories) was also good which I first did not like, but as the story goes ,it just makes sense and start to click then I started to enjoy it. Also, It was good that it still follows with the original plot of the main source of the fanfic (DxD and Danmachi) and that the original mcs in those story (issei and bell) are still relevant (allies of the fanfic mc) in this fanfic and are not being discarded. It may not be obvious but there is a literal character development for each characters in the story. Though it may differ to others, but for me I felt that each character are fleshed out or you can say have real characters. One downside of this fanfic though is that some characters are being left out but I understand why. If you think about it, there are too many characters in both DxD universe, much less in Danmachi universe which makes it hard to focus on each one of them. Next for romance. I think that it is a matter of preferences if you guys like pure romance or harem but for me I'm all in for either of the two (This story is harem btw). What I like in it, although it is a harem is that there was enough build up in the relationship and not just casually adding members in the list which is what I like. Additionally, I also like that there is a balance in the relation ship between each members and also the fact that they are not just there for the sake adding to the list in the harem. What I mean is that, the girls are not 'flower vases' but has a role in the story. I like that they are not being cast aside just as I said and that they are not the damsel in distress type because they get their own power up later on. PS1: there are currently 9-10 confirmed members for the harem. I know that there are many, but the interactions/relationships between MC-girls, and Girls-girls are very good which balances it out. PS2: I would also like to add that the comedic undertone in the story was good although sometimes overused but it is still good in my opinion. Next is power level. I like the fact that the MC is not OP, yes he is one of the top most powerful in the story but I like that it is not the type of "One shot one kill" power. I know that people like very OP characters, but it gets very boring because it makes the plot predictable and that's why I like the MC's power which we can say is in the "Strong to stronger" type. Just as the author said, the MC uses strategies and his smarts to fight which I think is good and not just all brawns. Because if you think about it, the world they are in is the type where there are factions and politics are prominent along with being powerful, we cannot just expect that everyone is dumb and weak and the MC is smart and strong. For me, what makes a battle/strategy type story good is that there are adverseries for the MC to overcome and strategize carefully and not just "oh a straight path to success" type of story. This is why I like that the MC of this fanfics both has the brawns and brains and that the enemies also utilizes the same as well. PS3: There are original characters and settings(correct me if I am wrong) that were made by the author and this addition was good because it progresses the story and also fill in the gaps of the story that the original source have. PS4: I don't know if it was just me but there are some parts where it feels kind of like those chinese novels (hahaha) because of some way the characters act. Also maybe it is because of the fact that there are over 1000 chapters (lol , no sarcasm intended) which I only find in chinese novels(Xianxia specifically) and maybe some in korean novels. These parts were also good and also not overused which was a good thing :) PS5: Lastly, some may not like that there are settings that are not part of the original storyline but guyssss this is a fanfic so it is normal for it to deviate or differ. One kf the things you may find different is our MC's (Kisuke Urahara) personality, yes it is indeed slightly or maybe really different but I think it was a good one because it became good when the character development kicks in. Just think of this story as well as the characters as a Alternative Universe where different/multiple What if's are woven together. Just read it and do not judge in the early chapters, maybe read until 100-200 chapters or so before you judge. CHARACTER DESIGN: For character designs... No comment really, as it is a fanfic of stories mainly DxD, Danmachi and Bleach (as of now) and they are not the Author's OG character. However, as I said, there are original characters made by author (I think?) and there are times when MC and co. uses disguise and I think that the character design was good. What I like is that, although there is an original source for the characters of the OG source, I still appreciate that the writer reminds us of what they look like from time to time. I also like that the descriptive or the way the author describes each character is not overly exaggerated. UPDATING STABILITY: For here... Idk because I just binge read this a week ago, so I do not know the frequence of updates. Looking at the updates date, I see that it was consistent up until now. WORLD BACKGROUND: It is a fanfic so we know and cannot judge the author for it. However, I can comment that the concept of another world or multiverse in the story is good. I also like that the the World background for Danmachi was altered especially for the power level of the gods to match of DxD. I also liked the tweaks in the original story or background because it made everyting fit together almost perfectly. PS6: I appreciate the editors of the fanfic and also find it entertaining the section where Author/Writer and Editors interact

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surya_wijaya

truly a masterpiece if you ignore some weird grammar and incomplete sentences. i can feel urahara vibe from this story and the jokes are killing me

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Arthanis_wxyz

Esta genial la historia lo ΓΊnico que no me gusta es que como se fue a la mierda el balance del poder y mΓ‘s con todos esos conceptos que son difΓ­ciles de comprender

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ShriNG

Special for the 1000th comment................................................................................................................................

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Holy_Hunter

What is L + ratio? L + ratio is used as a mocking insult on social media, often in reply to a post or opinion considered particularly bad. The letter L is used as a slang term for loss (as in the opposite of win). The word ratio is used in its social media sense referring to a situation in which a post has a high proportion of replies compared to likes or reposts, which usually indicates a barrage of negative replies criticizing and often mocking the post.

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Anime_Sama_8317

I’m at chapter 324 right now, I really like this so far besides errors in writing but overall I enjoyed it so far

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MarinXGrayfia

dxd world and not harem is a big crime. if you can't make harem might as well change it to others world

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PUERKO_Junior

Me gusta, es muy bueno tiene buena historia lo ΓΊnico que no me gusta es como avanza la historia un poco lenta pero sigue siento entretenido y divertido

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GupGodLicker

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Gabriel_Cuevas_1898

TenΓ­a mucho potencial pero Harem? EnseriΓ³ deja mucho que desear Esperaba mΓ‘s del autor no se por que tienen una obsesiΓ³n con el Harem Es realmente aburrido siempre van por el mismo camino que convierte la diversiΓ³n a lo genΓ©rico

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felix_juarez

me encanta urahara, me encanta como desarrollaste la historia de los personajes y el mundo 😎

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Flash_YT

Is this a harem story or not bc I can’t tell

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Daoist007877

i started re reading this again because i forgot what chapter i was on. how manny are in his harem/ and who are they also will he travel to other worlds

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prof_Nuclear

( coughing) . . . This is a shameless advertising for my own book . Go check it out . My own spin of into the infinity genre

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red1reaper

The story is very good overall the only drop in quality are the parts in Orario, man are the Orario segments boring... except for the character development of the girls it feels like filler and that character development does not justify the hundreds upon hundreds of chapters spent in the Danmachi world. The segments with DxD are good, the very original segment about medusa was very good, the most recent segment in the Bleach world is good, the segments about the ExE are super good... But the segments in danmachi are just bad, it is not even danmachi fault, it is just that the danmachi world is not a very interesting world to have Kisuke in, the only interesting thing that happens is the characterization of some of the girls but they could have gotten that characterization in a place that was more interesting

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MalleShi

Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good.

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The_flame

it's an amazing story, but after the dxd chapters the mc become more of a side character while showing up as the focus for every few 200 chapters later on because it more focused on his lovers level ups and they become the main focus in the story later

1yr
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Gomuningen

After almost 1200 chapters both Kisuke and Yoroichi don’t really have any major power up and still haven’t reached transcendence, just some random mentions of new useful power systems. The MC goes to Orario but still the author NERFed the whole world’s power system saying that it makes poeople too dependent on gods etc. Instead of taking it as an opportunity to allow MC to power up by going through the levels. Author seems pathalogically averse to powering up the MC

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Rohit_Yadav_5054

It's one of the best fanfictions I have read

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red1reaper

This story is awesome, while the part at orario was a bit dull, everything else is amazing.

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jhersen

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jhersen

I liked the story πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜‚πŸ˜πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜ πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

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John_Rex_98

I'm giving it 5stars before reading, because it's dxd x bleach...... let's see

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High_Marx2

I have enjoyed it so far im only waiting for more chapters to be released

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Professor_Genki

i liked It before It turned into a harem, because i can't see the reason some girls are a part of it, i do not understand why everyone was pushing him to accept sona's feelings, i mean she likes him, he did not want It, she cried, then everyone acts like he HAS to accept her. then there are the others, i can understand Koneko, but not that other girl who became a shinigami. Akeno is freaky so she probably would end up a part of it bit even then she ended up causing more problems, kuroka is related to koneko so It makes a bit of sense.What i want to say is that i did not like how the decision of entering the "harem" is made by only one side of the "relationship" or by other members of the harem like they do not need to see how the mc feels.

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