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Beyond the moon

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Penulis: chellsea

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It's the future but its not on planet earth. welcome to a whole new planet, that the human race spent 1.3 million years to get to. Earth is now a history lesson for the third generation of this new world.

Agatha is just a normal eighteen-year-old woman who still lives with her mother, who still wants to live an older generation life that grandma taught her and Agatha just wants leave that behind.

It seems the universe answered that call in the most unseen way possible. will she be begging for a simple life like her mother wanted in the end?

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Stone -- Power stone

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Asaiyll
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Hi Chellsea! I saw you on S.I.E Chat Group and decided to stop by, So, I've noticed that you're missing a lot of capitalization and periods, And at times tou have commas where there should be periods, The grammar is a little difficult to understand making it hard to read, However, I really like Agatha, she seems like an interesting character, You should write more! -Best, Asaiyll.

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