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Path of Evolution Johannes: The Shackled (rewriting)

Penulis: Phipsi

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Path of Evolution Project

Hello Phips here. I wanted to thank Ankit for coming up with this fantastic world setting. As he dropped his novel I thought why not pick up this world setting and tell my own story from the perspective of another survivor who goes his own path.

The world settings will be exactly the same.

Also I encourage other fans who want to try this to create their own story in this world.

If you do stay within reasonable power confines we may can even cross reverence global events.

And in the end make from many individual story's a story of humanity.

The CORE here by is that every last protagonist has to die multiple times. I think we should fully use the option of multi-timer to make the whole story as intressting as possible

AND NOT just "wow am I OP. I have endless amounts of Plott armor"

Who takes part in this project:

1. Phipsi (Johannes: The Shackled)

[I am starting with the first wave of the apocalypse while my champ has no AI. His specialty will involve the inability to use Mana]

2. You maybe

Here I will list the changes I hope you can account to. I'm always open for suggestions.

Changes:

* The fog is described as a form of tidal Flood. Such a thing has an origin while the fog shouldn't have one. I propose to replace the appearance of the fog as ‚clouds starting appearing in the sky' to ‚descending' or more dramatic ‚the sky falling down'

* Everybody can describe the pain different if they want. Not every person feels the same pain the same way. (A good IRL example are headaches)


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