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The only reason you book isn't popular is because webnovel doesn't reward slow progression stories. I read only a few chapters and I already knew this book should warrant a place in the power ranking. Author is wasting his talent here. When you finish the book, please send it to a publisher. I would order the book online if this ever happens.
Writing this halfway through Volume 1 - Part 2!! Sooo, I'm pretty happy with how the book is going so far! There have been a couple of rewrites, so the quality should be pretty high for a Webnovel! But, better than that, as the book goes on, it gets better (trust me!) Thing start off a little slowly, as we build the world, but once it gets going, it reaaaallly gets going. There's a lot of potential where things are now, so I hope you'll make it to as far as I've written! I've had a lot of fun writing it.
The greatest story that i have read online. The pace of the story, the caracters, the worldbuilding are perfect. It feels so good to have secondary caracters that have a life and are not just here to be a filler. Great job ! Really worth your time ! I would love a collector paper edition.
Does it have fantasy elements ? I mean super powers etc cuz there’s no tag but the names and titles of chapters seem to indicate it
This novel truly is a gem, far beyond the quality that even most top ranking novels on this page aspire to have. The writing, characters, story, worldbuilding, everything leaves me craving for more chapters, and like another user said, it’s excellent.
I wish I liked this more the writing quality and release stability is great. The main problem however is that I'm so tired of children mc. They take forever to grow and become interesting. This story just feels so slow and predictable. It' really cliche too, but there are a few things that make me say I wish I liked it. Like the master knight and seeing a bit of character growth.
Eagerly awaiting mass release chapters!! I literally finished the whole thing in a binge. Amazing novel!!
One of the best originals i have come across on webnovel. Please keep up the brilliant work!
This is one of the best masterpieces I have read until now. The story is slow-paced but that's the most interesting part of the story as it gives enough depth to the characters and world development.I'm afraid that most of the audience on the web novel is more interested in fast-paced stories with cheat abilities. I hope people will give this novel a chance as it will not disappoint.
This novel is definitely among my faves. It's up there with Mech Touch, Chrysalis, Lord of Mysteries, and I became the Pope.I wish I could lock the author up and make him keep writing, but I understand he needs to make a living. Please give this novel a chance.
It feels like, I am watching a high-quality movie. I read a lot of english novels that good but this is above them. It just that. Excellent 👌
more chapters,more chapters,more chapters,more chapters,more chapters,more chapters,more chapters,more chapters,more chapters,more chapters,more chapters
I love the character development, their background stories and their future goals explained in detail and grace. I also really like the awesome world building! It’s a great story which I recommend to everyone and I would say you’ll know if you like it if you read up to chapter 33. To the author, thank you for this masterpiece and hope that you’ll continue this story! One question tho, how many chapters do you think this story is going to be?
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So glad to see one of my favorite webnovel authors come back after all this time!
It’s just fantastic and you’re doing yourself a disservice if you don’t read it.
Excellent. Everything about this book is just that. Excellent. All that needs to be said.
The only reason you book isn't popular is because webnovel doesn't reward slow progression stories. I read only a few chapters and I already knew this book should warrant a place in the power ranking. Author is wasting his talent here. When you finish the book, please send it to a publisher. I would order the book online if this ever happens.
Writing this halfway through Volume 1 - Part 2!! Sooo, I'm pretty happy with how the book is going so far! There have been a couple of rewrites, so the quality should be pretty high for a Webnovel! But, better than that, as the book goes on, it gets better (trust me!) Thing start off a little slowly, as we build the world, but once it gets going, it reaaaallly gets going. There's a lot of potential where things are now, so I hope you'll make it to as far as I've written! I've had a lot of fun writing it.
The greatest story that i have read online. The pace of the story, the caracters, the worldbuilding are perfect. It feels so good to have secondary caracters that have a life and are not just here to be a filler. Great job ! Really worth your time ! I would love a collector paper edition.
Does it have fantasy elements ? I mean super powers etc cuz there’s no tag but the names and titles of chapters seem to indicate it
This novel truly is a gem, far beyond the quality that even most top ranking novels on this page aspire to have. The writing, characters, story, worldbuilding, everything leaves me craving for more chapters, and like another user said, it’s excellent.
I wish I liked this more the writing quality and release stability is great. The main problem however is that I'm so tired of children mc. They take forever to grow and become interesting. This story just feels so slow and predictable. It' really cliche too, but there are a few things that make me say I wish I liked it. Like the master knight and seeing a bit of character growth.
Eagerly awaiting mass release chapters!! I literally finished the whole thing in a binge. Amazing novel!!
One of the best originals i have come across on webnovel. Please keep up the brilliant work!
This is one of the best masterpieces I have read until now. The story is slow-paced but that's the most interesting part of the story as it gives enough depth to the characters and world development.I'm afraid that most of the audience on the web novel is more interested in fast-paced stories with cheat abilities. I hope people will give this novel a chance as it will not disappoint.
This novel is definitely among my faves. It's up there with Mech Touch, Chrysalis, Lord of Mysteries, and I became the Pope.I wish I could lock the author up and make him keep writing, but I understand he needs to make a living. Please give this novel a chance.
It feels like, I am watching a high-quality movie. I read a lot of english novels that good but this is above them. It just that. Excellent 👌
more chapters,more chapters,more chapters,more chapters,more chapters,more chapters,more chapters,more chapters,more chapters,more chapters,more chapters
I love the character development, their background stories and their future goals explained in detail and grace. I also really like the awesome world building! It’s a great story which I recommend to everyone and I would say you’ll know if you like it if you read up to chapter 33. To the author, thank you for this masterpiece and hope that you’ll continue this story! One question tho, how many chapters do you think this story is going to be?
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So glad to see one of my favorite webnovel authors come back after all this time!
It’s just fantastic and you’re doing yourself a disservice if you don’t read it.
Excellent. Everything about this book is just that. Excellent. All that needs to be said.