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DUDE THIS IS REALLY A GOOD NOVEL AND WILL HOPE THAT THE WILL NOT DROP THIS AND WILL CONTINUE TO WRITE IT AND WILL ALSO MAINTAIN THE UPDATE RATE NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
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5 star for not drop .........................................................................................................................................
I like it author. While it's not the greatest yet it's still quite early in the story so as long as you keep writing I'll keep reading. Ppl who read reviews while I'm not trying to tell you what to do, I'd say you should atleast give it a try to see if you would like it or not.
Novel is readable but not a really good one. It is just like telling what's happening rather than showing and author is doing a terrible job with mystery with all that leaving for the future or for another time stuff. Nothing is fully explained and is just left with the line for another time or for future. The power system is confusing with the purity level and then those laws, plot is nothing special/good either. Overall, another novel that will be dropped. You can try if you are truly bored but don't expect anything. About the author being new, I'd say that when he becomes better, I might read his novels but I've seen many new novelist or hobbyists that are much better. Hope you get better and write a complete novel one day.
Don't listen to the guy who posted a bad review men , it is pretty good for a new writer and there is only few novels like this one in Webnovel . ............ Oh and **** this 140 characters thing ..........
this is one of the worst things I've read, the chapters are unreadable. the author has no clue about what he is writing .this is one of the worst things I've read, the chapters are unreadable. the author has no clue about what he is writing .this is one of the worst things I've read, the chapters are unreadable. the author has no clue about what he is writing .this is one of the worst things I've read, the chapters are unreadable. the author has no clue about what he is writing .
its readable. but you will randomly lose track of whats going on, multiple words are written in upper case for no reason whatsoever, and the ending of every chapter is extremely cringe. if you can get past these, then its a decent read.
DUDE THIS IS REALLY A GOOD NOVEL AND WILL HOPE THAT THE WILL NOT DROP THIS AND WILL CONTINUE TO WRITE IT AND WILL ALSO MAINTAIN THE UPDATE RATE NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
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5 star for not drop .........................................................................................................................................
I like it author. While it's not the greatest yet it's still quite early in the story so as long as you keep writing I'll keep reading. Ppl who read reviews while I'm not trying to tell you what to do, I'd say you should atleast give it a try to see if you would like it or not.
Novel is readable but not a really good one. It is just like telling what's happening rather than showing and author is doing a terrible job with mystery with all that leaving for the future or for another time stuff. Nothing is fully explained and is just left with the line for another time or for future. The power system is confusing with the purity level and then those laws, plot is nothing special/good either. Overall, another novel that will be dropped. You can try if you are truly bored but don't expect anything. About the author being new, I'd say that when he becomes better, I might read his novels but I've seen many new novelist or hobbyists that are much better. Hope you get better and write a complete novel one day.
Don't listen to the guy who posted a bad review men , it is pretty good for a new writer and there is only few novels like this one in Webnovel . ............ Oh and **** this 140 characters thing ..........
this is one of the worst things I've read, the chapters are unreadable. the author has no clue about what he is writing .this is one of the worst things I've read, the chapters are unreadable. the author has no clue about what he is writing .this is one of the worst things I've read, the chapters are unreadable. the author has no clue about what he is writing .this is one of the worst things I've read, the chapters are unreadable. the author has no clue about what he is writing .
its readable. but you will randomly lose track of whats going on, multiple words are written in upper case for no reason whatsoever, and the ending of every chapter is extremely cringe. if you can get past these, then its a decent read.