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I really like this novel and I personally think itβs One of the best. It ofeRA a different perspect To godsuya and what would happen if he lost his sister. ππΎππΎππΎ great work. Are you still continuing it?
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Its good. Just hella slow updates. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Really cool, I adore the character of Tatsuya that has been shown in this story, although I would be a little happier if there was some romance, especially with some specific girls, but from what I see that will not happen.
release more chapter pleaseeeeee! !!!!!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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The author has some kind of fetish for hiding power, he hides power when it is pointless, the main character is a rag, he does not even do anything with those who wanted to kill him (although he can legally kill him, and he won. punishments (napirizer red dragon))
I am the bone of my sword Steel is my body and fire is my blood I have created over a thousand blades Unknown to Death, Nor known to Life. Have withstood pain to create many weapons Yet, those hands will never hold anything So as I pray, Unlimited Blade Works.
You give it power to nerf it later, just nerf it is like limiting it, if you limit your character so much the novel becomes boring, although the premise was good you screwed up too much and I can't read anymore ..... you make everyone's mistake , you limit the powers, you autoned your characters so that you don't do it right away, in one chapter you put that tatsuya's cultivation was true deep lvl6 and when he got to moon city you nerfed him to lvl1 and on top of that you make his veins super cheated just for decoration , since in the end he doesn't even cultivate he just started cultivating but in the end his power is still nerf at all, so many nonsensical powers just for you to limit it. The truth is that I don't know how some might like a novel, if it weren't for the fact that the protagonist is not a monotonous beta **** I would have left it before ... Have a good day, I'll just say one thing, although this novel is good It is too frustrating to read it happened to me, although I don't know if it gets good afterwards but seeing it from this chapter is absolutely bad ..... in conclusion if you want an MC that is not beta, but it hides all the time for nothing , an MC with proven powers but nerfed to the maximum, boring character without charisma, and the typical Chinese trope with the name of a Japanese is yours
sincerely request to add a mecha there author san..........please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please
I fell in love with this novel with the first two chaps.................................[img=faceslap]...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Its fun and unique and has my favourite character shiba tatsuyaa Its perfect man perfect
The story is not bad.Though Tatsuya became strong fast.It felt like he was too focused on Cultivating.I felt like story would have been more interesting if Tatsuya interacted with other characters who are not part of his companions.Although the story hasn't been updated in a while.Hope to see updates in the future.
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Shiba Tatsuya = OP Good story, no update stability but we get some chaps irregularly Character design and world background: tatsuya and ATG what else is there to say
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I really like this novel and I personally think itβs One of the best. It ofeRA a different perspect To godsuya and what would happen if he lost his sister. ππΎππΎππΎ great work. Are you still continuing it?
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Its good. Just hella slow updates. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Membuka SPOILER Really cool, I adore the character of Tatsuya that has been shown in this story, although I would be a little happier if there was some romance, especially with some specific girls, but from what I see that will not happen.
release more chapter pleaseeeeee! !!!!!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
zxddydyfugjgufufyryrueuifidududifiririfrurururururuutjrrtrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrriiiiiiooooooooooooooooooooooooooooioiitititutitirudududur really really
The author has some kind of fetish for hiding power, he hides power when it is pointless, the main character is a rag, he does not even do anything with those who wanted to kill him (although he can legally kill him, and he won. punishments (napirizer red dragon))
I am the bone of my sword Steel is my body and fire is my blood I have created over a thousand blades Unknown to Death, Nor known to Life. Have withstood pain to create many weapons Yet, those hands will never hold anything So as I pray, Unlimited Blade Works.
You give it power to nerf it later, just nerf it is like limiting it, if you limit your character so much the novel becomes boring, although the premise was good you screwed up too much and I can't read anymore ..... you make everyone's mistake , you limit the powers, you autoned your characters so that you don't do it right away, in one chapter you put that tatsuya's cultivation was true deep lvl6 and when he got to moon city you nerfed him to lvl1 and on top of that you make his veins super cheated just for decoration , since in the end he doesn't even cultivate he just started cultivating but in the end his power is still nerf at all, so many nonsensical powers just for you to limit it. The truth is that I don't know how some might like a novel, if it weren't for the fact that the protagonist is not a monotonous beta **** I would have left it before ... Have a good day, I'll just say one thing, although this novel is good It is too frustrating to read it happened to me, although I don't know if it gets good afterwards but seeing it from this chapter is absolutely bad ..... in conclusion if you want an MC that is not beta, but it hides all the time for nothing , an MC with proven powers but nerfed to the maximum, boring character without charisma, and the typical Chinese trope with the name of a Japanese is yours
sincerely request to add a mecha there author san..........please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please....please, please
I fell in love with this novel with the first two chaps.................................[img=faceslap]...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Its fun and unique and has my favourite character shiba tatsuyaa Its perfect man perfect
The story is not bad.Though Tatsuya became strong fast.It felt like he was too focused on Cultivating.I felt like story would have been more interesting if Tatsuya interacted with other characters who are not part of his companions.Although the story hasn't been updated in a while.Hope to see updates in the future.
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Membuka SPOILER Shiba Tatsuya = OP Good story, no update stability but we get some chaps irregularly Character design and world background: tatsuya and ATG what else is there to say
