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i have to leave a second review since the book has been changed from a simple fan fic to an actual novel. tbh, i love the new story; very rich and interesting! i'd love to see more.
Hidden masterpiece of this site. I am really love this story. Unfortunately I forgot about it like a year ago,but now came back here). P.s. my English is bad,sorry if u don't understand me properly.
I've seen this series grow since back when it was a simple TF2 future fanfiction. The dedication and improvement of this piece of literature is staggering, dedicating more of it's development to upgrading and making a fantastic and well built world and universe, slowly branching out into it's own original space than it's source inspiration. The author shows dedication and pure passion into his work with every chapter and update. Although inconsistent, the updates show a level of care and polish better than the previous one, dedicating itself to keeping a consistent narrative and such. Overall, a fantastic read that leaves you yearning for more.
I love the story, the characters and the background in general. I can consider myself a fan of this book. Been reading it for a while and so far you even upgraded it. Very good book 5/5
Though I have not read the book yet, I'll give it a good review so it'll come up as a 5 star sooner or later w
why isnt this fan fic rated high i my opinion it need a little bit of advertising
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Very good story, sometimes hard to understand but still comprehensible. Good character development, the fights seem great and everything's interesting so far. Keep it up.
After reading this fanfiction for a long time, I finally decided to leave a review. It's AWESOME, I liked it alot only that we need the first volume's chapters to be updated in grammar or else, everything is perfect.
I can't give 5 stars because there's not enough chapters yet but I really enjoy your story and plot so far keep it up love the mc looking forward for more...!
Yep, changed my cover once more... Hope you enjoy the novel. If you feel disappointed at certain elements inside my story, feel free to tell me. Also, I know about the direction of my story, you won't be disappointed if you kept reading up until the end since it's still too soon to make judgments about the plot of my story.
i have to leave a second review since the book has been changed from a simple fan fic to an actual novel. tbh, i love the new story; very rich and interesting! i'd love to see more.
Hidden masterpiece of this site. I am really love this story. Unfortunately I forgot about it like a year ago,but now came back here). P.s. my English is bad,sorry if u don't understand me properly.
I've seen this series grow since back when it was a simple TF2 future fanfiction. The dedication and improvement of this piece of literature is staggering, dedicating more of it's development to upgrading and making a fantastic and well built world and universe, slowly branching out into it's own original space than it's source inspiration. The author shows dedication and pure passion into his work with every chapter and update. Although inconsistent, the updates show a level of care and polish better than the previous one, dedicating itself to keeping a consistent narrative and such. Overall, a fantastic read that leaves you yearning for more.
I love the story, the characters and the background in general. I can consider myself a fan of this book. Been reading it for a while and so far you even upgraded it. Very good book 5/5
Though I have not read the book yet, I'll give it a good review so it'll come up as a 5 star sooner or later w
why isnt this fan fic rated high i my opinion it need a little bit of advertising
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Very good story, sometimes hard to understand but still comprehensible. Good character development, the fights seem great and everything's interesting so far. Keep it up.
After reading this fanfiction for a long time, I finally decided to leave a review. It's AWESOME, I liked it alot only that we need the first volume's chapters to be updated in grammar or else, everything is perfect.
I can't give 5 stars because there's not enough chapters yet but I really enjoy your story and plot so far keep it up love the mc looking forward for more...!
Yep, changed my cover once more... Hope you enjoy the novel. If you feel disappointed at certain elements inside my story, feel free to tell me. Also, I know about the direction of my story, you won't be disappointed if you kept reading up until the end since it's still too soon to make judgments about the plot of my story.