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Honestly the grammar in this book is some of the worse I’ve ever seen. Even some Chinese Translation aren’t as bad…. Almost 90 Chapters in & somehow it seems like the grammer is just getting worse to the point it’s unreadable.
Bad plot, stupid "inteligent" mc, of course her mistakes had to be repaired with deus ex machina... I do not recommend reading it.
I love the female lead character very much i like how the author imaginary story from Harry Potter OG turned into love it
It's simply an incredible piece of work. You can see how much the author loves Harry Potter and writing this story. I've read other Harry Potter fanfics and this is my favorite, every change in the script, every character, everything, I think it's perfect and it's simply an honor to follow the end of this story.
this deserves 5* I don't have anything to say cuz the most popular comment already says it all
basura termino siendo un refrito con otro personaje más que encima es de lo más estupido
Meh. Nothing that stands out so far. The MC also feels like a guidance counsilor instead of an 11 yo. So far I have no desire of reading further, everything is just too vanilla. Author is so afraid of drama that he/she uses the MC to keep their safe space. I usually like the voice of reason character or the straight man, but if that character is the MC, it feels more preachy since all interactions we see MC give flawless advices all the time.
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OK this is my first time reading but wow hahaha I was able to enjoy this so hope for more chapters hehe so I love it
Snowflake, thanks for this book. What I love about this book is the characters, especially the OG characters. Christina's character is good, she has gone through a lot of character development since the start of the story. All the aide characters in the have gone through tremendous character development except Jason. I like the romance in the novel, especially between Christina and her significant other (I won't spoil it, read the story to find out) This novel is worth the read.
This story is kinda written like Disney write stories on female leads it takes far more focus on making the mc a strong female character instead of making a strong, original character that is female. It’s bland and boring
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Just from the synopsis you already know how it's going to be like. Harry Potter x2. This time it's 2 girls against each other instead of boys. 1 powerful and evil with ancient dark creepy knowledge but still stupidly focused on a teen, and 1 innocent, ignorant and naive teen that is more focused on every single thing that happens around her instead of training to avoid inevitable demise. Correct me if I'm wrong.
I need more chocolate... chocolate... Superb. This is really a good fanfic. just arrived at chp 20, but now i'm completely bewitched. Thx Author for the Novel.
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This is probably my first review of a fan fiction, and as of reading up to chapter 331, this is the best Harry Potter fanfiction that I've come across so far. Writing Quality - Other than slight(possible) mistakes on a few words here and there, there's not really a problem. there might be different words and phrases that could be changed for better understanding of what's currently going on at a given point in the story, but doesn't dampen the story in any way. Story Development - Absolutely perfect; this was done exceptionally well, from one arc of the story to the next. I could say that this was done so well that it doesn't really feel like a fan fiction in that regard. (keep up the good work author-chan😊) Character Design - This was done spectacularly; I love how Christina flows in the story so naturally, her interactions with known characters like Harry, Hermione, Ron, Luna, etc. and how she changes the story so dynamically while also still keeping the original plot together as the story continues from one book to another. Updating Stability - Fantastic, the author made a schedule and stuck to it to the best of her ability. (we all have things that need attention in our lives so we can't blame you author 👍) World Background - This definitely was done as good as the others if not done better. it's the feeling that I got when reading this that made me think; oh wow, this makes me feel like I'm actually reading a Harry Potter book and not a fan fiction.🤣 Overall, I'd give this book a solid 4.9 out of 5. while I can't say it's the best fan fiction out there that I've read, it's pretty d*mn close. And since I've read a couple fan fictions on Harry Potter, I know this definitely hits the nail right on the coffin. For some of you who are looking for a fan fiction of Harry Potter, those that want to start reading Harry Potter but didn't have the chance or time, or are looking for a interesting fan fiction; this is for you.
nice one enjoyed thoroughly...................................,.............................................................................
Struggled Though the first year of the novel. Didn’t Like it at first but kpet reading until around chapter 320 and after the first year it picks up very nicely. Eventually became a very great novel. Would recommend if you can get through the first two years.
This is a mary sue self insert fanfic... New girl that better at magic at everyone, solves all the mysteries by herself before everyone else, notices ALL the clues and has the "personality" to cut through the bull. This is the epitome of mary sue writing. First volume is a waste of time, zero character development, nothing but the MC doing everything solo. She even kills the Basilisk solo...
Meh. I read to the end of the first year, and the whole thing was basically the vanilla story, just woth the MC added in. There were a FEW, SMALL changes, but nothing noteworthy. It essentially felt like the MC wouldn’t get her own story until Harry and friends were out of the picture. If this changes around year 2, let me know and I’ll see about picking the novel back up.
Whatever author had planned with MC, I'm not interested in it at all. First book is just plain copy-pasta of original story. Just added another useless character (MC) who doesn't meaningfully contribute to the plot. But when it comes to showing how "cool" and "superb" MC is, then author is going all in. She is formulating complex arguments instantly like she ain't an outcast in her previous schools and got bullied or sth (even though she barely had a summer to read some books). But when it comes to Ginny showing obvious symptoms of the problem, then MC acts all dumb, so plot will move just as was copy-pasted. We don't want any originality here.
amazing! amazing!! love it! cannot wait for more chapters, the character development and storytelling is anything but amazing! I just love how the dynamics of the characters all fit together!
first of all first whn started reading story it was perfect but after he did go school, it's almost all copy paste and writes bit and bit so it's bit diff. i just can't understand why he is all time whit potter and them?? they are 2 year and he is 1 year. i'm 27 chap and thinking dropping novel maybe i gice it chance for 59chap
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Membuka SPOILER
I feel as if the mc was only a secondary character that there is as an extra, the story is almost the same as the books only with an additional character that does not contribute much, I am going to give it a try and continue reading it.
I liked the story until the characters were too dumb for my liking. Kind of irritated me. Felt like there were too many things going behind the scene with her magic. Already at the 5th year (for Harry) but there was seriously no progress with her dreams or anything
Membuka SPOILER
WE STILL HERE FOR YOU EVEN IF THAT "CIRCLE " ISN'T 🖐🖐🖐🖐👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😈😈😈😈👍👍😁😁😁😁😁😁😥😁😥😁😁😁😁😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
I cried too many times :D ............ . ... . . . . . . . . . . .............. ............... . . . .............. . . . . .. . .
Membuka SPOILER Has a lot of potential sadly its all ruined by some of the worse grammar I’ve ever seen outside MTL……
Honestly the grammar in this book is some of the worse I’ve ever seen. Even some Chinese Translation aren’t as bad…. Almost 90 Chapters in & somehow it seems like the grammer is just getting worse to the point it’s unreadable.
Bad plot, stupid "inteligent" mc, of course her mistakes had to be repaired with deus ex machina... I do not recommend reading it.
I love the female lead character very much i like how the author imaginary story from Harry Potter OG turned into love it
It's simply an incredible piece of work. You can see how much the author loves Harry Potter and writing this story. I've read other Harry Potter fanfics and this is my favorite, every change in the script, every character, everything, I think it's perfect and it's simply an honor to follow the end of this story.
this deserves 5* I don't have anything to say cuz the most popular comment already says it all
basura termino siendo un refrito con otro personaje más que encima es de lo más estupido
Meh. Nothing that stands out so far. The MC also feels like a guidance counsilor instead of an 11 yo. So far I have no desire of reading further, everything is just too vanilla. Author is so afraid of drama that he/she uses the MC to keep their safe space. I usually like the voice of reason character or the straight man, but if that character is the MC, it feels more preachy since all interactions we see MC give flawless advices all the time.
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OK this is my first time reading but wow hahaha I was able to enjoy this so hope for more chapters hehe so I love it
Snowflake, thanks for this book. What I love about this book is the characters, especially the OG characters. Christina's character is good, she has gone through a lot of character development since the start of the story. All the aide characters in the have gone through tremendous character development except Jason. I like the romance in the novel, especially between Christina and her significant other (I won't spoil it, read the story to find out) This novel is worth the read.
This story is kinda written like Disney write stories on female leads it takes far more focus on making the mc a strong female character instead of making a strong, original character that is female. It’s bland and boring
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Just from the synopsis you already know how it's going to be like. Harry Potter x2. This time it's 2 girls against each other instead of boys. 1 powerful and evil with ancient dark creepy knowledge but still stupidly focused on a teen, and 1 innocent, ignorant and naive teen that is more focused on every single thing that happens around her instead of training to avoid inevitable demise. Correct me if I'm wrong.
I need more chocolate... chocolate... Superb. This is really a good fanfic. just arrived at chp 20, but now i'm completely bewitched. Thx Author for the Novel.
Is there romance in this fic? ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
This is probably my first review of a fan fiction, and as of reading up to chapter 331, this is the best Harry Potter fanfiction that I've come across so far. Writing Quality - Other than slight(possible) mistakes on a few words here and there, there's not really a problem. there might be different words and phrases that could be changed for better understanding of what's currently going on at a given point in the story, but doesn't dampen the story in any way. Story Development - Absolutely perfect; this was done exceptionally well, from one arc of the story to the next. I could say that this was done so well that it doesn't really feel like a fan fiction in that regard. (keep up the good work author-chan😊) Character Design - This was done spectacularly; I love how Christina flows in the story so naturally, her interactions with known characters like Harry, Hermione, Ron, Luna, etc. and how she changes the story so dynamically while also still keeping the original plot together as the story continues from one book to another. Updating Stability - Fantastic, the author made a schedule and stuck to it to the best of her ability. (we all have things that need attention in our lives so we can't blame you author 👍) World Background - This definitely was done as good as the others if not done better. it's the feeling that I got when reading this that made me think; oh wow, this makes me feel like I'm actually reading a Harry Potter book and not a fan fiction.🤣 Overall, I'd give this book a solid 4.9 out of 5. while I can't say it's the best fan fiction out there that I've read, it's pretty d*mn close. And since I've read a couple fan fictions on Harry Potter, I know this definitely hits the nail right on the coffin. For some of you who are looking for a fan fiction of Harry Potter, those that want to start reading Harry Potter but didn't have the chance or time, or are looking for a interesting fan fiction; this is for you.
nice one enjoyed thoroughly...................................,.............................................................................
Struggled Though the first year of the novel. Didn’t Like it at first but kpet reading until around chapter 320 and after the first year it picks up very nicely. Eventually became a very great novel. Would recommend if you can get through the first two years.
This is a mary sue self insert fanfic... New girl that better at magic at everyone, solves all the mysteries by herself before everyone else, notices ALL the clues and has the "personality" to cut through the bull. This is the epitome of mary sue writing. First volume is a waste of time, zero character development, nothing but the MC doing everything solo. She even kills the Basilisk solo...
Meh. I read to the end of the first year, and the whole thing was basically the vanilla story, just woth the MC added in. There were a FEW, SMALL changes, but nothing noteworthy. It essentially felt like the MC wouldn’t get her own story until Harry and friends were out of the picture. If this changes around year 2, let me know and I’ll see about picking the novel back up.
Whatever author had planned with MC, I'm not interested in it at all. First book is just plain copy-pasta of original story. Just added another useless character (MC) who doesn't meaningfully contribute to the plot. But when it comes to showing how "cool" and "superb" MC is, then author is going all in. She is formulating complex arguments instantly like she ain't an outcast in her previous schools and got bullied or sth (even though she barely had a summer to read some books). But when it comes to Ginny showing obvious symptoms of the problem, then MC acts all dumb, so plot will move just as was copy-pasted. We don't want any originality here.
amazing! amazing!! love it! cannot wait for more chapters, the character development and storytelling is anything but amazing! I just love how the dynamics of the characters all fit together!
first of all first whn started reading story it was perfect but after he did go school, it's almost all copy paste and writes bit and bit so it's bit diff. i just can't understand why he is all time whit potter and them?? they are 2 year and he is 1 year. i'm 27 chap and thinking dropping novel maybe i gice it chance for 59chap
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Membuka SPOILER I feel as if the mc was only a secondary character that there is as an extra, the story is almost the same as the books only with an additional character that does not contribute much, I am going to give it a try and continue reading it.
I liked the story until the characters were too dumb for my liking. Kind of irritated me. Felt like there were too many things going behind the scene with her magic. Already at the 5th year (for Harry) but there was seriously no progress with her dreams or anything
Membuka SPOILER WE STILL HERE FOR YOU EVEN IF THAT "CIRCLE " ISN'T 🖐🖐🖐🖐👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😈😈😈😈👍👍😁😁😁😁😁😁😥😁😥😁😁😁😁😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
I cried too many times :D ............ . ... . . . . . . . . . . .............. ............... . . . .............. . . . . .. . .
Membuka SPOILER
Has a lot of potential sadly its all ruined by some of the worse grammar I’ve ever seen outside MTL……