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Bab 10: Sadgic 2

I was walking in a narrow rope of 'yes or no',

One misstep shoulder the 'weigh of Atlas',

I abruptly woke up from that 'test',

Suddenly seeing the 'Yes'.

Her crumpled 'facade' makes me "?",

"Who are you? Where am i?" asked her,

"You've 'slept for a while' in the middle of road",

"I've 'offered my hand' in exchange with my 'hand in your cheek'".

I stand up and ready to 'goodbye',

When she suddenly hooked up and 'fell each other',

'Hazy-brown lenses' dive thru my pitch black 'round pool' searching,

"Knock knock" the 'door calling for attention'.

Our cheeks 'powdered with pinkish red',

"Sir! You Okay?" 'white woman' asked for confirmation,

"Yes" dead pan-poker face before the 'key of freedom' handed,

With the girl they 'stormed out' the cloudy of embarrassment.

"Sorry for troublesome, gotta go, thank you, goodbye",

Before 'deaf speaks', I've 'vanished from her lenses',

I don't know, my 'stone cold fist suddenly lost a finger',

It was sad and tragic, 'love suddenly found yet abruptly gone'.


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very short, my head is still aching since yesterday.

Di ako makapag-isip ng maayos, pasensya na.

Why "S" every chapter? I'll explain next...

My head really aching like rice pounding on mortar.

I'm sorry. thank you for viewing/reading.

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