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How should I put this, as a filipino I found your story interesting. The concept of integrating your friendships into the story itself was wholesome and deserves praise but It does lack some more character development and world-building since it feels a bit cliche and bland for now, overall a good story and will definitely continue reading.
This story of mine is magically featuring our friendship. Tropang Past really do exist. And we are exactly eleven in the squad and are matched with the eleven elements: Mae - Music Jhunie - Fire Jom - Water Roselie - Lightning Gerome - Ice Carlo - Earth Lorli - Air Laily - Time Criselle - Witchcraft Arcie - Art Angela - Metal The story begins with a conflict discussed on the realm of Ventreo, the center kingdom in the enchanted world--Postalex. It was gotten serious by the sudden attack of the villains. The kingdom was also having the plans to locate the chosen ones in order to bring back the peace and balance. Other characters are also named after the real names of our classmates and teachers while there are some that are purely imagined. I don't think this story is your style but I suggest to have a reading of it.
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Membuka SPOILER How should I put this, as a filipino I found your story interesting. The concept of integrating your friendships into the story itself was wholesome and deserves praise but It does lack some more character development and world-building since it feels a bit cliche and bland for now, overall a good story and will definitely continue reading.
This story of mine is magically featuring our friendship. Tropang Past really do exist. And we are exactly eleven in the squad and are matched with the eleven elements: Mae - Music Jhunie - Fire Jom - Water Roselie - Lightning Gerome - Ice Carlo - Earth Lorli - Air Laily - Time Criselle - Witchcraft Arcie - Art Angela - Metal The story begins with a conflict discussed on the realm of Ventreo, the center kingdom in the enchanted world--Postalex. It was gotten serious by the sudden attack of the villains. The kingdom was also having the plans to locate the chosen ones in order to bring back the peace and balance. Other characters are also named after the real names of our classmates and teachers while there are some that are purely imagined. I don't think this story is your style but I suggest to have a reading of it.
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