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Wow... Just finished reading all tge chapters... The book is awesome... When they say romantic and +18 believe it... This is one book where i can say the actions are brought out i still don't have words to describe how good and great this writer is.... Awesome
first of all hats off to Elya for gifting such an amazing romantic erotic fun filled story to webnovel readers. this novel is worth reading guys.trust me <3 :D All the characters are just amazing.i loved the first meeting between Berdie and Amiya <3 i couldn't stop laughing at her escape form Berdie. I would love to have a sequel to this story focusing on Berdie and Amiya. The romantic,erotic moments between Stefan and Wirata will make you horny and wet too ;) hehe. The way how both of them starts developing true feelings for each other is wonderfully explained by Elye. While reading each chapter you feel like watching a movie in real.we readers can feel their emotions,everything is wonderfully detailed by her <3 you are really amazing dear,hope to read more stories of yours<3 have you published your stories elsewhere.i would love to read your works. please consider our request to have a part two of this focusssing on berdie and amiya. <3 god bless dear<3
the best of the best 👌 ever!! I felt all the emotion the author put into...I am still waiting for the author to come back n give us the remaining couples stories for years now. I lost count to how many times I've read this novel n now I know ever bit of this novel like a movie in my head🥰🥰🥰🥰
Amazing Story 😁😍🥵🔥. After reading this story I was totally shocked that how can the author express the every single emotion very carefully 🥞😜🤩 #love #romance #hot 😎🙈😚
OMG this novel is one of the Best a read so far ❤️ thank you so much Elya 🙏🏽 you make me pass through a lot of emotion. I highly recommend to everyone who did not read yet. No regrets for sure.
where are you Elya? why are you not giving us another amazing story??? I have been waiting for you for 4-5 years.
Amazing book...really enjoyed reading it you should really consider adding more of your books on webnovel 🤩🙂
Hello author-nim, I just finished reading your novel and I'm so inloooove with it, as in everything. The plot, characters, the story development. It's just so perfect that I lost sleep just to continue reading it. And I sooo like to read the follow up story for Bernardo and Amiya. Please put it here in Webnovel. Please please. 🙏🏻
I think I have already read this novel 4 times and I can’t get enough. This novel is very similar to lucia but in modern world. Thank you so much author for the great novel you have written. Can you please translate Amiya and Bernando story soon? Please please please please please 🥺💔💔 ❤️❤️💕💕
I am very satisfied with ending tho i'm a bit curios of how bernardo and amiya end up🤔 I am searching for the 2nd book if there is more from this author, looks like there is none. But anyways, 2 thumbs up for you author👍👍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
best novel so far😘🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😍😘 cant relate? just read it, carefull though its full of smuts yet lovely smuts....make you feel hot and love at same time
thanks dear author.. i like this book so so much.. luv it to the bone.. u guys out there gotta read this..its amazing..😘😘 sweet..[img=recommend][img=recommend]
ur story is interesting but when you wrote dis story u only focused on the main character love story u didn't really write about the other character lot story like amiya and bernado. u left us in suspense not knowing what will have to them next. when u write you don't only think as a writer but also has a reader. even when you are worried about the length of d book try ur best and incorporate other character love story there except if u are writing another story entirely about them then u tell us d title of d book. overall ur book is still interesting but when next u are writing think as a reader and not only as a writer 😉😉
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]This story is just the way i like it.Now this book is gonna enter in my favourite books list. I will definetely reccommend this novel to read and only if you are 18+ hehe..🤣🤣
I enjoyed this so much. It was always straigh to the point! It did not have a lot of repetition to keep you spending money! I loved all the characters. I was glad to be able to read the whole book for once! My congratulations to the author. This book captured my interest and I read it straight through without stopping. I am just sad to know I will not be able to finish my other favorit book—I married my young brother-in-law. It had a nice story line, but now the chapters just stopped no matter how much I pay.
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lovely book ,full of intrigue.author you your story is well written with good ending ❤️❤️[img=update]. i want to know other novels you have written.
Though you have confused feelings for the ML , you will eventually warm up to him. and the FL is adorable. i wish the book is little long but i enjoyed it
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love the progression of the story. the characters are easily relatable. hope to read more of your works. always have a good and pleasant time writing.
I love reading this book but its just that from chalter 70 and up, they are all locked Can anyone tell me how to unlock them without sPending money
one of the best book I've read..... each character are great.... story development is very smooth ,flawless... I love it I can't stop laughing n I love the chemistry of both The ML and the FL..... I recommend that it's a must have... in your library[img=recommend]
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I really really love it No long caption God bless Elya the writer I would really love to read more stories from el ya the writer Once again God bless Elya and I love u
Author ,I give you 5 star rating any time, any day. I enjoyed reading this book and have been recommending it. The Story is beautiful and not long, when a book is too lengthy one might lose interest. This is one book I wouldn't mind reading all over again and again.
Dear writer,,how i wish to meet you in person,,you have done me proud by helping me emulsify my imagination greatly,,bravo!!! Lots of love from the 254...xoxo 😍😘
A very good story, theme background everything is perfect and suits it aah I really love it and I appreciate author's writing skills , very good hope to see Bernardo and Amiya story as I am too much excited for that one. Hope our author won't take it too long and if you have already written it let me know I am eagerly waiting for that one. A lot of love and affection to you dear author 💕
This amazing novel is a work of art..A true masterpiece indeed..I really love how the characters evolved and how their emotions developed..They portray a real setting of what is happening nowadays when it come to love..Kudos to you my dearest..
I love the way Stefan , want attention of wirata, n summer too cute in this story 😂I just love his mommy n daddy they both r too cute with each other n very compatible for each other for ramance also ❤️😍
Really good story and development of characters. The transformation of Stefan is delightful and its beaUtiful to see him discover love. James and Ben are fUnny.
just awesome loved it it's perfect in all senses while reading u feel u are seeing the story happening in front of u jus loved it thank u author
I love this book so much! Definitely worth reading! I’m actually on my 3rd or 4th time through. I do wish some of the grammar, spelling, and word choices were fixed, but overall it doesnt take away from the story.
Hello everyone, I'm Elya, your shameless author here. Thank you very much for clicking on to see this novel. This is one of my most favorite novels I've written. I don't want to spoil the story too much, so I won't say much what's going on in the story. So I hope you give it a chance and discover the story yourself. What I can tell you guys here is it's about love as it a romance novel. But every novel presents the story differently, the same with this one. It will make you see the power of love that it can change one person from a ruthless man who doesn't care about the world. The man with arrogance and egos as sky high as Rusian Satellite. and the man who believes that money can buy everything. I put it as a romance-erotic. So it means this story is for 18 years old up. And as it's an erotic story, it means when it comes to love scenes, the camera won't turn to point a flower vase nor a corner of the room. It's will fulfill readers' imagination. I hope you will give the novel and yourself a chance to meet and I hope you will like it. Love from Elya.
Wow... Just finished reading all tge chapters... The book is awesome... When they say romantic and +18 believe it... This is one book where i can say the actions are brought out i still don't have words to describe how good and great this writer is.... Awesome
first of all hats off to Elya for gifting such an amazing romantic erotic fun filled story to webnovel readers. this novel is worth reading guys.trust me <3 :D All the characters are just amazing.i loved the first meeting between Berdie and Amiya <3 i couldn't stop laughing at her escape form Berdie. I would love to have a sequel to this story focusing on Berdie and Amiya. The romantic,erotic moments between Stefan and Wirata will make you horny and wet too ;) hehe. The way how both of them starts developing true feelings for each other is wonderfully explained by Elye. While reading each chapter you feel like watching a movie in real.we readers can feel their emotions,everything is wonderfully detailed by her <3 you are really amazing dear,hope to read more stories of yours<3 have you published your stories elsewhere.i would love to read your works. please consider our request to have a part two of this focusssing on berdie and amiya. <3 god bless dear<3
the best of the best 👌 ever!! I felt all the emotion the author put into...I am still waiting for the author to come back n give us the remaining couples stories for years now. I lost count to how many times I've read this novel n now I know ever bit of this novel like a movie in my head🥰🥰🥰🥰
Amazing Story 😁😍🥵🔥. After reading this story I was totally shocked that how can the author express the every single emotion very carefully 🥞😜🤩 #love #romance #hot 😎🙈😚
OMG this novel is one of the Best a read so far ❤️ thank you so much Elya 🙏🏽 you make me pass through a lot of emotion. I highly recommend to everyone who did not read yet. No regrets for sure.
where are you Elya? why are you not giving us another amazing story??? I have been waiting for you for 4-5 years.
Amazing book...really enjoyed reading it you should really consider adding more of your books on webnovel 🤩🙂
Hello author-nim, I just finished reading your novel and I'm so inloooove with it, as in everything. The plot, characters, the story development. It's just so perfect that I lost sleep just to continue reading it. And I sooo like to read the follow up story for Bernardo and Amiya. Please put it here in Webnovel. Please please. 🙏🏻
I think I have already read this novel 4 times and I can’t get enough. This novel is very similar to lucia but in modern world. Thank you so much author for the great novel you have written. Can you please translate Amiya and Bernando story soon? Please please please please please 🥺💔💔 ❤️❤️💕💕
I am very satisfied with ending tho i'm a bit curios of how bernardo and amiya end up🤔 I am searching for the 2nd book if there is more from this author, looks like there is none. But anyways, 2 thumbs up for you author👍👍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
best novel so far😘🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😍😘 cant relate? just read it, carefull though its full of smuts yet lovely smuts....make you feel hot and love at same time
thanks dear author.. i like this book so so much.. luv it to the bone.. u guys out there gotta read this..its amazing..😘😘 sweet..[img=recommend][img=recommend]
ur story is interesting but when you wrote dis story u only focused on the main character love story u didn't really write about the other character lot story like amiya and bernado. u left us in suspense not knowing what will have to them next. when u write you don't only think as a writer but also has a reader. even when you are worried about the length of d book try ur best and incorporate other character love story there except if u are writing another story entirely about them then u tell us d title of d book. overall ur book is still interesting but when next u are writing think as a reader and not only as a writer 😉😉
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]This story is just the way i like it.Now this book is gonna enter in my favourite books list. I will definetely reccommend this novel to read and only if you are 18+ hehe..🤣🤣
I enjoyed this so much. It was always straigh to the point! It did not have a lot of repetition to keep you spending money! I loved all the characters. I was glad to be able to read the whole book for once! My congratulations to the author. This book captured my interest and I read it straight through without stopping. I am just sad to know I will not be able to finish my other favorit book—I married my young brother-in-law. It had a nice story line, but now the chapters just stopped no matter how much I pay.
Membuka SPOILER lovely book ,full of intrigue.author you your story is well written with good ending ❤️❤️[img=update]. i want to know other novels you have written.
Though you have confused feelings for the ML , you will eventually warm up to him. and the FL is adorable. i wish the book is little long but i enjoyed it
Membuka SPOILER love the progression of the story. the characters are easily relatable. hope to read more of your works. always have a good and pleasant time writing.
I love reading this book but its just that from chalter 70 and up, they are all locked Can anyone tell me how to unlock them without sPending money
one of the best book I've read..... each character are great.... story development is very smooth ,flawless... I love it I can't stop laughing n I love the chemistry of both The ML and the FL..... I recommend that it's a must have... in your library[img=recommend]
Membuka SPOILER I really really love it No long caption God bless Elya the writer I would really love to read more stories from el ya the writer Once again God bless Elya and I love u
Author ,I give you 5 star rating any time, any day. I enjoyed reading this book and have been recommending it. The Story is beautiful and not long, when a book is too lengthy one might lose interest. This is one book I wouldn't mind reading all over again and again.
Dear writer,,how i wish to meet you in person,,you have done me proud by helping me emulsify my imagination greatly,,bravo!!! Lots of love from the 254...xoxo 😍😘
A very good story, theme background everything is perfect and suits it aah I really love it and I appreciate author's writing skills , very good hope to see Bernardo and Amiya story as I am too much excited for that one. Hope our author won't take it too long and if you have already written it let me know I am eagerly waiting for that one. A lot of love and affection to you dear author 💕
This amazing novel is a work of art..A true masterpiece indeed..I really love how the characters evolved and how their emotions developed..They portray a real setting of what is happening nowadays when it come to love..Kudos to you my dearest..
I love the way Stefan , want attention of wirata, n summer too cute in this story 😂I just love his mommy n daddy they both r too cute with each other n very compatible for each other for ramance also ❤️😍
Really good story and development of characters. The transformation of Stefan is delightful and its beaUtiful to see him discover love. James and Ben are fUnny.
just awesome loved it it's perfect in all senses while reading u feel u are seeing the story happening in front of u jus loved it thank u author
I love this book so much! Definitely worth reading! I’m actually on my 3rd or 4th time through. I do wish some of the grammar, spelling, and word choices were fixed, but overall it doesnt take away from the story.
Hello everyone, I'm Elya, your shameless author here. Thank you very much for clicking on to see this novel. This is one of my most favorite novels I've written. I don't want to spoil the story too much, so I won't say much what's going on in the story. So I hope you give it a chance and discover the story yourself. What I can tell you guys here is it's about love as it a romance novel. But every novel presents the story differently, the same with this one. It will make you see the power of love that it can change one person from a ruthless man who doesn't care about the world. The man with arrogance and egos as sky high as Rusian Satellite. and the man who believes that money can buy everything. I put it as a romance-erotic. So it means this story is for 18 years old up. And as it's an erotic story, it means when it comes to love scenes, the camera won't turn to point a flower vase nor a corner of the room. It's will fulfill readers' imagination. I hope you will give the novel and yourself a chance to meet and I hope you will like it. Love from Elya.