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I love this story. This is how the real naturo should other than being this idiot who has a stupid crush that ugly sakura. It's really awesome to see naruto interacting with other characters from other worlds
Recommended By Me. Nice Story With A Reasonable Naruto. Showing both the light and dark side of Naruto Universe, Have Its Own Unique Characteristics.
Well nice read overall just to past time. But as more chapters go.. i lost all the fun to read it. It's getting boring with how slow the story development is. Even i have to skip some chapters. It's really too slow, better if the author put some time skip here and there. I don't know if it's the author intention to highlight naruto emotional development, but i think it's just too much. Thanks for your work anyways.
This aren't many gamerxnaruto crossover fanfictions and even if there are they are abandoned midway into the story which leaves the readers with a void in their hearts. So only wanna say this dont abandon this story and if you want to and couldn't concentrate on it anymore give it to someone else so they can finish it or finish it yourself with timeskips in a few chapters.
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i like your novel , how naruto is getting stronger and more op but it could do with a little time skip because i want to see naruto older than now right now he is still a little kid . If he gets older i want him to have a laid back personality if possible ;) why take things overly serious if you are stronger than everybody else as a kid it is good but the older he gets the more mature he should be with little to no angst a cool person who does not give a **** about most things but will still kick your ass if you cross him :D welp hope you update much more and do not drop it ^^
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The fanfic is quite basic. It holds up to my favorites but sometimes I question if I’m reading a crack fic. I generally like it and above 3 for me is as if I gave you 5 on all of them.
Not a bad fan-fic tbh. It's well written, the story feels like its progressing at a nice, but moderate pace, and it gets the gamer aspects down pretty well. Overall I'd say that it's pretty good and nice to read, except for one small detail. The fucking stage directions. I get that as a new writer you might think that you have to label your dialogue with the name of whoever is speaking, but it's completely unnecessary and actually detracts from the reading experience as a whole. So instead of writing something like Naruto:"..." Lilith:"..." You should write something along the lines of "..." Naruto or Lilith said/asked/replied/questioned/ If you want you can check out this link https://self-publishingschool.com/how-to-write-dialogue/ to get a basic idea of how to properly write dialogue in your story, because your current way of doing it almost ruins your novel for me.
This Naruto Fanfic is One of the Best I have ever read. Easy to read through and good development between characters. Pretty much everything you would want in a fanfic. I don't know if it is Harem (Hopefully not)
Before I start I want to give a disclaimer that I have never held fan-fiction in a good light but having said that... I like this one. Truth be told, it is very obvious that some of the groundwork for the novel draws heavy inspiration from other anime, manga/manhwa, and light novels. Despite this fact, I believe that the writing is fairly decent and only seems to be improving further into the novel. The plot is simplistic yet satisfying and many characters remain truthful to their original portrayals. These are the simplest yet most vital reasons for why I like this fan-fiction above many others I’ve read. Above all else, I would like to address the author. The passion and care that is put into your work is felt by many people and you obviously have a certain level of ability for writing. Your willingness to take risks in your writing and incorporate some ideas that you have seen recommended in comments is actually a rather smart play that will hopefully continue to serve you well. I am certain that as long as you continue with such dedication towards your works that people will always recognize it and support you as you become a better author. Happy Reading Folks, The Monk IY
The story is really good and adds alot of new things that did not show in the manga or anime but I'd wish if you would show some training chapters and make new jutus.
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It's one of the most addictive novel You can find online Other than stability of upgrading of the chapter everything is just exceptional. And thanks for the chapter till now.
I really like this book so far . i hope you wont drop it . I dont need you to rush just take your time and come up with something amazing . lol good luck to you 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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I like the story, It gives you an interesting adventure vibe that makes you read it more. I just hope that in the future there will be a traveling other anime world arc.
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The writing quality is very good with perhaps some grammar but overall it's okay. The story development is very good imo but that's cause I'm biased to OP Naruto. Well it could do with a bit more character development as though they have emotions, they feel a bit one dimensional or lacking. Well I don't like Naruto that's full on hate and wants to abandon the village, but I don't mind him taking revenge at the fear of sounding like a hypocrite but that's me pet peeve, revenge/justice but not betrayal, but meh, it's your story and I won't stop reading ofc. It's a 50-50 for me there. Good though that he called out all of Hiruzens bull****. That dude really irritated me. I can totally understand Choza's reaction, shinobi or not, and I love the way you've built Shukaku. Nothing really on the world it's based in. But that's to be expected as it's a fanfiction. Still a bit more insight but no worries. Not really sure about your update speed but perhaps a bit longer chapters when almost 50% of the content is just exposition. The story is a bit slow imo for being 40 almost chapters deep, but seriously? No pressure, take your time. I understand you're a human and in the end, fanfiction shouldn't take priority over life. I would love to see a bit more skill fusions though because it might become a chore, for both the readers and the writer to keep track of all the skills. Below is a list of possible headings. 1)Household Skills: Cooking, washing and related 2)Throwing weapon mastery and Melee weapon mastery which can further combine to Weapon mastery. 3)Ninja skills: Stealth, trap, assassination, Killing intent, the 3 chakra control excercise also in my opinion(imo), lying, acting etc. Also incase I haven't made it clear, I love your story and really do hope that you continue it as it has all my favourite elements!!
Membuka SPOILER I love this story. This is how the real naturo should other than being this idiot who has a stupid crush that ugly sakura. It's really awesome to see naruto interacting with other characters from other worlds
Recommended By Me. Nice Story With A Reasonable Naruto. Showing both the light and dark side of Naruto Universe, Have Its Own Unique Characteristics.
Well nice read overall just to past time. But as more chapters go.. i lost all the fun to read it. It's getting boring with how slow the story development is. Even i have to skip some chapters. It's really too slow, better if the author put some time skip here and there. I don't know if it's the author intention to highlight naruto emotional development, but i think it's just too much. Thanks for your work anyways.
This aren't many gamerxnaruto crossover fanfictions and even if there are they are abandoned midway into the story which leaves the readers with a void in their hearts. So only wanna say this dont abandon this story and if you want to and couldn't concentrate on it anymore give it to someone else so they can finish it or finish it yourself with timeskips in a few chapters.
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i like your novel , how naruto is getting stronger and more op but it could do with a little time skip because i want to see naruto older than now right now he is still a little kid . If he gets older i want him to have a laid back personality if possible ;) why take things overly serious if you are stronger than everybody else as a kid it is good but the older he gets the more mature he should be with little to no angst a cool person who does not give a **** about most things but will still kick your ass if you cross him :D welp hope you update much more and do not drop it ^^
Membuka SPOILER The fanfic is quite basic. It holds up to my favorites but sometimes I question if I’m reading a crack fic. I generally like it and above 3 for me is as if I gave you 5 on all of them.
Not a bad fan-fic tbh. It's well written, the story feels like its progressing at a nice, but moderate pace, and it gets the gamer aspects down pretty well. Overall I'd say that it's pretty good and nice to read, except for one small detail. The fucking stage directions. I get that as a new writer you might think that you have to label your dialogue with the name of whoever is speaking, but it's completely unnecessary and actually detracts from the reading experience as a whole. So instead of writing something like Naruto:"..." Lilith:"..." You should write something along the lines of "..." Naruto or Lilith said/asked/replied/questioned/ If you want you can check out this link https://self-publishingschool.com/how-to-write-dialogue/ to get a basic idea of how to properly write dialogue in your story, because your current way of doing it almost ruins your novel for me.
This Naruto Fanfic is One of the Best I have ever read. Easy to read through and good development between characters. Pretty much everything you would want in a fanfic. I don't know if it is Harem (Hopefully not)
Before I start I want to give a disclaimer that I have never held fan-fiction in a good light but having said that... I like this one. Truth be told, it is very obvious that some of the groundwork for the novel draws heavy inspiration from other anime, manga/manhwa, and light novels. Despite this fact, I believe that the writing is fairly decent and only seems to be improving further into the novel. The plot is simplistic yet satisfying and many characters remain truthful to their original portrayals. These are the simplest yet most vital reasons for why I like this fan-fiction above many others I’ve read. Above all else, I would like to address the author. The passion and care that is put into your work is felt by many people and you obviously have a certain level of ability for writing. Your willingness to take risks in your writing and incorporate some ideas that you have seen recommended in comments is actually a rather smart play that will hopefully continue to serve you well. I am certain that as long as you continue with such dedication towards your works that people will always recognize it and support you as you become a better author. Happy Reading Folks, The Monk IY
The story is really good and adds alot of new things that did not show in the manga or anime but I'd wish if you would show some training chapters and make new jutus.
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It's one of the most addictive novel You can find online Other than stability of upgrading of the chapter everything is just exceptional. And thanks for the chapter till now.
I really like this book so far . i hope you wont drop it . I dont need you to rush just take your time and come up with something amazing . lol good luck to you 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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I like the story, It gives you an interesting adventure vibe that makes you read it more. I just hope that in the future there will be a traveling other anime world arc.
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This is good. I love with what u doing. Please uodate always. Cant wait to see what will happen in it..😎😆😎😆😎😎😎😉😎😊😎😉☺️😗😍😆😗☺️😍😗☺️😗😍😉☺️😙😍😗☺️😊😍😙🙂😉😘😆🙂😗☺️☺️😙😍😙☺️😙😍😙🙂😉😍😗🙂😙😍😙☺️😍😙🙂😙🙂😙😍😗☺️😙😍😙😚😊😃😉😎😉😋😉😃😉😚😉😎😊😎😙😎😙😎😗😚😗😎😗
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The writing quality is very good with perhaps some grammar but overall it's okay. The story development is very good imo but that's cause I'm biased to OP Naruto. Well it could do with a bit more character development as though they have emotions, they feel a bit one dimensional or lacking. Well I don't like Naruto that's full on hate and wants to abandon the village, but I don't mind him taking revenge at the fear of sounding like a hypocrite but that's me pet peeve, revenge/justice but not betrayal, but meh, it's your story and I won't stop reading ofc. It's a 50-50 for me there. Good though that he called out all of Hiruzens bull****. That dude really irritated me. I can totally understand Choza's reaction, shinobi or not, and I love the way you've built Shukaku. Nothing really on the world it's based in. But that's to be expected as it's a fanfiction. Still a bit more insight but no worries. Not really sure about your update speed but perhaps a bit longer chapters when almost 50% of the content is just exposition. The story is a bit slow imo for being 40 almost chapters deep, but seriously? No pressure, take your time. I understand you're a human and in the end, fanfiction shouldn't take priority over life. I would love to see a bit more skill fusions though because it might become a chore, for both the readers and the writer to keep track of all the skills. Below is a list of possible headings. 1)Household Skills: Cooking, washing and related 2)Throwing weapon mastery and Melee weapon mastery which can further combine to Weapon mastery. 3)Ninja skills: Stealth, trap, assassination, Killing intent, the 3 chakra control excercise also in my opinion(imo), lying, acting etc. Also incase I haven't made it clear, I love your story and really do hope that you continue it as it has all my favourite elements!!
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