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the more I read the more I feel like it's not GOT,where will you find japanese in westeros..nowhere!!! all those anime characters that were brought in don't fucking belong in GOT and are useless and redundant so much so that it is no longer a got fanfiction but just a fucking weard mambo jambo of a retarded kid
I think it's a good story for 1 it's a fan fiction for a reason and to bring these characters into this kind of story, honestly I can't wait for when his harem is complete and he has them all trained to face the ultimate enemy. The white walkers so I like the idea I really do.
could of been better I liked the idea behind it. pretty sure this story is now abandoned....................................................
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I am still waiting please i want a chapter??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
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Honestly I was excited at first, but as I read more of this crap I just wanted to murd€r this idiot. Truly disappointed in the writing, it might be a fanfiction but all stories should make sense. Just give your a failure.
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To many "OC" characters from a plethora of different animes. To the point that this doesnt even feel like a GOT/ASOIAF fanfic. Awful grammer and awful logic behind the MCs actions. So overall, just another awful Harem fanfic.
Really to much description of cheat, most likely wrong usage of cheat on a story, and also this is game of thrones and when imagining those character as an anime really making weird taste for it i would like to give 0 for character design but lowest score is 1
i am still waiting please i want a chapter or ill have trouble sleeping tonight i dont want a all nighter again they bloody suck so please give me my chapter atleast please
Just great love it best story i read in while not much game of thones and you have made it better then most so thanks for read hope to see more man
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I like this fanfic but harem is a very bad idea, especially such stupid like this. If you want to destroy your story make it harem. Without harem it would be much more better.
Writing Quality: 3 - Stability of Updates: 4 - World Background: 3 Story Development: 3 - Character Design: 1 -Undevelopped foetus body has clear mental faculties... BULLSHIT -Undevelopped foetus body can "cultivate" already -The MC is a dumbass that doesn't know discretion (creepy perverted baby) -The MC is OP, even though the author said he wouldn't be -Most of his greatness is summed up, instead of being shown -No character descriptions. The relevant ones just happen to look like anime characters the author doesn't have to write anything, the reader already knows, or can just google it -The characters from other fandoms are flat, cheap OCs with similar names, looks and skills -The MC decided to start a harem like it's the most natural thing to do in Westeross it looks like the Seven's Faith decided to condone polygamy... NOT!!! -Grown up noble insult the sister of the lord paramount in his own home... BULLSHIT -Grown up noble challenge the 8yo nephew of the lord paramount to a duel to death... BULLSHIT I expected something a bit more... prepared. I guess I was betrayed by my expectations
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Another novel with OP, Pervert MC. ( Again this stupid shi* with wishes) All New Charakters are Woman, ( for his Harem) Whyyy harem ? Tell me... Wich normal man can handle more than 1 Woman ? Grammer is bad Its just a bad Fanfiction
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Another uberbaby MC refusing to drink mother's breast milk... ignoring the fact baby instincts should overpower whatever adu1t intellect is present... also get ur facts right... in noble society mothers don't feed their own babies nursemaids do... edit: and done too many OCs with appearances from other franchises this ain't GoT anymore
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GOT is life guys. With the upcoming season and a new fanfiction awesome. Overpowered character - he is going to raise hell in planetos. Waiting to se how he will become an king, with ao much kingly personalities our author has given him , hell no he will be satisfied with dorne only. Request to the author please be regular and please don't drop it like everyone does. You have good starting point . If you need ideas just give a holler. ALL HAIL THE KING..
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Overpowered mc but I love op characters I just hope he doesn't conquer the world instantly and I hope he hides most of his magic unless he needs it. Also in my opinion since he is so strong this novel will be really short he might as well build up a strong enough empire to start conquering the multiverse maybe Harry potter or even skyrim would be cool mostly in my opinion.
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the more I read the more I feel like it's not GOT,where will you find japanese in westeros..nowhere!!! all those anime characters that were brought in don't fucking belong in GOT and are useless and redundant so much so that it is no longer a got fanfiction but just a fucking weard mambo jambo of a retarded kid
I think it's a good story for 1 it's a fan fiction for a reason and to bring these characters into this kind of story, honestly I can't wait for when his harem is complete and he has them all trained to face the ultimate enemy. The white walkers so I like the idea I really do.
could of been better I liked the idea behind it. pretty sure this story is now abandoned....................................................
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Only one you must read thise👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I am still waiting please i want a chapter??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
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Honestly I was excited at first, but as I read more of this crap I just wanted to murd€r this idiot. Truly disappointed in the writing, it might be a fanfiction but all stories should make sense. Just give your a failure.
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Membuka SPOILER To many "OC" characters from a plethora of different animes. To the point that this doesnt even feel like a GOT/ASOIAF fanfic. Awful grammer and awful logic behind the MCs actions. So overall, just another awful Harem fanfic.
Really to much description of cheat, most likely wrong usage of cheat on a story, and also this is game of thrones and when imagining those character as an anime really making weird taste for it i would like to give 0 for character design but lowest score is 1
i am still waiting please i want a chapter or ill have trouble sleeping tonight i dont want a all nighter again they bloody suck so please give me my chapter atleast please
Just great love it best story i read in while not much game of thones and you have made it better then most so thanks for read hope to see more man
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I like this fanfic but harem is a very bad idea, especially such stupid like this. If you want to destroy your story make it harem. Without harem it would be much more better.
Writing Quality: 3 - Stability of Updates: 4 - World Background: 3 Story Development: 3 - Character Design: 1 -Undevelopped foetus body has clear mental faculties... BULLSHIT -Undevelopped foetus body can "cultivate" already -The MC is a dumbass that doesn't know discretion (creepy perverted baby) -The MC is OP, even though the author said he wouldn't be -Most of his greatness is summed up, instead of being shown -No character descriptions. The relevant ones just happen to look like anime characters the author doesn't have to write anything, the reader already knows, or can just google it -The characters from other fandoms are flat, cheap OCs with similar names, looks and skills -The MC decided to start a harem like it's the most natural thing to do in Westeross it looks like the Seven's Faith decided to condone polygamy... NOT!!! -Grown up noble insult the sister of the lord paramount in his own home... BULLSHIT -Grown up noble challenge the 8yo nephew of the lord paramount to a duel to death... BULLSHIT I expected something a bit more... prepared. I guess I was betrayed by my expectations
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Another novel with OP, Pervert MC. ( Again this stupid shi* with wishes) All New Charakters are Woman, ( for his Harem) Whyyy harem ? Tell me... Wich normal man can handle more than 1 Woman ? Grammer is bad Its just a bad Fanfiction
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Another uberbaby MC refusing to drink mother's breast milk... ignoring the fact baby instincts should overpower whatever adu1t intellect is present... also get ur facts right... in noble society mothers don't feed their own babies nursemaids do... edit: and done too many OCs with appearances from other franchises this ain't GoT anymore
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GOT is life guys. With the upcoming season and a new fanfiction awesome. Overpowered character - he is going to raise hell in planetos. Waiting to se how he will become an king, with ao much kingly personalities our author has given him , hell no he will be satisfied with dorne only. Request to the author please be regular and please don't drop it like everyone does. You have good starting point . If you need ideas just give a holler. ALL HAIL THE KING..
Membuka SPOILER Overpowered mc but I love op characters I just hope he doesn't conquer the world instantly and I hope he hides most of his magic unless he needs it. Also in my opinion since he is so strong this novel will be really short he might as well build up a strong enough empire to start conquering the multiverse maybe Harry potter or even skyrim would be cool mostly in my opinion.
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