Bab 7: Chapter 7 - Kidnapped 2
Joe P.O.V
"Damn" I said
"What did you say!!!"
"Godfatger, forgive me, your child is not in his room," my men said in a panic.
I fired a gun on his head and whispered "incompetent"
"Immediately find my child throughout the island, and ask for help from the marine so that my child can be found"
"okay, Godfather"
in town
"what happened, suddenly a lot of mafia members came" asked one of the people "don't know, but it seems this is bad" someone else answered
"attention" shouted the mafia "we're here looking for a child from Godfather Joe, if anyone hides him then they will be killed"
"What!?! You can't do that," said one of the women in the crowd
"Shut up" answered one of the mafia and shot the woman
"if there is one of you who is blocking our search, then you will all be killed"
"quickly find a young master" told the mafia
Akmal POV
Where am I? I looked around and it was like a room, and it seemed like my hands were tied by a rope
ohh yeah I'm on the beach and ... damn, I didn't expect Jane to do that, I can't forgive her
"well well, young master" the sound of jane entering the room with some pirates "I didn't think you were fooled so easily, even though you were very smart for your age"
Damn, the disease in my old world relapsed again, I already knew this was a pirate world but I was still careless, it was true my mother's words used to be, my foolishness couldn't be cured
"what are you doing jane, let me go"
"what do you say young master of course I can't do it"
"why are you doing this"
"why ..." he paused and smiled "because of the young master's revenge, and also money"
What!!! I said in my heart, why did this happen to me, sialll
And also somehow in my heart I really want to kill them, especially Jane
"I will not forgive you. I will torture you until you beg to die," I said, glaring at Jane
But it seems my threat isn't taken seriously because they laugh
"Try it if you can, young master," jane said as she left the room with the pirate
And I was left alone, "I won't forgive you jane !!!"
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