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Difference in age ..can stop them to like each other..DIYA (a pretty girl) is one years old than boy AYUSH( an innocent boy).'what will happen to them..to know stay with me..do like give some rate...
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Jilid 1
- 1 a day before MY WEDDING 5 years ago
- 2 FROM START WHERE WE MET 5 years ago
- 3 UNKNOWN TO KNOWN 5 years ago
- 4 WHY I AM ATTRACTED TO YOU 5 years ago
- 5 CARE ....CARE AND CARE 5 years ago
- 6 SWEET REVENGE 5 years ago
- 7 DON'T GO ..PLZ 5 years ago
- 8 SHE WAS MY.... 5 years ago
- 9 I said ....I...like you... 5 years ago
- 10 FARE WELL-no more meet..no more greet 5 years ago
- 11 when FIRE met with WATER 5 years ago
- 12 RISHAB HAS BEEN CHANGED... 5 years ago
- 13 WHERE IS SHE ? 5 years ago
- 14 ...#2 a day before her wedding 5 years ago
- 15 ON MY WEDDING 5 years ago
- 16 ON MY WEDDING -2 5 years ago
- 17 ON MY WEDDING -3 5 years ago
- 18 EPILOGUE 5 years ago
I read all the 11 chapters that has been uploaded until now and I would say that... The story is good and it reflects the Indian society quite well. I mean it is indeed seemed inappropriate to marry a girl who is older than you (for commoners). But when it comes to the writing the author need to improve alot. The author needs to improve her grammar and sentence formation. She also needs to learn to use proper punctuation. Don't forget to Capitalize the first letter of the sentence. I also noticed the names also in small caps. Overall it is a nice effort to write. We all need to improve. I wish you luck for your work❤ Keep on reading too and don't rush to write. Take your time to write. I wish to see you improving soon. Best of Luck!!