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One of the best stories on the site but what happened? Where are you author sama?!?? Can someone please continue this or give us an update on whats going to happen? Please
Thank you for your creativity. You have uncovered one of the original plots. It's clever, beautiful, detailed. It's beyond primitive: come, see, win. I look forward to the sequel.
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Membuka SPOILER please update this great story ! ........................................................................................................................................
Welp another novel that just stops updating... it was such a great story too and I was hoping to finish it but...now it seems to have been all but forgotten.
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I love this novel and cant wait to see more chapters released. Keep up the amazing work and dedication all starwars fans have come to know n love.π
Bro I need to know if youβre gonna update this storyπ. Now to those reading the reviews. This is by far, my favorite fan fiction of star-wars. This author has good knowledge on the Star Wars world and I recommend giving this one a try.
keep going...............................................................................................................................................................................................................
keep going.............................................................................................................................................................................................................
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This book keeps getting better and better I canβt stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so Iβll be able to read it thank you ππππππππππππππππ
A very good story and solid character design. I hope that you continue to update the story, it has great potential and can create a new star wars eu
please update ...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Awesome read! hope it will make it till completion. and i hope he will get a Promotion as he is still a Apprentice haha. Keep up the good work!
******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
Can you please update, I dislike cliff hangers or novels being dropped please write another if you would be so kind. ppppppppplllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
This is a great Star Wars fanfic I have read but if the Author doesnβt have a stable update time. Every οΏΌday I look to see if The author οΏΌuploaded one chapter
Excellent story with interesting characters. Worth multiple readings. Wonderful look on Earth and if it was in the star wars universe. Hopefully author will come back to finishing it.
i am absolutely loving this story! not only that the combination of the kotor games with this is amazing, i was wondering if by chance you would have an ai controlled destroyer that is filled to the brim with sentinels from halo? since they were used for both offence and repairs. a ship that is a mobile repair station could be a useful support ship.
Membuka SPOILER Absolutely stunning novel cannot wait for more chapters so I can read them until on caught up once more. Keep up the good work I hope you don't ever drop this story it is by far the most entertaining one I have read containing Star Wars and I love the way your portraying the human race Didn't expect the star forge Causing humans not to have force abilities but Overall it's a wonderful story I recommend it highly. I have shared the story multiple times with friends and coworkers.
Usually I give 5 stars for stories I enjoy, not really looking at the criteria, however this is one of the few stories that actually deserve it. Excellent story buildup, interesting characters. The story follows the path of logic and so far is really immersive. There are a few grammatical errors, but not nearly enough to make it unreadable. Thank you for a fascinating Star Wars fanfic author
Im so happy found this awesome fanfic.. Keep stroong work broo.. Dont push yourself too hard.. Just hoping you dont have writer block,its suck.
I have to admit this is one of the best star wars fanfics I have read great job πππππππππππππ¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬
Good Star Wars fanfic. Some of my favorite parts of that galaxy with happy surprises mixed in. The author Killmorger from the beginning impresses me with the stories being told here. Grammar and other language challenges are all low on my priorities list on these multinational novel platforms. Even so, there is marked improvement I'm seeing through this entertaining project. Thanks Killmorger.
Really good, the story is cool and I have not found a similar SW fanfic (and I have searched well believe me) cool characters and we await the sequel.
Keep it coming really great work, hope you continue for quite a while at least to the end of the clone wars era. Also is ravenger a real ship looked it up saw a ravager but very different.
Great star wars fan fiction, best I've seen, would recommend you up sidious power level cause Jack is getting slightly broken, although revan is most likely much stronger than sidious but it will be boring if he just destroys everyone.
This is one of the best fanfics i have read to date. I need More. I look forward to if/when it gets some more updates. I cant wait to see where this novel goes next.
One of the best stories on the site but what happened? Where are you author sama?!?? Can someone please continue this or give us an update on whats going to happen? Please
Thank you for your creativity. You have uncovered one of the original plots. It's clever, beautiful, detailed. It's beyond primitive: come, see, win. I look forward to the sequel.
Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp
Membuka SPOILER please update this great story ! ........................................................................................................................................
Welp another novel that just stops updating... it was such a great story too and I was hoping to finish it but...now it seems to have been all but forgotten.
Membuka SPOILER I love this novel and cant wait to see more chapters released. Keep up the amazing work and dedication all starwars fans have come to know n love.π
Bro I need to know if youβre gonna update this storyπ. Now to those reading the reviews. This is by far, my favorite fan fiction of star-wars. This author has good knowledge on the Star Wars world and I recommend giving this one a try.
keep going...............................................................................................................................................................................................................
keep going.............................................................................................................................................................................................................
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This book keeps getting better and better I canβt stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so Iβll be able to read it thank you ππππππππππππππππ
A very good story and solid character design. I hope that you continue to update the story, it has great potential and can create a new star wars eu
please update ...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Awesome read! hope it will make it till completion. and i hope he will get a Promotion as he is still a Apprentice haha. Keep up the good work!
******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
Can you please update, I dislike cliff hangers or novels being dropped please write another if you would be so kind. ppppppppplllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
This is a great Star Wars fanfic I have read but if the Author doesnβt have a stable update time. Every οΏΌday I look to see if The author οΏΌuploaded one chapter
Excellent story with interesting characters. Worth multiple readings. Wonderful look on Earth and if it was in the star wars universe. Hopefully author will come back to finishing it.
i am absolutely loving this story! not only that the combination of the kotor games with this is amazing, i was wondering if by chance you would have an ai controlled destroyer that is filled to the brim with sentinels from halo? since they were used for both offence and repairs. a ship that is a mobile repair station could be a useful support ship.
Membuka SPOILER Absolutely stunning novel cannot wait for more chapters so I can read them until on caught up once more. Keep up the good work I hope you don't ever drop this story it is by far the most entertaining one I have read containing Star Wars and I love the way your portraying the human race Didn't expect the star forge Causing humans not to have force abilities but Overall it's a wonderful story I recommend it highly. I have shared the story multiple times with friends and coworkers.
Usually I give 5 stars for stories I enjoy, not really looking at the criteria, however this is one of the few stories that actually deserve it. Excellent story buildup, interesting characters. The story follows the path of logic and so far is really immersive. There are a few grammatical errors, but not nearly enough to make it unreadable. Thank you for a fascinating Star Wars fanfic author
Im so happy found this awesome fanfic.. Keep stroong work broo.. Dont push yourself too hard.. Just hoping you dont have writer block,its suck.
I have to admit this is one of the best star wars fanfics I have read great job πππππππππππππ¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬
Good Star Wars fanfic. Some of my favorite parts of that galaxy with happy surprises mixed in. The author Killmorger from the beginning impresses me with the stories being told here. Grammar and other language challenges are all low on my priorities list on these multinational novel platforms. Even so, there is marked improvement I'm seeing through this entertaining project. Thanks Killmorger.
Really good, the story is cool and I have not found a similar SW fanfic (and I have searched well believe me) cool characters and we await the sequel.
Keep it coming really great work, hope you continue for quite a while at least to the end of the clone wars era. Also is ravenger a real ship looked it up saw a ravager but very different.
Great star wars fan fiction, best I've seen, would recommend you up sidious power level cause Jack is getting slightly broken, although revan is most likely much stronger than sidious but it will be boring if he just destroys everyone.
This is one of the best fanfics i have read to date. I need More. I look forward to if/when it gets some more updates. I cant wait to see where this novel goes next.