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A masterpiece truly something that makes the world a better place just by existing but sadly we have parted ways
Haven't read the novel yet but i got a question Author-san is Mc chaotic neutral or true natural........................................ ..........................................................................
i don't like this because i he didn't kill his father asgaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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Is this drop 💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧☔☔☔☔☔☔☔☔☔☔☔☔☔☔☔
its gud ma guy .............................................................................................................................
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Is there gonna be a new chapter? because i really like this and would like to see it continue but all is up to the author. This is a really good story :)
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really good novel wish you didnt drop ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
It is a good novel and i cant wait till a new cbaoter comes out I just hope the author is safe
more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I HOPE THAT THE AUTHOR WILL CONTINUE WRITING THIS FAN FIC AND THAT'S ALL NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
So I’m just writing this because I really like this novel and I just remembered about it but it’s been so long and you still haven’t updated so is it dropped?
I am giving 3 star as this story is good. But personally this is not my cup of tea. It's boring as hell. ///////////// Mc is op, omniscient, omnipotent, universe creator and so on. Mc is still a child mind person though. He create and give power like nothing for free because compared to them he is the one strongest and actually their creator in secret. Mc like to play family family as he just make family and have mother and father who he respect while they don't even know that their son is the one who created them. Mc is too op that it become boring. (((((((((((((( I didn't like it because after reaching the summary I got confused as author is idiot for not properly explaining everything in summary like this is a complete op mc story. But you guys may like it. Yes no harem and less romance. Story is omnipotent. Strongest to strongest. But still thank you author for writing.
keep up the good work (: Stupid 140 character restriction 123456789012345678901234567890123456789012345678901234567890123456789012345678901234567890
Love this story. Would you accept a Game of Thrones fanfiction challenge? 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤝👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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I like it so far, just hope you can stop the reincarnation when visiting new world and nerfing the mc with quest to limit him, however everything else was enjoyable to read so far 👏👏👏👌
1.6 : Bro what the **** is going on at this point ? Why are you doing all of this ? You kill all your clan children, but somehow make your family members universaly oped ffor no reason, you didn't even care about them 2 chapters ago. And now you make thse 2 guys op without any reason yet again, who gives a **** about being a founder of konoha, you could dominate the fucking world and you choose not to do that. You don't even understand what you're doing it's getting more and more ****ty.
Membuka SPOILER
The start of the story and mc personality is so ****ty that whatever you had planned doesn’t matter, maybe 1/100 of your readers actually continued while the rest left
I might have just started to read novels but I love this one it's super addictive. At first I thought it was dropped when I got to know it wasnt I was so happy
For someone with a supposed good karma,........ he just slaughtered a bunch of kids for points............................. cold to his birth parents.............................................. imagine just saying yes and no to them and everyone else.. letting them think your retarted for all he care just for what, extra time for cultivating his soul................ even villains from chinese novels have at least are better than that......
Membuka SPOILER
Good good authors Sama is good at making stories/chapters and fanfic keep going 😈👹👹😈👹👹😈👍👍👍👍👍🐯🐯🐯😈🐻😈👹😈👹😈🐻😈🐯😈😈😈😈😈 good and mc if a badass
Love what your doing keep it up :).....................................................................................................................................................................................................
This fanfiction main character is very stupid. Author is super lazy, he skipps whatever is possible. The interactions are basically dead. And to publish this comment I need 140 characters.
A masterpiece truly something that makes the world a better place just by existing but sadly we have parted ways
Haven't read the novel yet but i got a question Author-san is Mc chaotic neutral or true natural........................................ ..........................................................................
i don't like this because i he didn't kill his father asgaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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Is this drop 💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧💧☔☔☔☔☔☔☔☔☔☔☔☔☔☔☔
its gud ma guy .............................................................................................................................
Words Words Words Words Words Words Words Words Words Words Words Words Words Words Words Words Words Words Words Words Words Words Words Words
Is there gonna be a new chapter? because i really like this and would like to see it continue but all is up to the author. This is a really good story :)
Kapan Up?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
really good novel wish you didnt drop ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
It is a good novel and i cant wait till a new cbaoter comes out I just hope the author is safe
more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I HOPE THAT THE AUTHOR WILL CONTINUE WRITING THIS FAN FIC AND THAT'S ALL NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
So I’m just writing this because I really like this novel and I just remembered about it but it’s been so long and you still haven’t updated so is it dropped?
I am giving 3 star as this story is good. But personally this is not my cup of tea. It's boring as hell. ///////////// Mc is op, omniscient, omnipotent, universe creator and so on. Mc is still a child mind person though. He create and give power like nothing for free because compared to them he is the one strongest and actually their creator in secret. Mc like to play family family as he just make family and have mother and father who he respect while they don't even know that their son is the one who created them. Mc is too op that it become boring. (((((((((((((( I didn't like it because after reaching the summary I got confused as author is idiot for not properly explaining everything in summary like this is a complete op mc story. But you guys may like it. Yes no harem and less romance. Story is omnipotent. Strongest to strongest. But still thank you author for writing.
keep up the good work (: Stupid 140 character restriction 123456789012345678901234567890123456789012345678901234567890123456789012345678901234567890
Love this story. Would you accept a Game of Thrones fanfiction challenge? 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤝👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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I like it so far, just hope you can stop the reincarnation when visiting new world and nerfing the mc with quest to limit him, however everything else was enjoyable to read so far 👏👏👏👌
1.6 : Bro what the **** is going on at this point ? Why are you doing all of this ? You kill all your clan children, but somehow make your family members universaly oped ffor no reason, you didn't even care about them 2 chapters ago. And now you make thse 2 guys op without any reason yet again, who gives a **** about being a founder of konoha, you could dominate the fucking world and you choose not to do that. You don't even understand what you're doing it's getting more and more ****ty.
Membuka SPOILER The start of the story and mc personality is so ****ty that whatever you had planned doesn’t matter, maybe 1/100 of your readers actually continued while the rest left
I might have just started to read novels but I love this one it's super addictive. At first I thought it was dropped when I got to know it wasnt I was so happy
For someone with a supposed good karma,........ he just slaughtered a bunch of kids for points............................. cold to his birth parents.............................................. imagine just saying yes and no to them and everyone else.. letting them think your retarted for all he care just for what, extra time for cultivating his soul................ even villains from chinese novels have at least are better than that......
Membuka SPOILER Good good authors Sama is good at making stories/chapters and fanfic keep going 😈👹👹😈👹👹😈👍👍👍👍👍🐯🐯🐯😈🐻😈👹😈👹😈🐻😈🐯😈😈😈😈😈 good and mc if a badass
Love what your doing keep it up :).....................................................................................................................................................................................................
This fanfiction main character is very stupid. Author is super lazy, he skipps whatever is possible. The interactions are basically dead. And to publish this comment I need 140 characters.