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Darkness

that's all I have been seeing for a very long time. I wish I could have seen the world again, I wish I could have talked to people again just kidding who am i trying fool i don't really care anymore, letting the darkness seep into me, strangely comforting. That was until I heard a deep voice yell in a commanding tone.

"WAKE UP !!"

My eyes burst open but before I could get my next thought in I heard a middle-aged women's voice "Dai's awake there's no need to worry" Concerned about my surrounding's I look around and the only words that come to my head are ' An orphanage huh'. I try to get up but as I try I notice the difficulty in it making me concerned about my body's health I look down and am baffled by what I see.

'A Child?'

The middle-aged women's voice returned breaking my train of thought whispering " sweetie are you hungry" without any hesitation the women inserts a bottle into my mouth forcing an innate instinct of drinking until I was full.

Lazily I then thought ' this is too much for me right now I'm a child so discovery time later sleep time now'

Before any opposing decisions can be made sleep took over sending me to dreamland.


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