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Another wish Fanfic where the MC is the most OP thing alive, not really worth reading since it is just one of many like it. Author seems to like to insert an OP OC into an already pre-existing World and changing some parts of it to fit his own View of things. [Dragonborn banished from the DxD World because the Dragon's there feared him and send him to the World of Skyrim.]
I tried to read it and understand the novel believe me i tried. But i just dont know what is happening ,who is he fighting, the timeline, his power, basically tour novel dont make any since so drop it or rewrite it .
Yea plz do I just finished reading what was here and got hooked on the not a care op+broke curbstomping action and don't want it to stop.................
Some of this works for me, except no point in Issei beyond his parents and weak perv pals. Why limit girls to 4? How is 4 a harem? So many girls in DxD franchise alone, is well beyond 4. If not getting more girls out in the multiverses, what's the point in leaving? The reincarnated protagonist is already ridiculously OP. Akeno as main wife, all other wives move in and out around back in with protagonist husband. Everybody has some of their own interests or issues. Sometimes in other dimensions pick up new knowledge, skill or artifact and sometimes add to the family. Thank you for your story.
Overall: 1.8. Writting quality : 3 Stability ofnupdates: 2 Story development: 1 Character design: 1 World background: 2 Why? This story had potential to be a cool adventure. Instead it becomes the ultimate power trip from ch 1 with wndless cheat room mod usage, murder of a butjillion dragons, and absolutely no plot. Like the plot is whether the author's boredom can be assauged and I can tell it does not even do that. Overall its boring. If you have to read it, just zoom through the first 6 or 8 chapters and then close it. Its already end game at that point. Nothing else to develop.
i made this review for one main reason, i want to thank you author for FINALLY being someone who made their MC make logical wishes with a god. "you have one wish" WHY THE F**K WOULD SOMEONE ASK FOR A SYSTEM WITHOUT FIRST ASKING TO BE A GOD. so thank you author-san for making his first request to be a god, followed by invincible and overpowered. it feels very refreshing
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i cant believe i missed this :( searching for a good one for so long im looking at all the novels youve wroet and they are all gud! -----------------------
For a skyrim fan fic it's kinda cool and unique. Don't make him just kill dragons thought make him kill gods and stuff? -------------------- Zzzz --------------------
Is it bad that my old chuuni wounds just opened? I just had to hold back from saying Fus Ro Da. LOL wait damn it, text still counts! Kuh! *coughs up golden blood* "Victory or..." You know the drill! Hue hue...
Fun read, not too serious and not too braindead. A good read to relax back and have a blast. Won't lie, I'd prefer less caps and a bit more effort on the grammar and character development.
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Its an ok story ig it's just not for me then the (AN)'s are annoying it breaks you away from the already irritating struggle of the story 🤷🏽♂️ has potential for the future interesting idea but I personally couldn't dig it . Sorry
Writing 4: I don't have a problem with grammar, some work on the style (intruding author's notes, pacing) Updates 4.5: I never give 5 stars on principle Story dev, Char design, World background 3: unfazed with reincarnation, unfazed with transmigration, lazy guy suddenly capable of grinding for 10h straight, no forethough before actions, suddenly decided to make a big cluster**** before even having a proper base etablished in the world. It was a succession of cheats without much thinking on the part of the mc. Changes made on DxD world without much warning. Expecting some clarifications on later chapters
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dont kill me pl0x man. the thomas mod is funny lol cant wait for the plot being !++!+!+!+!+!+!++!+!+!+!+!++!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!++!+!+!++!+!+!+!++!+!+!!+!
Altho the start doesn't really have a plot i understand the comment saying that a plot will start and the start is just for fun which i find cool. His abilities is cool n stuff good luck please update!
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Who else is 17, lazy, like watching anime and playing video game? The summary almost scared me half to death 💀. S Sc Sca Scar Scary Scar Sca Sc S
Thomas the train 🚂 mod. Enough said. 🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂 🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂 🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂
Yup this is great for early chap dont know for the future. I prefer this than the others that you always rewrite. Dont rush for the story and plot! Make slow pace but steady! But of course we need harem path!
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Like to see that someone is actually changing the plot so that they don't just follow the original plot and it's the same as the original work .👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Another wish Fanfic where the MC is the most OP thing alive, not really worth reading since it is just one of many like it. Author seems to like to insert an OP OC into an already pre-existing World and changing some parts of it to fit his own View of things. [Dragonborn banished from the DxD World because the Dragon's there feared him and send him to the World of Skyrim.]
I tried to read it and understand the novel believe me i tried. But i just dont know what is happening ,who is he fighting, the timeline, his power, basically tour novel dont make any since so drop it or rewrite it .
Yea plz do I just finished reading what was here and got hooked on the not a care op+broke curbstomping action and don't want it to stop.................
Some of this works for me, except no point in Issei beyond his parents and weak perv pals. Why limit girls to 4? How is 4 a harem? So many girls in DxD franchise alone, is well beyond 4. If not getting more girls out in the multiverses, what's the point in leaving? The reincarnated protagonist is already ridiculously OP. Akeno as main wife, all other wives move in and out around back in with protagonist husband. Everybody has some of their own interests or issues. Sometimes in other dimensions pick up new knowledge, skill or artifact and sometimes add to the family. Thank you for your story.
Overall: 1.8. Writting quality : 3 Stability ofnupdates: 2 Story development: 1 Character design: 1 World background: 2 Why? This story had potential to be a cool adventure. Instead it becomes the ultimate power trip from ch 1 with wndless cheat room mod usage, murder of a butjillion dragons, and absolutely no plot. Like the plot is whether the author's boredom can be assauged and I can tell it does not even do that. Overall its boring. If you have to read it, just zoom through the first 6 or 8 chapters and then close it. Its already end game at that point. Nothing else to develop.
i made this review for one main reason, i want to thank you author for FINALLY being someone who made their MC make logical wishes with a god. "you have one wish" WHY THE F**K WOULD SOMEONE ASK FOR A SYSTEM WITHOUT FIRST ASKING TO BE A GOD. so thank you author-san for making his first request to be a god, followed by invincible and overpowered. it feels very refreshing
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i cant believe i missed this :( searching for a good one for so long im looking at all the novels youve wroet and they are all gud! -----------------------
For a skyrim fan fic it's kinda cool and unique. Don't make him just kill dragons thought make him kill gods and stuff? -------------------- Zzzz --------------------
Is it bad that my old chuuni wounds just opened? I just had to hold back from saying Fus Ro Da. LOL wait damn it, text still counts! Kuh! *coughs up golden blood* "Victory or..." You know the drill! Hue hue...
Fun read, not too serious and not too braindead. A good read to relax back and have a blast. Won't lie, I'd prefer less caps and a bit more effort on the grammar and character development.
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Membuka SPOILER Its an ok story ig it's just not for me then the (AN)'s are annoying it breaks you away from the already irritating struggle of the story 🤷🏽♂️ has potential for the future interesting idea but I personally couldn't dig it . Sorry
Writing 4: I don't have a problem with grammar, some work on the style (intruding author's notes, pacing) Updates 4.5: I never give 5 stars on principle Story dev, Char design, World background 3: unfazed with reincarnation, unfazed with transmigration, lazy guy suddenly capable of grinding for 10h straight, no forethough before actions, suddenly decided to make a big cluster**** before even having a proper base etablished in the world. It was a succession of cheats without much thinking on the part of the mc. Changes made on DxD world without much warning. Expecting some clarifications on later chapters
Skyrim new 🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂
dont kill me pl0x man. the thomas mod is funny lol cant wait for the plot being !++!+!+!+!+!+!++!+!+!+!+!++!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!++!+!+!++!+!+!+!++!+!+!!+!
Altho the start doesn't really have a plot i understand the comment saying that a plot will start and the start is just for fun which i find cool. His abilities is cool n stuff good luck please update!
Membuka SPOILER (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ ✧ﾟ･: *ヽ(◕ヮ◕ヽ) (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ ✧ﾟ･: *ヽ(◕ヮ◕ヽ) (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ ✧ﾟ･: *ヽ(◕ヮ◕ヽ) (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ ✧ﾟ･: *ヽ(◕ヮ◕ヽ) (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ ✧ﾟ･: *ヽ(◕ヮ◕ヽ) (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ ✧ﾟ･: *ヽ(◕ヮ◕ヽ)
Who else is 17, lazy, like watching anime and playing video game? The summary almost scared me half to death 💀. S Sc Sca Scar Scary Scar Sca Sc S
Thomas the train 🚂 mod. Enough said. 🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂 🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂 🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂
Yup this is great for early chap dont know for the future. I prefer this than the others that you always rewrite. Dont rush for the story and plot! Make slow pace but steady! But of course we need harem path!
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Membuka SPOILER Like to see that someone is actually changing the plot so that they don't just follow the original plot and it's the same as the original work .👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Ok it good update you ....people......nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnñnnnñnnnnnnnnnnñnnnnnnnkkkkk
lol id do the same if i was in his position leave no chances oppppness ftw >:) 14014014014010414010410140140140140140 14014014014010414010410140140140140140
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