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The Supreme King

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Penulis: LichOSupremoDeus

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???: "My child, I choose to you to be my champion! I hope you get great benefits and become a great person in the future! Do not humiliate my name! "

???: Hmm? Whose beautiful voice is this? Champion? Benefits? What is going on?!

A young man with closed eyes, who could not open them, was in doubt, and around him, there was simply nothing!

???: "Now go my Champion! Go Ryan Aaron, and make your story! "

At that, the young man felt his soul move, and then a voice came up in his mind.

[Welcome master! You've Got a System!]

[You will be sent to the Central World, to develop and create your power and not to shame the name of the God who made you a Champion!]

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  1. AYOMIDE_SOETAN
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  2. Xseiver
    Xseiver Berpartisipasi 1
  3. Avatar
    (Kosong)

Status Power Mingguan

Rank -- Peringkat Power
Stone -- Power stone

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LichOSupremoDeus

As is my story, of course I must give 5 Stars, but tell me in the comments about any mistakes or problems in my story, as this helps a lot, and I will try to sort it somehow! And as I said before, I'm a Brazilian author, my English is crap, so clearly there will be many errors in writing in English, since I'm using Google Translate, but from the comments I read, I think you're probably liking it, and are not having many problems in reading, which I'm really enjoying and I hope it continues like this! Reminder: Chapters 01 to 05, where the word King, was in place of the name of the Japanese character, Miyamoto Rei. Rei in Portuguese means King in English, so it gave Google Translator a problem.

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DestonDark

hahaha a novel and very good apart from the mistakes of writing is very good note 8.9 :) keep it up, ''agora ta fods em nao sei oq escrever para completar 140 palavras''

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Apophis_

Muito bom ++++++++++++++ great Fanfic ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ++++++++++++++++ ;...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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Everything_Forever

It pretty good. Not the best but not the worst so I would read it and that's it I'm done with this review! Need a little bit more..... Sorry.

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