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It's fine But isn't it too fast to make a *** scene? I mean shinji and yisuke at first I thought they would be a good character but now Aghh.. how can I explain this... what I was trying to say was I am disappointed at them look I'm not trying to offend you.... so just relax Im just saying that It's a good story and the Mc😊
this whole story is amazing and awesome in the end of all of this I think that there should be a wedding.... I would love to see that happen and maybe a sex scene.....
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I was so sure that in that one chapter Clyde would kill those guys who gang r***d that woman's daughter but he didn’t so I was really disappointed about that. and there have been zero s*x scenes from Clyde so please try more with that as you make more chapters. But overall, I'm very happy with the story and I would like you to keep up the great work.
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Great novel please dont drop if you have to just step back and think for a month or 2 just please dont drop it its a great vampire to me it ranks 1st in vampire genre....... [#1im a vampire god?!]........ [#2 evil goddess system]
I feel that this book is overlooked, it's really quite good. Sure there are some things that could be better. Such as the pacing being a little to fast, the spontaneous situation changes and what not. Considering not just everyone can write a good book, I think it's fair to say that this is better then a good bit.
I was very interested in the concept, but alas the MC is total moron and the story moves too fast with no structure. I would of really liked for him to actually build himself up from being dumped in a random place instead of getting money and a place to live instantly. Also, why the **** is a vampire god not doing vampiric things like sucking virgins and ****?
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I have only one word to describe this novel extremely good . You might have realized it more than one word but even extremely good is not enough to describe the novel if I were to reword it it would be “ superb”
It's a great novel as far as it was released, good characters, very good character interaction It's a great novel as far as it was released, good characters, very good character interaction
This is a pretty interesting webnovel. It's about a character who loses his memory, but gains the powers of a vampire god through a system. The world has magic and swords.
This is a fantastic, hilarious, and just all around awesome read that you should definitely give a try. A really great and funny main character and an awesome cast of supporting characters. I honestly don’t think you’re regret giving this book a try, at the very least try the first chapter to see how you feel about it, and you won’t be disappointed.
Just got done reading first chapter and it’s written pretty well and had a good explanation for a lot of things so good read so far ........
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more chapter because i love to read it every day for full all my free time than doing useless thing.i hope author can release a new chapter 2 per day if you dont busy.
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Omg this is an awesome book filled with fun and double worlds make it more fun. Between real world and vr world, it'll make one major interesting book. It's a must read. Good vampires rule!
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My brethren! I'm back! Sorry I've not updated in a very very VERY long time. But I'm definitely back and will be trying to go back to my daily 2k word chapters. Still no computer, so it's my cellphone still for editing and writing. Your powerstones, shares, reviews and more will light a fire under my butt. So ARMY OF NIGHTBLOOD DO YOU HEED MY CALL?! SHOW ME HOW MUCH YOU LOVE THIS STORY! YEAH! Hehe. Anyway love ya guys lots, and wish me luck!
This story is really good but it hasent been updated in way to long it been like 6 months now. I finished this hole thing in like an hour and these types of stories are hard to find but are really good but sadly there havent been anymore updates. STILL MAD THAT THERE ARENT ANY NEW CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!
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Great story development.... Love the characters The only problem about this novel would be the late update period.....and I feel the story could be more realistic and mature rather than the normal cliche scene
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A unique concept like reincarnation but done in a different way, most reincarnation novels only reincarnate the soul but this novel practically scarp that and gave the stale concept a refreshing touch. The system interaction with the MC is kind of like in the novel monster hunter where the system isn't dull or boring. A great concept and a great novel if executed correctly.
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I can only think of one word to describe this... perfect, and it keeps ,e waiting and coming back for more content every time i see it updates
The writing style is excellent, it's very clear. It's development is very good. I like the characters, I think that they are very interesting and am excited to see where the story goes.
This book is good but I can’t give it a 5 star because there’s only 3 chapters. I’m starting to wonder if this book is dropped. If this book it dropped tell me.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact avarohm_review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
It's fine But isn't it too fast to make a *** scene? I mean shinji and yisuke at first I thought they would be a good character but now Aghh.. how can I explain this... what I was trying to say was I am disappointed at them look I'm not trying to offend you.... so just relax Im just saying that It's a good story and the Mc😊
this whole story is amazing and awesome in the end of all of this I think that there should be a wedding.... I would love to see that happen and maybe a sex scene.....
Membuka SPOILER I was so sure that in that one chapter Clyde would kill those guys who gang r***d that woman's daughter but he didn’t so I was really disappointed about that. and there have been zero s*x scenes from Clyde so please try more with that as you make more chapters. But overall, I'm very happy with the story and I would like you to keep up the great work.
Membuka SPOILER Great novel please dont drop if you have to just step back and think for a month or 2 just please dont drop it its a great vampire to me it ranks 1st in vampire genre....... [#1im a vampire god?!]........ [#2 evil goddess system]
I feel that this book is overlooked, it's really quite good. Sure there are some things that could be better. Such as the pacing being a little to fast, the spontaneous situation changes and what not. Considering not just everyone can write a good book, I think it's fair to say that this is better then a good bit.
I was very interested in the concept, but alas the MC is total moron and the story moves too fast with no structure. I would of really liked for him to actually build himself up from being dumped in a random place instead of getting money and a place to live instantly. Also, why the **** is a vampire god not doing vampiric things like sucking virgins and ****?
Bababababababababababbabababababababababababababababababababsbsbsbskdlforkfjdkdkfkrrkjrofirkdkfleorjfpwkrjflwirndlwiekdlwiejwleneiwpejlejfkwpeurkwdprukwlrjelwirlwldkwld
I have only one word to describe this novel extremely good . You might have realized it more than one word but even extremely good is not enough to describe the novel if I were to reword it it would be “ superb”
It's a great novel as far as it was released, good characters, very good character interaction It's a great novel as far as it was released, good characters, very good character interaction
This is a pretty interesting webnovel. It's about a character who loses his memory, but gains the powers of a vampire god through a system. The world has magic and swords.
This is a fantastic, hilarious, and just all around awesome read that you should definitely give a try. A really great and funny main character and an awesome cast of supporting characters. I honestly don’t think you’re regret giving this book a try, at the very least try the first chapter to see how you feel about it, and you won’t be disappointed.
Just got done reading first chapter and it’s written pretty well and had a good explanation for a lot of things so good read so far ........
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more chapter because i love to read it every day for full all my free time than doing useless thing.i hope author can release a new chapter 2 per day if you dont busy.
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Omg this is an awesome book filled with fun and double worlds make it more fun. Between real world and vr world, it'll make one major interesting book. It's a must read. Good vampires rule!
😍 up _________________________________________________________________☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺_______________________________________________________(&#&54&&"$_&&&&+++-:__+_*$&--_#'ff) _________$_______________________________+_$#__$*33&"#&&_#_&__4__*#$_______________________ 😅
My brethren! I'm back! Sorry I've not updated in a very very VERY long time. But I'm definitely back and will be trying to go back to my daily 2k word chapters. Still no computer, so it's my cellphone still for editing and writing. Your powerstones, shares, reviews and more will light a fire under my butt. So ARMY OF NIGHTBLOOD DO YOU HEED MY CALL?! SHOW ME HOW MUCH YOU LOVE THIS STORY! YEAH! Hehe. Anyway love ya guys lots, and wish me luck!
This story is really good but it hasent been updated in way to long it been like 6 months now. I finished this hole thing in like an hour and these types of stories are hard to find but are really good but sadly there havent been anymore updates. STILL MAD THAT THERE ARENT ANY NEW CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!
MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR
Great story development.... Love the characters The only problem about this novel would be the late update period.....and I feel the story could be more realistic and mature rather than the normal cliche scene
Membuka SPOILER Shdfggfgrcgejufhtgjfhhdjubjthfghggebeurhufhtdjrdhfgheghdhtdjtgyhdhjfhyfbydbhtghegrfurhyrhhtfuegygyrhtfufhjbgdhtgytufhrhgggjfryygggurrjfhtdjjgurgjrithtrgggggtss do klgdsrhrgurhydgjdgufhhufugfjdbshfchtdjrfhtdgggghfhhgnhg
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A unique concept like reincarnation but done in a different way, most reincarnation novels only reincarnate the soul but this novel practically scarp that and gave the stale concept a refreshing touch. The system interaction with the MC is kind of like in the novel monster hunter where the system isn't dull or boring. A great concept and a great novel if executed correctly.
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Membuka SPOILER I can only think of one word to describe this... perfect, and it keeps ,e waiting and coming back for more content every time i see it updates
The writing style is excellent, it's very clear. It's development is very good. I like the characters, I think that they are very interesting and am excited to see where the story goes.
This book is good but I can’t give it a 5 star because there’s only 3 chapters. I’m starting to wonder if this book is dropped. If this book it dropped tell me.