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dont waste your time on it unless your willing to pay to read it, as hes now only updating on patreon. which sucks cause well, nobody gonna pay to read a fanfic
B,ocker behind pay wall. Don't read. Hope author has a stroke. Ecnikr3nki2rcnik2crnkiv3rnkir3vinkv3tnikvr3nkiv3rio 3vrnio3rcnior3 inoc3rnio3vrino3rvino2rvnipv2rinorf2
It's good but that doesn't mean I like the fact that people doing patrons when it's not even their story, like if it's a story made by yourself then sure I wouldn't mind paying to see more. But the fact that this fanfic with you just taking their names, powers, and etc. This story is just a what if or FanFiction that you wrote, you don't own anything except your characters that have been made.
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Just Started reading but Description says Highschool DXD, Solo Leveling, and Fate(which I never watched lol confused me too much when I tried) but why does it have a Naruto tag, I haven't seen anywhere that implies that this will be a Naruto crossover
Just read the first chapter it really seems like this will be a good novel I though it was really deep when the author wrote “I WANT LEMONS XPXPXPXPXP” this really seems like it’s gonna shape up into a great novel 5/5 would recommend
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Even if your English are bad I advise you to please check your grammar at least, and also the fact that Lion academy is in Korea, wow that's new. Overall I like it.
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I really like the idea and many things about this story but I just feel that certain parts are a bit too forced and just doesn’t match up. Also I personally feel that too much is going on at the same time and so its hard to keep up some times, the crossover being too forced Doesn’t help that much either. Other than that this is a great story and its fast paced so if youre looking for a fast paced Book this is a good one. If u think u can keep up try reading it, its great.
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Ini Novel yang seru aku selalu mencari novel yang karakter utamanya adalah Gilgamesh dan hanya ini yang paling bagus,seru,dan terkesan nyata karena semua kemampuan dan penampilan di cerita terdeskripsi engan rinci yang membuat ini menjadi nilai tambahan
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Las historias de Gilgamesh siempre son buenas [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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неплохо жду продолжения, но миры плохо считаются. если sl и fate можно соединить, то dxd явно лишний. да и гарем слишком большой девки из dxd тупо по характеру не подходят :333333333333333
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Bloody interesting concept. Mashing up 3 of the biggest series is not easy and to make it work as Ghosty did is even more difficult. Good job dude.
At first i was having high expectations from this novel and i really enjoyed reading it. However since gilgamesh begun arising the story has downgraded. The mc character is too inconsistent and there is no reason for actions. I find it hard to understand what is happening. Overall I have to say very bad character development. I don't have problem with writing style and all the other stuffs except the character development.
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Good writing quality, character design and world background. Im recommend this fanfic for eachother who wants a MegaOP MC and good R-18!. And one more thing, the R-18 is one of these who has a very good narration and creativity.
Overall the story is OK, the idea to fuse 3 worlds into one is quite ambitious, and the difficulty shows sometimes. In the Early chapters when the Mc is dropped into the world the development seams to be rushed, there wasn't much time to learn who the Mc is as a person or to understand the world he is in. A bit more time for the Mc to come to terms with the world would have gone a long way here. The mix of the 3 worlds only gets more confusing as the story progresses, I don't mean that you can't fuse the rating Games and the Grailwars and all the other stuff but for it to feel real to me at least, I need some serious world building. The MC falls prey to the same issue, in the later chapters it seams as if he is finally getting a grip who he is, but it still feels a bit one dimensional. All in all the story is OK, and with more chapters we may get a better grip on the world as a whole.
It was super good, but in my opinion u can public more chapters with more ** (like 400 - 500 **, 2 chapters in one day), but u have an amazing novels or fanfic with R-18!
Great story idea please do not drop like all your other works and please don't delete my review again. Please can you go back and continue your other previous works P.S. this will be your last chance for a good review
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like the story but not stable updates, updates depends on the rank....... filler..,............ more filler..................................
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dont waste your time on it unless your willing to pay to read it, as hes now only updating on patreon. which sucks cause well, nobody gonna pay to read a fanfic
B,ocker behind pay wall. Don't read. Hope author has a stroke. Ecnikr3nki2rcnik2crnkiv3rnkir3vinkv3tnikvr3nkiv3rio 3vrnio3rcnior3 inoc3rnio3vrino3rvino2rvnipv2rinorf2
It's good but that doesn't mean I like the fact that people doing patrons when it's not even their story, like if it's a story made by yourself then sure I wouldn't mind paying to see more. But the fact that this fanfic with you just taking their names, powers, and etc. This story is just a what if or FanFiction that you wrote, you don't own anything except your characters that have been made.
Membuka SPOILER Just Started reading but Description says Highschool DXD, Solo Leveling, and Fate(which I never watched lol confused me too much when I tried) but why does it have a Naruto tag, I haven't seen anywhere that implies that this will be a Naruto crossover
Just read the first chapter it really seems like this will be a good novel I though it was really deep when the author wrote “I WANT LEMONS XPXPXPXPXP” this really seems like it’s gonna shape up into a great novel 5/5 would recommend
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Even if your English are bad I advise you to please check your grammar at least, and also the fact that Lion academy is in Korea, wow that's new. Overall I like it.
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I really like the idea and many things about this story but I just feel that certain parts are a bit too forced and just doesn’t match up. Also I personally feel that too much is going on at the same time and so its hard to keep up some times, the crossover being too forced Doesn’t help that much either. Other than that this is a great story and its fast paced so if youre looking for a fast paced Book this is a good one. If u think u can keep up try reading it, its great.
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Ini Novel yang seru aku selalu mencari novel yang karakter utamanya adalah Gilgamesh dan hanya ini yang paling bagus,seru,dan terkesan nyata karena semua kemampuan dan penampilan di cerita terdeskripsi engan rinci yang membuat ini menjadi nilai tambahan
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Membuka SPOILER Las historias de Gilgamesh siempre son buenas [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Membuka SPOILER неплохо жду продолжения, но миры плохо считаются. если sl и fate можно соединить, то dxd явно лишний. да и гарем слишком большой девки из dxd тупо по характеру не подходят :333333333333333
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Bloody interesting concept. Mashing up 3 of the biggest series is not easy and to make it work as Ghosty did is even more difficult. Good job dude.
At first i was having high expectations from this novel and i really enjoyed reading it. However since gilgamesh begun arising the story has downgraded. The mc character is too inconsistent and there is no reason for actions. I find it hard to understand what is happening. Overall I have to say very bad character development. I don't have problem with writing style and all the other stuffs except the character development.
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Good writing quality, character design and world background. Im recommend this fanfic for eachother who wants a MegaOP MC and good R-18!. And one more thing, the R-18 is one of these who has a very good narration and creativity.
Overall the story is OK, the idea to fuse 3 worlds into one is quite ambitious, and the difficulty shows sometimes. In the Early chapters when the Mc is dropped into the world the development seams to be rushed, there wasn't much time to learn who the Mc is as a person or to understand the world he is in. A bit more time for the Mc to come to terms with the world would have gone a long way here. The mix of the 3 worlds only gets more confusing as the story progresses, I don't mean that you can't fuse the rating Games and the Grailwars and all the other stuff but for it to feel real to me at least, I need some serious world building. The MC falls prey to the same issue, in the later chapters it seams as if he is finally getting a grip who he is, but it still feels a bit one dimensional. All in all the story is OK, and with more chapters we may get a better grip on the world as a whole.
It was super good, but in my opinion u can public more chapters with more ** (like 400 - 500 **, 2 chapters in one day), but u have an amazing novels or fanfic with R-18!
Great story idea please do not drop like all your other works and please don't delete my review again. Please can you go back and continue your other previous works P.S. this will be your last chance for a good review
Mano estou adorando o livro por favor coloca +capítulos obrigado 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
like the story but not stable updates, updates depends on the rank....... filler..,............ more filler..................................
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