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Owenheim Legend: Alodar, King of Talent
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Adam is killed in a parking lot and is sent to a world called ‘Owenheim’. He must fight for his own life and rebel against the corrupt system the gods had put in place during the Primal War.
He shall rebel against the kingdoms in the first volume,
Save the empire in the second,
And I’ll add more as I can.
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Author here, just like every other author shamelessly giving myself a 5 star, but I have made the story. The stories every twist and turn is made. The only thing I need to do is write it... so yeah, I’m writing it now.
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- 11 CH11 Lyner, Bandit of The Dark Fang 5 years ago
- 12 CH12 Temporal is Loud!! 5 years ago
- 13 CH13 Unklair Wulphir, Infernal Werewolf 5 years ago
- 14 CH14 ‘Child, Do You Have A Burning Will’ 5 years ago
- 15 CH15 Is Unklair Dead This Time? 5 years ago
- 16 CH16 Fire Law and Traitor 5 years ago
I like the way it’s starting and I think that if you could add a few more chapeters and more depth it could be a good read. I like the moment he stutters when the big man asks if he is Adam but you might want to tone down on how much he stutters. Also in the end when the system or Neowalt tells him that it’s his life you could add a little more in there to help the flow of time that I feel is missing.
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