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One Piece: My Justice
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One Piece Fan-fiction. Jhon relives as Monkey D. Jove a child found and adopted by the father of luffy Monkey D. Drago which leaves in charge of his father Monkey D. Garp who trains next to his grandson Monkey D. Luffy, unlike his stepbrother Jove has a great sense of justice and chooses to become a great marine like his grandfather
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Please don't drop..................upload more chapters.....................................................................................
I think you should get him one women that he rescues from one of the yonkos and she has a fruit that helps the wind fruit , I think you're story is good and has potential and I hope you don't drop this
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plz use the full potential of the air fruit like compressing air to create more power or create a freezing effect or you could create heating effect by expanding the air or taking away the oxygen of the enemy to make it hard for them to fight full power (also when the fire start in their childhood you take away the oxygen to stop it because fire need oxygen to burn)you can also take a mass(large amount) of cold and warm air to run into each other the warm air would be forces to raise and condense forming rain clouds or raining and lighting clouds (using that lighting to take out enemies) you can then form hurricane if you are out on the sea with water temperature is above 79 degree and keeping high pressure above the clouds or a weak flow of wind to make it more terrifying or if on land form a tornado.
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