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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact avarohm_review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Will the Author continue this story? Best story I've read in a long time. I hope it will continue soon :) Couldn't fins info if it is dropped or on hiatus?
dont drop it i hope u continue it AND MAKE IT EPIC XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
Excellent work! I Definitely look forward to reading every new chapter. Great pace, characters and story. It's a joy to read a well written thought out novel that has its own unique story and unique progression.
Enjoyable story. The powers of the MC are not story-breaking but instead believable, the pacing is well-done and the story takes some interesting unpredictable turns.
I just learned I can make another review. So Here I am, trying to fill space until the character limit is fulfilled. If you didn't read my other review, then I will tell you again. This story will have a slow pace and will also have lots of world building. Read a few chapters before judging ( I still have to edit the first chapters that need some fixing)
this is interesting. The plot is great. The characters are interesting. the world background is great too. I'm going to dd this to my library. Keep it up
Another exciting novel found through a review swap. The world you created let my mind wander around on a really wonderful journey. I'm happy to have read it. Your writing style was understandable so it didn't hinder my imaginations. Your world that you wanted to create, I could imagine it through the details in your writing. Thank you for letting us read such an exciting novel. Keep it up author. Imma hungry af, I'm looking forward to read more.
I write my initial review at just three chapter, because if I don't like the book I stop before there and good writers need encouragement! The writing here is solid and the character has a firm backstory which I like. Too may stories start with a generic character rather than what feels like a real person with a personality. I am just getting to the bit where we see where he ends up. So I will update this review later.
The amount of details makes it easy to follow the story. The world background seems interesting, and it is well set up for an epic journey. The main character is interesting, and I am looking forward to the introduction of new characters. I say keep going with the natural flow and write something that you enjoy, and people will start to like it as well when they see the work put behind it. The slow build up might turn people away at first, but it will pay off when the chapters pile up. The grammar is not bad for a first-time writer, but you need to work on complex sentence punctuations.
The plot is generally exciting, to start with the way you did it in chapter 1. The flow of story and character development is good, and even the description of the world background is very detailed. I'm trying to imagine how it looks like based on the description. I understand there's explanation/disclaimer on the synopsis about writing in English, but it is quite good as well, with only little errors here and there which are tolerable. Just be mindful also of the punctuation marks. Overall, it's really quite interesting and enjoyable. Keep it up!
It's great!!! I enjoyed reading it!!! And the English was not at all bad, it's perfectly understandable!!! Looking forward to the next chapters!!! Keep writing!!!
Good ass book, what else can I say? Well the word limit says I can say more... In that case I will certainly take this moment to better my writing skills... Nevermind.
I’m really surprise that this novel doesn’t have a lot of ratings. It’s marvelous! There isn’t a lot of grammatical mistakes at all. A few here and there but it doesn’t take away any enjoyment from my reading. I applaud the author’s writing. It’s an exciting story!
Membuka SPOILER I finally have some time for a good ol' biased review First of all, I hope you give the story a chance. If you don't like the prologue or chapter 0 don't stay with just that, give it a shot to the next few chapters. The novel starts slowly but the pace will speed up as the story progresses. If you liked the story feel free to leave a review or a comment. I hope you like it
First and foremost, wow! I will be honest, after reading your notes - which told me that your English still needs improvement and the fact that you are new to writing - I was afraid that I would have to push myself to read it. But I experienced nothing of the sort! Even though you do make some grammatical mistakes (who doesn’t) your story is readable. So: have some courage in yourself, you really don’t need to caution readers, your English is quite good. I certainly enjoyed reading it, keep up the good work and most importantly, have fun doing so.
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact avarohm_review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Will the Author continue this story? Best story I've read in a long time. I hope it will continue soon :) Couldn't fins info if it is dropped or on hiatus?
dont drop it i hope u continue it AND MAKE IT EPIC XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
Excellent work! I Definitely look forward to reading every new chapter. Great pace, characters and story. It's a joy to read a well written thought out novel that has its own unique story and unique progression.
Enjoyable story. The powers of the MC are not story-breaking but instead believable, the pacing is well-done and the story takes some interesting unpredictable turns.
I just learned I can make another review. So Here I am, trying to fill space until the character limit is fulfilled. If you didn't read my other review, then I will tell you again. This story will have a slow pace and will also have lots of world building. Read a few chapters before judging ( I still have to edit the first chapters that need some fixing)
this is interesting. The plot is great. The characters are interesting. the world background is great too. I'm going to dd this to my library. Keep it up
Another exciting novel found through a review swap. The world you created let my mind wander around on a really wonderful journey. I'm happy to have read it. Your writing style was understandable so it didn't hinder my imaginations. Your world that you wanted to create, I could imagine it through the details in your writing. Thank you for letting us read such an exciting novel. Keep it up author. Imma hungry af, I'm looking forward to read more.
I write my initial review at just three chapter, because if I don't like the book I stop before there and good writers need encouragement! The writing here is solid and the character has a firm backstory which I like. Too may stories start with a generic character rather than what feels like a real person with a personality. I am just getting to the bit where we see where he ends up. So I will update this review later.
The amount of details makes it easy to follow the story. The world background seems interesting, and it is well set up for an epic journey. The main character is interesting, and I am looking forward to the introduction of new characters. I say keep going with the natural flow and write something that you enjoy, and people will start to like it as well when they see the work put behind it. The slow build up might turn people away at first, but it will pay off when the chapters pile up. The grammar is not bad for a first-time writer, but you need to work on complex sentence punctuations.
The plot is generally exciting, to start with the way you did it in chapter 1. The flow of story and character development is good, and even the description of the world background is very detailed. I'm trying to imagine how it looks like based on the description. I understand there's explanation/disclaimer on the synopsis about writing in English, but it is quite good as well, with only little errors here and there which are tolerable. Just be mindful also of the punctuation marks. Overall, it's really quite interesting and enjoyable. Keep it up!
It's great!!! I enjoyed reading it!!! And the English was not at all bad, it's perfectly understandable!!! Looking forward to the next chapters!!! Keep writing!!!
Good ass book, what else can I say? Well the word limit says I can say more... In that case I will certainly take this moment to better my writing skills... Nevermind.
I’m really surprise that this novel doesn’t have a lot of ratings. It’s marvelous! There isn’t a lot of grammatical mistakes at all. A few here and there but it doesn’t take away any enjoyment from my reading. I applaud the author’s writing. It’s an exciting story!
Membuka SPOILER I finally have some time for a good ol' biased review First of all, I hope you give the story a chance. If you don't like the prologue or chapter 0 don't stay with just that, give it a shot to the next few chapters. The novel starts slowly but the pace will speed up as the story progresses. If you liked the story feel free to leave a review or a comment. I hope you like it
First and foremost, wow! I will be honest, after reading your notes - which told me that your English still needs improvement and the fact that you are new to writing - I was afraid that I would have to push myself to read it. But I experienced nothing of the sort! Even though you do make some grammatical mistakes (who doesn’t) your story is readable. So: have some courage in yourself, you really don’t need to caution readers, your English is quite good. I certainly enjoyed reading it, keep up the good work and most importantly, have fun doing so.
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.