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The Isekai
Shalmac was 15 year old boy. He lived a average life went to school waited for school to get over, got home watched anime , manga read light novel and did things for academic purposes whenever he got time and occasionally some exercise. Then he died due to plot convenient reasons (think something yourself or just think he got hit by truck kun or the FBI got him).
After this I am trying to keep this in first person. Things within quotation marks will be one that he says
Also trying to keep this MC realistic as possible.
example shalmac: "I forgot to do it"
Things within () will be the things that he thinks
example shalmac(I will not do it ,go f*ck yourself)
I am also trying to keep the MC realistic .
-- Peringkat
Power 
-- Power
stone Anda Mungkin Juga Menyukai
2Ulasan-ulasan
- Kualitas penulisan
- Stabilitas Pembaruan
- Pengembangan Cerita
- Desain Karakter
- Latar Belakang Dunia
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Tulis ulasan
It's not good, not bad. It's a good time killer. Didn't read much yet but I like it so far. This help me began writig a lot. The main character is very interesting too.
Im not good with english but I can confirm that the plot is better than in another world with my smartphone. I am not professional nor good at writing if someone is willing to edit anything to make it better just post it in comments I would try to do it