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Exhibitionist girl

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Penulis: redx

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leonx
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Overall it's not bad story, and improved a lot since from the beginning but still it can further can improve. Hopefully writer will give more interesting chapter in the future for us to read. I wanted to one thing though is this story only be about Rin girl or we are gonna see some new face, personally I like to see some new face and they are both in same chapter

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Ryuutobi

Overall, it's quite a good exhibitionism story but needs a lot of improvement in grammar and spellings, as well as paragraphs formatting. As it is, just reading is quite a task in itself & that without a doubt ruins the enjoyment.

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Ovizit

Not bad story bu needed improvement on some of grammer and spelling. I also hope writer would update more frequently as it's very late compare to some of other writers..

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