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dropping the story, it is only going on around finding a husband for her. The whole world was thinking about it of course in a bad way. there is nothing regarding her revenge. well what am I thinking she is not even ready to see them. even when it was an audience to see them she didn't have that much courage after 3 years. it's not like she need to face them directly.
one of the awesome story I've read so far.. characters are amazing..story is sooooo good..just love it..no words to say
I have been looking for another novel to read, and finally thought that I stumbled into an orignal and intriguing story. Unfortunately, I’m a little disappointed because th timeline in this story is so off that makes enjoying the story difficult. The cracked skull alone should have sent made me stopped reading, but I kept pushing. The forced relationship with the other twin that was supposed to be organic, but duchess had to push it. So many holes in stories and her revenge? What revenge? More like what guy can love me more. Reading became frustrating, instead of enjoyable
This book is absolutely amazing!!! this is hands-down one of my favorite authors and I find myself enjoy every book that they publish.
Really wonderfully written. Great descriptions throughout and an interesting plot with a great resolution. I totally recommend this book.
there’s just too much plotholes to the point i cant barely read past 50 chapters + bad writing
I‘ve only read 11 and a half chapters so far but I’m dropping this book. The reason why is because I can already predict a lot of things that’s going to happen and I don’t like how the duchess treats her husband. She acts spoiled and doesn’t take her husband feelings into consideration. She’s not the only person who lost a child so why does she feels that it’s ok to take in a girl that looks similar to the daughter that they lost despite his disagreement. If they are partners and treat each other equally, then both their options would matter and the other wouldn’t bully the other into making a decision. She constantly rolls her eyes at her husband and ignores him but says that she loves him, which is very contradicting. Anyways the author throw the fact that the father kept his biological daughter inside all the time, which is basically foreshadowing the fact that she ran away and isn’t dead. If this is the type of book that I know it is then the author would somehow make the biological daughter a butt nugget to curry favor for the FL even more. I personally think that if any person, especially a 15-16 year old child(however old she is) is a horrible spoiled brat who doesn’t care about anybody’s livelihood then it’s the fault of the parents who raised her, especially since it was stated that the duchess personally raised her which also says a lot about the duchess. The FL even stated that she wanted to meet her adopted brothers naturally but then proceeded to ask about their favorite place and then proceeded to go there. The contradictory in this novel is so strong in the first few chapters of the novel, imagine when the story advances.In conclusion this novel gives off very delusional vibes especially from the readers in the comments and I a advait who loves powerful women and well written characters (“weak women” included, but in truth I feel that no woman is weak. Not in my dictionary anyway) know that this novel has wasted its potential starting around at this point.
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Gosh! I loved this novel. I was soooooo into this book that I cant even stop reading it until I regretted it because I finished it in just about 4days. I was totally hooked.
This novel is too good. I loved the self growth and journey of both the female and male lead. It was so real. I highly recommend to those who are hesitant to read after reading the little synopsis, thinking it could be boring and predictable. This was how I felt and almost didn’t bother reading not gonna lie but I’m so glad I did. I enjoyed this hidden gem.
This is one of my favorite books on Webnovel. I wanna reread it all over again. I love the relationship between the main couple
This story really captured me by a whole lot. The FL development character is good and so is the ML. I really recommend this to other readers who love strong FL.
First novel I finished reading completely it hooked me since the beginning and there was no chapter that I could take my eyes off. I just love it!
The author's other books are excellent, but I had to drop this one. The character development and plot are all over the place. FL is weak then strong, then weak again, repeating continuously. She also can't decide who she likes. Then the so-called loyal initial ML ends up being trash and going back to liking her sister or something? There was another review that went into a lot of detail about all the plot issues, but I could hardly keep straight what was going on, especially since it's nothing like the synopsis. In all honesty, it feels like 5 different books in 1. I'm hoping the author goes back through and rereads and rewrites aspects of this book in a different novel because there are some really interesting/captivating parts to it. But I find my interest was lost with so many different plotpoints going on at once. Back to rereading MTDW!
I was wondering why the total views of this novel was way lower than Yang Feng’s story, and I just figured out that the female lead here was very annoying. The story was pretty decent revolving around LX’s journey in love. I was expecting that she would aspire to become a female soldier, but she turned out spoiled just after few years of being with her foster family. That was probably the inconsistency in her character design. The depth in character development was lacking, and her traits were not attractive enpugh for the male protagonists to fall for her. She has had witty comebacks, but that’s just it. Yun Zhen’s character was superb! There was a point that I couldn’t fathom him falling for LX. I feel like LX’s trait of ‘being kind’ was obviously being pushed with no substance. I legit couldn’t think of a time that she was genuinely kind. She’s probably nice, but not kind.
I love it I love it I love it I remember feeling empty after reading the last chapter
awesome book. the story isn't to long but keeps one interested till the end. .
u kn when I started this Noval .I didn't like wht was happening in the beginning but as I started reading ,o my God I couldn't remove my eyes any longer kudos to the writer of this noval
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💜💜💜💜💜💜💛💛💛💛💛💙💙💙 I really like Xueyue und the commander. ❤️❤️❤️🧡🧡🧡💙💛💜💙💛💛💜💜💜💜💜💙💙💙💙💙💙❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🧡🧡💜💛💙💛💛💛
Great book by Xincerly once again, a realistic world and characters you love to root for. I'll admit, I haven't finished this one yet though and may not in the end. There's a little too much mystery and not one of them solved in the first 100ish chapters to keep me hooked, one of which being who the Male Lead is (It ends up as the other nation's Commander, tho I'd decided I liked WJ in the beginning 😔). Skimming ahead and learning who the ML was kinda ruined the in between chapters for me; I always end up rooting for the 2nd ML when I don't k own who it'll be. The story and premise are fantastic and I love the female lead and all the Li family interactions, I just wish the ML's name was mentioned in the description. I hate not knowing who to root for and ending up disappointed, and with that the reverse harem nature is a not what I was wanting to read at the moment, and there's a bit too much modern talk (one chapter mentioned both "ships" and "couple names" for me to keep viewing it as a Historical Romance. May pick it up in the future, but for now going back through Xincerly's other novels I've already read and liked.
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love this story so much. highly recommended for historical female lead lover. story is logical and all charecters are well reason. throughly enjoyed
No word can express my amusement to this story, I really love it and always came to read it again❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
I’m not a fan of Xueyue. She ruined this book. When you think FL deserves her horrible almost death…that’s when you know you gotta let it go (drop the novel). Lots of holes in FL’s character and the storyline itself. FL’s personality is unstable and is often changed to fit whatever drama author wants to introduce. For example, for someone who was practically beaten to death, was abuse, look down upon, and unlove her entire life….how can her personality change so drastically into a stubborn, willful, spoil brat, with a Princess syndrome (and that’s before she became a princess)?? 2 yrs doesn’t change someone (with PTSD) THAT drastically. Instead of focusing on her “revenge”, she lusting after men, leading them on, and then breaking their hearts. Her revenge plan(or lack thereof) is so lame. What could a dumb little girl that doesn’t amount to anything really do? Without Li Chenyang she could never accomplish it. These relationships also have conflicting info. At the beginning, it was Jenkai would promise her everything she wanted, but love. But then later on it some how changed to, “He refuse to have no harem…and then all of sudden he wants to start out slowly as friends and she’s rushing their relationship??” With Yu Zhu he was willing give her everything she wanted and when he proposes marriage, all of sudden it’s “moving to fast”. Then she wants to break up. Not a “lets continue courting”, but a “you should go and leave me. You will find someone better.” Does that even makes sense. You know who she deserves….Zheng Leiyu. 😈
probably the most annoying novel i'v ever read, the mc are both stupid, the fl slowl turning into a pick me girl, the story becoming more like a revese harem!!!!!! STUPID AUTHOR
Hello, shameless Author-san here! ヽ(‘ ∇‘ )ノ Just wanted to let you guys know I'm not an experienced writer, so there will be a few grammar mistakes here and there in the novel, but I will always try my best to catch those if I see any~ I wouldn't mind if you guys also point out the mistakes, so that it can be easier for me to find and fix them! ^~^ I'm always open to critiques, but please try to not be too harsh haha XD On a different note, thank you so much for taking the time out of your day to check out my story! And I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoy writing them! ヾ(＠＾▽＾＠)ﾉ I'm Chinese, but my background with ancient china is not at its best (I grew up in U.S. cx), so if you see any incorrect information, please feel free to let me know! I always try to do my research beforehand, but there will still be tiny slip-up sometimes XD And without further ado, brace your seat and prepare yourself for the journey of Li Xueyue! (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧
dropping the story, it is only going on around finding a husband for her. The whole world was thinking about it of course in a bad way. there is nothing regarding her revenge. well what am I thinking she is not even ready to see them. even when it was an audience to see them she didn't have that much courage after 3 years. it's not like she need to face them directly.
one of the awesome story I've read so far.. characters are amazing..story is sooooo good..just love it..no words to say
I have been looking for another novel to read, and finally thought that I stumbled into an orignal and intriguing story. Unfortunately, I’m a little disappointed because th timeline in this story is so off that makes enjoying the story difficult. The cracked skull alone should have sent made me stopped reading, but I kept pushing. The forced relationship with the other twin that was supposed to be organic, but duchess had to push it. So many holes in stories and her revenge? What revenge? More like what guy can love me more. Reading became frustrating, instead of enjoyable
This book is absolutely amazing!!! this is hands-down one of my favorite authors and I find myself enjoy every book that they publish.
Really wonderfully written. Great descriptions throughout and an interesting plot with a great resolution. I totally recommend this book.
there’s just too much plotholes to the point i cant barely read past 50 chapters + bad writing
I‘ve only read 11 and a half chapters so far but I’m dropping this book. The reason why is because I can already predict a lot of things that’s going to happen and I don’t like how the duchess treats her husband. She acts spoiled and doesn’t take her husband feelings into consideration. She’s not the only person who lost a child so why does she feels that it’s ok to take in a girl that looks similar to the daughter that they lost despite his disagreement. If they are partners and treat each other equally, then both their options would matter and the other wouldn’t bully the other into making a decision. She constantly rolls her eyes at her husband and ignores him but says that she loves him, which is very contradicting. Anyways the author throw the fact that the father kept his biological daughter inside all the time, which is basically foreshadowing the fact that she ran away and isn’t dead. If this is the type of book that I know it is then the author would somehow make the biological daughter a butt nugget to curry favor for the FL even more. I personally think that if any person, especially a 15-16 year old child(however old she is) is a horrible spoiled brat who doesn’t care about anybody’s livelihood then it’s the fault of the parents who raised her, especially since it was stated that the duchess personally raised her which also says a lot about the duchess. The FL even stated that she wanted to meet her adopted brothers naturally but then proceeded to ask about their favorite place and then proceeded to go there. The contradictory in this novel is so strong in the first few chapters of the novel, imagine when the story advances.In conclusion this novel gives off very delusional vibes especially from the readers in the comments and I a advait who loves powerful women and well written characters (“weak women” included, but in truth I feel that no woman is weak. Not in my dictionary anyway) know that this novel has wasted its potential starting around at this point.
Membuka SPOILER Gosh! I loved this novel. I was soooooo into this book that I cant even stop reading it until I regretted it because I finished it in just about 4days. I was totally hooked.
This novel is too good. I loved the self growth and journey of both the female and male lead. It was so real. I highly recommend to those who are hesitant to read after reading the little synopsis, thinking it could be boring and predictable. This was how I felt and almost didn’t bother reading not gonna lie but I’m so glad I did. I enjoyed this hidden gem.
This is one of my favorite books on Webnovel. I wanna reread it all over again. I love the relationship between the main couple
This story really captured me by a whole lot. The FL development character is good and so is the ML. I really recommend this to other readers who love strong FL.
First novel I finished reading completely it hooked me since the beginning and there was no chapter that I could take my eyes off. I just love it!
The author's other books are excellent, but I had to drop this one. The character development and plot are all over the place. FL is weak then strong, then weak again, repeating continuously. She also can't decide who she likes. Then the so-called loyal initial ML ends up being trash and going back to liking her sister or something? There was another review that went into a lot of detail about all the plot issues, but I could hardly keep straight what was going on, especially since it's nothing like the synopsis. In all honesty, it feels like 5 different books in 1. I'm hoping the author goes back through and rereads and rewrites aspects of this book in a different novel because there are some really interesting/captivating parts to it. But I find my interest was lost with so many different plotpoints going on at once. Back to rereading MTDW!
I was wondering why the total views of this novel was way lower than Yang Feng’s story, and I just figured out that the female lead here was very annoying. The story was pretty decent revolving around LX’s journey in love. I was expecting that she would aspire to become a female soldier, but she turned out spoiled just after few years of being with her foster family. That was probably the inconsistency in her character design. The depth in character development was lacking, and her traits were not attractive enpugh for the male protagonists to fall for her. She has had witty comebacks, but that’s just it. Yun Zhen’s character was superb! There was a point that I couldn’t fathom him falling for LX. I feel like LX’s trait of ‘being kind’ was obviously being pushed with no substance. I legit couldn’t think of a time that she was genuinely kind. She’s probably nice, but not kind.
I love it I love it I love it I remember feeling empty after reading the last chapter
awesome book. the story isn't to long but keeps one interested till the end. .
u kn when I started this Noval .I didn't like wht was happening in the beginning but as I started reading ,o my God I couldn't remove my eyes any longer kudos to the writer of this noval
Membuka SPOILER 💜💜💜💜💜💜💛💛💛💛💛💙💙💙 I really like Xueyue und the commander. ❤️❤️❤️🧡🧡🧡💙💛💜💙💛💛💜💜💜💜💜💙💙💙💙💙💙❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🧡🧡💜💛💙💛💛💛
Great book by Xincerly once again, a realistic world and characters you love to root for. I'll admit, I haven't finished this one yet though and may not in the end. There's a little too much mystery and not one of them solved in the first 100ish chapters to keep me hooked, one of which being who the Male Lead is (It ends up as the other nation's Commander, tho I'd decided I liked WJ in the beginning 😔). Skimming ahead and learning who the ML was kinda ruined the in between chapters for me; I always end up rooting for the 2nd ML when I don't k own who it'll be. The story and premise are fantastic and I love the female lead and all the Li family interactions, I just wish the ML's name was mentioned in the description. I hate not knowing who to root for and ending up disappointed, and with that the reverse harem nature is a not what I was wanting to read at the moment, and there's a bit too much modern talk (one chapter mentioned both "ships" and "couple names" for me to keep viewing it as a Historical Romance. May pick it up in the future, but for now going back through Xincerly's other novels I've already read and liked.
Membuka SPOILER love this story so much. highly recommended for historical female lead lover. story is logical and all charecters are well reason. throughly enjoyed
No word can express my amusement to this story, I really love it and always came to read it again❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
I’m not a fan of Xueyue. She ruined this book. When you think FL deserves her horrible almost death…that’s when you know you gotta let it go (drop the novel). Lots of holes in FL’s character and the storyline itself. FL’s personality is unstable and is often changed to fit whatever drama author wants to introduce. For example, for someone who was practically beaten to death, was abuse, look down upon, and unlove her entire life….how can her personality change so drastically into a stubborn, willful, spoil brat, with a Princess syndrome (and that’s before she became a princess)?? 2 yrs doesn’t change someone (with PTSD) THAT drastically. Instead of focusing on her “revenge”, she lusting after men, leading them on, and then breaking their hearts. Her revenge plan(or lack thereof) is so lame. What could a dumb little girl that doesn’t amount to anything really do? Without Li Chenyang she could never accomplish it. These relationships also have conflicting info. At the beginning, it was Jenkai would promise her everything she wanted, but love. But then later on it some how changed to, “He refuse to have no harem…and then all of sudden he wants to start out slowly as friends and she’s rushing their relationship??” With Yu Zhu he was willing give her everything she wanted and when he proposes marriage, all of sudden it’s “moving to fast”. Then she wants to break up. Not a “lets continue courting”, but a “you should go and leave me. You will find someone better.” Does that even makes sense. You know who she deserves….Zheng Leiyu. 😈
probably the most annoying novel i'v ever read, the mc are both stupid, the fl slowl turning into a pick me girl, the story becoming more like a revese harem!!!!!! STUPID AUTHOR
Hello, shameless Author-san here! ヽ(‘ ∇‘ )ノ Just wanted to let you guys know I'm not an experienced writer, so there will be a few grammar mistakes here and there in the novel, but I will always try my best to catch those if I see any~ I wouldn't mind if you guys also point out the mistakes, so that it can be easier for me to find and fix them! ^~^ I'm always open to critiques, but please try to not be too harsh haha XD On a different note, thank you so much for taking the time out of your day to check out my story! And I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoy writing them! ヾ(＠＾▽＾＠)ﾉ I'm Chinese, but my background with ancient china is not at its best (I grew up in U.S. cx), so if you see any incorrect information, please feel free to let me know! I always try to do my research beforehand, but there will still be tiny slip-up sometimes XD And without further ado, brace your seat and prepare yourself for the journey of Li Xueyue! (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧