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This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so I’ll need you to write the next chapter soon And maybe u will write a sequel
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The Best plz more....plz............................................plz plz plz plz plz plz plz...................mm.........................................plz plz 0lz plz
It's just... Bad... Like overall, just not good. Xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxooxoxoxoxoxoxooxoxo Xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxooxoxoxoxoxoxooxoxo Xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxooxoxoxoxoxoxooxoxo Xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxooxoxoxoxoxoxooxoxo
Main character damn overpowered from start a god gave him 2 wishes became stronger than god 2 seconds later. In beginning thought it would have decent plot but 3 chapters later he burns riser with Amaterasu. Story got really old and boring faster than his current speed
Veeeeeeery goood Pls dont drop this novel This novel is sooooo goooooood Need more chapter Need constant update Need more overpower skilll, power, bloodline, weapon, etc. PLEASE DONT DROP THIS NOVEL PLEASE UPDATE IT other than that this novel is perfect
not gay or anything but Author-Sama I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!not gay or anything but Author-Sama I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!not gay or anything but Author-Sama I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!not gay or anything but Author-Sama I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!not gay or anything but Author-Sama I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!not gay or anything but Author-Sama I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!not gay or anything but Author-Sama I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!not gay or anything but Author-Sama I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!not gay or anything but Author-Sama I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!not gay or anything but Author-Sama I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!not gay or anything but Author-Sama I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!not gay or anything but Author-Sama I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!not gay or anything but Author-Sama I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!not gay or anything but Author-Sama I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!not gay or anything but Author-Sama I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!
Keep it Up please,, don't make this your story is Drop :D Keep it Up please,, don't make this your story is Drop :D Keep it Up please,, don't make this your story is Drop :D Keep it Up please,, don't make this your story is Drop :D Keep it Up please,, don't make this your story is Drop :D Keep it Up please,, don't make this your story is Drop :D Keep it Up please,, don't make this your story is Drop :D
This crappy thing literally got no story development at all, just delusional diary of author. What is this ? Pokemon? Kill all the way ,take all girls? Catch em all? Someone just get killed and nobody give a **** about it. I dont know why people give this kind of bizare story? More than 2 star and someone enjoy this thing ? .
Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem!
Another *Shameless* Review. Just here to tell people that are reviewing to please actually read the novel... I have seen 2 1* reviews that have 2 things that they 'disliked' about this novel for reasons yet I explained these reasons clearly... Number 1: Someone got upset saying MC is envious of Issei when I stated MC hates Issei that's why he took the sacred gear. Another one states that I went for the cannon fodder girls instead of a list of ones he mentioned even though his whole list is in the harem apart from 2. Also Asia, Xenovia, Irina and a few more cannon fodders aren't in the harem... And Rias is mainly there for ***. Akeno for pleasure cause she's a sadist and Koneko cus Kuroka is there so I honestly am confused at the point he is trying to make *Sigh* It's a hard knock life....
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MC has poor taste and likes low quality thots why not Grayfia/Kuroka/Gabriel/Yasaka/Tiamat instead he goes for the 1st cannon fodder that appears in DxD 🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦
I read until the last chapter (currently 11) and i think that the author is very good! He described the world very well, i didn't see any wrong words, so far so good, the unique thing that i kinda disliked was the mc "twisted" mind and his arrogant personality (although he has the qualifications to be so)
Membuka SPOILER
sometimes I get scared by the "human" envy, the protagonist has an almost infinite power and the first thing he does is steal the original protagonist's longinus ... really stupid ... if the guy was so envious then why do not buy one in the pos store already have infinite points
Membuka SPOILER
Well, I just came to evaluate a work of art. Recommended for all ages. . . . 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140
amazing sir. more??more??more??more??more??more??more??more??more??more??more??more??more??more??more??more??more??more??more??momore??more??more??more??more??more??more??more??more??more??more??more??more??re??
I think that this novel is probably going to be one of the best that I have read as long as you keep working on it and update more chapters ----------------------------------------------------------------------------
Very good the novel recommends to everyone to follow, you will not regret it. Very good the novel recommends to everyone to follow, you will not regret it. 😎😎
shameless no rape or dark stuff man my heart can not handle that stuff it hurts deep and pain please but so far ok work maybe go dragon ball Z or naruto there are lots of those but yeh maybe seven D sins cause not many of them? good luck
Tnx for the chapter, I would suggest to save some slut in Highschool of the Dead, I also wonder if you would take Yasaka or Gabriel along with Lady of Gremory, Sitri and Phenex. I also suggest the Overlord I guess and in One Piece taking some women you know just for fun 😂😂😂
Make him have proper fights but obviously toying with people and maybe make him go into other universes and buy more powers just to **** about in those universes? it's okay so far just don;t stop this one
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So far i think you should do DxD 7 deadly sins marvel apocalypse (Another anime) Dc (another anime) If you keep this going that is and pls do
keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going
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This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so I’ll need you to write the next chapter soon And maybe u will write a sequel
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Pay respect for this novel, it deserves .....................................................................................................
The Best plz more....plz............................................plz plz plz plz plz plz plz...................mm.........................................plz plz 0lz plz
It's just... Bad... Like overall, just not good. Xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxooxoxoxoxoxoxooxoxo Xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxooxoxoxoxoxoxooxoxo Xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxooxoxoxoxoxoxooxoxo Xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxooxoxoxoxoxoxooxoxo
Main character damn overpowered from start a god gave him 2 wishes became stronger than god 2 seconds later. In beginning thought it would have decent plot but 3 chapters later he burns riser with Amaterasu. Story got really old and boring faster than his current speed
Veeeeeeery goood Pls dont drop this novel This novel is sooooo goooooood Need more chapter Need constant update Need more overpower skilll, power, bloodline, weapon, etc. PLEASE DONT DROP THIS NOVEL PLEASE UPDATE IT other than that this novel is perfect
not gay or anything but Author-Sama I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!not gay or anything but Author-Sama I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!not gay or anything but Author-Sama I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!not gay or anything but Author-Sama I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!not gay or anything but Author-Sama I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!not gay or anything but Author-Sama I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!not gay or anything but Author-Sama I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!not gay or anything but Author-Sama I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!not gay or anything but Author-Sama I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!not gay or anything but Author-Sama I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!not gay or anything but Author-Sama I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!not gay or anything but Author-Sama I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!not gay or anything but Author-Sama I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!not gay or anything but Author-Sama I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!not gay or anything but Author-Sama I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!
Keep it Up please,, don't make this your story is Drop :D Keep it Up please,, don't make this your story is Drop :D Keep it Up please,, don't make this your story is Drop :D Keep it Up please,, don't make this your story is Drop :D Keep it Up please,, don't make this your story is Drop :D Keep it Up please,, don't make this your story is Drop :D Keep it Up please,, don't make this your story is Drop :D
This crappy thing literally got no story development at all, just delusional diary of author. What is this ? Pokemon? Kill all the way ,take all girls? Catch em all? Someone just get killed and nobody give a **** about it. I dont know why people give this kind of bizare story? More than 2 star and someone enjoy this thing ? .
Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem!
Another *Shameless* Review. Just here to tell people that are reviewing to please actually read the novel... I have seen 2 1* reviews that have 2 things that they 'disliked' about this novel for reasons yet I explained these reasons clearly... Number 1: Someone got upset saying MC is envious of Issei when I stated MC hates Issei that's why he took the sacred gear. Another one states that I went for the cannon fodder girls instead of a list of ones he mentioned even though his whole list is in the harem apart from 2. Also Asia, Xenovia, Irina and a few more cannon fodders aren't in the harem... And Rias is mainly there for ***. Akeno for pleasure cause she's a sadist and Koneko cus Kuroka is there so I honestly am confused at the point he is trying to make *Sigh* It's a hard knock life....
LIGHTHEARTED GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
MC has poor taste and likes low quality thots why not Grayfia/Kuroka/Gabriel/Yasaka/Tiamat instead he goes for the 1st cannon fodder that appears in DxD 🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦
I read until the last chapter (currently 11) and i think that the author is very good! He described the world very well, i didn't see any wrong words, so far so good, the unique thing that i kinda disliked was the mc "twisted" mind and his arrogant personality (although he has the qualifications to be so)
Membuka SPOILER sometimes I get scared by the "human" envy, the protagonist has an almost infinite power and the first thing he does is steal the original protagonist's longinus ... really stupid ... if the guy was so envious then why do not buy one in the pos store already have infinite points
Membuka SPOILER Well, I just came to evaluate a work of art. Recommended for all ages. . . . 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140
amazing sir. more??more??more??more??more??more??more??more??more??more??more??more??more??more??more??more??more??more??more??momore??more??more??more??more??more??more??more??more??more??more??more??more??re??
I think that this novel is probably going to be one of the best that I have read as long as you keep working on it and update more chapters ----------------------------------------------------------------------------
Very good the novel recommends to everyone to follow, you will not regret it. Very good the novel recommends to everyone to follow, you will not regret it. 😎😎
shameless no rape or dark stuff man my heart can not handle that stuff it hurts deep and pain please but so far ok work maybe go dragon ball Z or naruto there are lots of those but yeh maybe seven D sins cause not many of them? good luck
Tnx for the chapter, I would suggest to save some slut in Highschool of the Dead, I also wonder if you would take Yasaka or Gabriel along with Lady of Gremory, Sitri and Phenex. I also suggest the Overlord I guess and in One Piece taking some women you know just for fun 😂😂😂
Make him have proper fights but obviously toying with people and maybe make him go into other universes and buy more powers just to **** about in those universes? it's okay so far just don;t stop this one
I love op I love op I love op I love op I love op I love op I love op I love op I love op I love op I love op I love op I love op I love op I love op I love op I love op I love op I love op I love op I love op I love op I love op I love op I love op I love op I love op I love op I love op I love op I love op I love op
So far i think you should do DxD 7 deadly sins marvel apocalypse (Another anime) Dc (another anime) If you keep this going that is and pls do
keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going
Not gonna lie, i'd probably pay money to see 100 more chapters of this--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------