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RWBY - Fall of Grimm
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My name? You can call me Darian. Darian Uchiha.
I don’t belong in this world, yet here I am. A world of Hunters and Huntresses, of Grimm and endless conflict. But I refuse to be just another player in someone else’s story. No, I will shape fate itself, bending this reality to my will. Through power, knowledge, and sheer determination, I will rewrite history—even if it means playing God.
But something is wrong. This isn’t the RWBY I remember. There are faces here that should never have existed, powers that don’t belong, and unseen forces moving in the shadows. Is this an alternate timeline? A test? Or is something—someone—actively working against me?
One thing is certain: I will carve my path, no matter the cost. Whether this world breaks… or bends to me… that is for me to decide.
Welcome to RWBY(D). This is my adventure.
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Just saying this first the ending was emotional and got me to tear up a little bit, now onto the negative I think that the Mc when he said “He was not going to train his body and only his aura and chakra” is complete idiocy since Madara didn’t get where he was just by training chakra when I read this I was shout out this fucking idiot so many times I lost so I continued reading from that stupid paragraph overall was a good chap I guess
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Pretty good in my opinion. It actually doesn't focus on the start of RWBY but more on his childhood and such with Ruby and Yang. Which is new to me as most authors that do an RWBY fanfic kinda skip childhood using their author powers and focus on the start of the story and let me tell ya, the author did a pretty good job on creating new scenarios and such without relying on the canon storyline, it's very interesting. Some of the problems that I have with writing is that the author combined multiple worlds together without stating why, how, it just happened. Like one chapter Revy from black lagoon showed up in child form and some gangsters are Doflamingo, Aizen, Obito, and Blackbeard. It wasn't explained how or why they all just showed up, I actually left it to rot because of how dumb that is to combine anime worlds. Like the power, levels would all be messed up and stuff as some people are actually restricted (Aizen with the fact that he cannot use his full power in the human world, they made the devil fruits disappear from the user and now they have to find them again.)
Man i love the way that the character fells alive and not some sort of puppets at your mercy . The story have good pace ,but you must retain the unicness of the characters, the implementacion of diferenta elements must dont distort the universe that you are molding into a mess of aberrations .The details and emotions of the character make this fac fic truly great.
I don't usually take the time to review the novels I've read, but I feel this one deserves one It's honestly great, I don't read that many RWBY fanfictions, but this one is wonderfully done, and combined with the Naruto aspect, it's 100x better Nice job, and good luck writing!
Why not give him shadow manipulation, he is a Shinobi so it makes sense to give him something that compliment his characteristics.ssssssssss
I think this is a good story, with some good and decent writing, that also have a very fresh and slow start, instead of the classic "3 chapters in super timeskip" where the author just skips to the main plot, and dont think much about the character development. Great job so far fam. ""Me nOt gOod At englsih, mE SorRy iF aNy misTaKes.
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I am giving you 4.6 becuase of the unstable update but the story is pretty damm good dude or dudet either of the two if you are a male or female Keep it up
I for one love your story it's unique. Personally i dont care if the mc op as long as he eventually has a challenge otherwise the stories boring.
This is a really enjoyable story with a mature no nonsense mc with a good pace to the story so far updates can be slow (we readers always want more ) and the author seems happy to interact with readers so more pls!
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Good story(for now). Will see how it goes later as it is only begging. Stable updates. But like with all good stories you want to get more then you get now.
I like the idea of this novel but this has a lot of things that madara uchiha wouldnt do like telling someone his abilities especially with knowing everything in rwby he just wouldnt give information out like that I also dont like the fact that he barely uses his eye and he loses it like cmon the eye powers are op and even with just the powers he had unlocked he should be using that fighting experience madara has its almost like he has the power of madara but not the life experience or will not even the skill. My main point is if your gonna use Madara in a fanfic he should be ******** and selfish he did try to take over the world on top of that he basically did it alone he had no allies just pawns.
The story might need some improvement, but is a great fanfic. The writing style is quite good and this fanfics ion is really interesting in that sense. I highly recommend this. For all the RWBY fans, this is a must read!!
Jilid 0 : Auxiliary Volume
Jilid 1 : RWBY - The Beginning.
- 1 Prologue: 6 years ago
- 2 Welcome. 6 years ago
- 3 Orphanage. 6 years ago
- 4 Qrow makes a choice. 6 years ago
- 5 Meeting my Adoptive Uncle and Aunt. 6 years ago
- 6 Yang is born. 6 years ago
- 7 She would have been a nice mother. 6 years ago
- 8 Biding my time. 6 years ago
- 9 Ruby is born. 6 years ago
- 10 Walk in the woods. 6 years ago
- 11 The sky was hidden that day. 6 years ago
- 12 Beginning my training. 6 years ago
- 13 Progress. 6 years ago
- 14 Why am I this way…? 6 years ago
- 15 Home. 6 years ago
- 16 Opening up. 6 years ago
- 17 Training is Important! 6 years ago
- 18 Time Skip~ 6 years ago
- 19 Sparring Ring! 6 years ago
- 20 The Grand Finale! 6 years ago
- 21 Entering Town. 6 years ago
- 22 Strolling Around Town. 6 years ago
- 23 Standing up... 6 years ago
- 24 A Small Date? 6 years ago
- 25 Plot against the Schnee. 6 years ago
- 26 Shinobi and a Schnee. 6 years ago
- 27 Taking a Human Life. 6 years ago
- 28 Taking a Human Soul. 6 years ago
- 29 The People in the Shadows… 6 years ago
- 30 Taking Off. 5 years ago
- 31 Going to get Zwei. 5 years ago
- 32 Planning out the future. 5 years ago
- 33 My bad 5 years ago
- 34 Sending Off Ruby and Yang. 5 years ago
Jilid 2 : RWBY - Time at Beacon.
- 35 You're Late. 5 years ago
- 36 Here Are The Rules. 5 years ago
- 37 Grimm Pack (Test One)P.1 5 years ago
- 38 Grimm Pack (Test One)P.2 5 years ago
- 39 Hitting Up The Club! 5 years ago
- 40 Hitting inside the club! 5 years ago
- 41 Beginner Rounds (Test Two) 5 years ago
- 42 Finalist Round (Test Two) 5 years ago
- 43 Today's Test and Handicap! 5 years ago
- 44 Jailhouse Slaughter (Final Test.1) 5 years ago
- 45 Jailhouse Slaughter (Final Test.2) 5 years ago
- 46 Strollin' Around Downtown. 5 years ago
- 47 You Want To Interrogate Me? 5 years ago
- 48 Arriving at the Beacon. 5 years ago
- 49 Sleepover in the Ballroom? Yes. 5 years ago
- 50 Before We Drop... 5 years ago
- 51 Landing Strategies! 5 years ago
- 52 Crossing the Emerald Forest 5 years ago
- 53 Gathering around the Ruins 4 years ago
- 54 Letting off a little steam 4 years ago
- 55 Getting Into Our Teams 4 years ago
- 56 I'm Sorry... 4 years ago
This d@mn author is a f*cking clown he just said that he already prepared and yet now he says im lost after releasing 5 chapters what a f*cking stup!d author said madara is weak? !d!ot when they were still a kid they are in war timezone already and u said hes weak? what a f*cking clown if hes weak he already died in war with other nation and yet the clown just said i put antagonist cause mc is too OP h*ly sh!t u call ur mc op keep getting trashed by enemy cause he keep on underestimating his enemies even with madaras memories u make ur mc stup!d like u d@mn author ur making madara of naruto weak u name ur novel fall of grim and yet u put godlike antagonist to fight against mc not just 1 obviously the grim will fall but not because of mc its because of the d@mn antagonists before mc can kill all grim hes already dead with so many antagonist this d*mb@ss author put in his novel what a joke author call his readers crybaby cause the readers didnt like what the author published obviously no one will object if what u put is good what a f*cking d*mb@ss author will say i already planned everything and just shut up and read ahaha f*cking screwloose who would like to read with stupid novel who cant accept critization of readers who wants tell and help u so u can improve it
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