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This is a amazing novel, one of the most interesting. i hope more people will read. i wont spoil it but i am anticipating the end. it has everything so i hope more people will get interested in this novel
Author, you watch too much telenovela. So, first we have seemingly normal cliche 'new kids in the school' plot then somehow it goes downhill from that. Anyway I still give it 5* because one, it is finished [so much better than other's with good story that got dropped] and it is HE.
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Why is my name on thisss 😭 my eyes almost popped out of my head when I saw it - oh the confusion. I wonder who this is directed to (being me or another person with the same name) or if it’s just random?
I really like the story so much such a great ending good for the bad characters sych a blessing to have read a story like this hopes that this author will right many more bl stories thank you and godbless
How, What, Why, When... This is what was revolving in my mind while reading the story. In the beginning the Author describes the story as a mess, which I thought would get cleared up when I'd near the end, but sadly NOOO...The story's got too many elements and way too many scenarios; characters are hard to understand, as they all seem to have a multiple personality disorder- mostly they do stuff, without any rhyme or reason...it's basically a jumbled mess which has left me with so many unanswered questions.😖😖😖😖😖
The story that I read so far is really good. I love Akio and Mark's chemistry. This story is getting me hooked. The author know very well how to grab reader's attention. As I will read further I will give more reviews. Author thanks for the story!!! 😊😊😊😍
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This is the first BL novel I read, I'm only a few chapters on but somehow I find the story promising, i would probably give this for my sister to read lol, she likes that kind of stuff I don't know why, but writing is actually good and the character development keep it up
First off, even though this is the first BL novel that I'm reading, I'm not a stranger to BL (manga / anime). Anyway, I would normally review after reading at least 10 chapters, so here goes. I gave a 5* even though the grammar is not perfect (mine isn't either). I do appreciate the Author's efforts in improving it. As for the storyline, it's okay for me and personally, would have liked how their relationship developed slower in the beginning. Still, it's an interesting story. Thumbs up!
So, since it is a BL it kills me on the inside to admit how good the story is and how likable the characters are. So in the end, it's a nice novel, keep up the good work!
The story is really captivating, to say the least. Nearly every chapter ends with a cliffhanger so I was forced to read it in one go. The content would suffice for at least double the chapters. In the beginning the author really formed out the story lines and gave hints here and there which made the reader guess along - it was really good. But when everything seemed to connect there was so much information that it became really difficult to follow (you could follow, but as a reader I felt overwhelmed). Also for my taste there were one or two too many happy endings involved which were not deserved by the characters. But please don't let it fool you - this author is ruthless when it comes to the emotions of the readers and characters alike. Nevertheless I enjoyed the book very much. So thank you for the good read:)
It's already midnight here, but I urge to finish this to settle my mind before sleeping. Such good novel. Well written characters. I love the two, Mark and Akio. But sometimes, I sense a little rush of building the two closer. A little more interaction between the would do. As the other saying, grammar needs some sort of profreading. **. My first BL novel...
So far I've only read the first volume but gotta say you've got a good story line. So far it's been a great journey. Keep up the good work author. And yeah Akio and Mark.... Ah just love them
5 stars***** and another hundred stars****************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************nice work author
this story is way better than i thought. keep it up author.and thank you for the effortwhile reading i was completely immersed in the two boys. they would make a good match. so people if your mind is strong go for it.author i give you stars ******************************
THOUGH IM NOT INTO BL STORIES. IM KEEPING THIS ONE.IT LOOKS INTERESTING EVEN THOUGH IM AT CHAP 3.KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AUTHOR.IM ADDING THIS TO MY LIBRARY AND WILL TRY TO MAKE TIME TO READ IT ONCE. IM A FAST READER AND IM SURE I CAN GET TO THE LATEST CHAP IN A DAY. I GIVE YOU 5 STARS AUTHOR NOT BECAUSE OF SOME COVER BUT BECAUSE ITS A GOOD STORY. ILL BE WAITING FOR DEATHTRAP ALSO.
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I really like this. Actually I really like BL stories. Thank you for writing this. I wish more of such stories from you.You are awesome.You
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This book was so good, I literally finished it in like three hours. I'm a big fan of BL and am always in search for good BL novels. If you're like me, you have to read this book. Aside from a few ****** mistakes, the plot was very interesting and the characters more so. All in all, I would have given it a 5,if not for the small mistakes. I recommend Author to get an editor if possible.
The writing has frequent punctuation and spacing errors but nothing a little proofreading can’t fix easily. It feels like Mark and Akio’s relationship was rushed somewhat in the beginning and then put on a standstill during Wang Xiu’s case. Perhaps if it was built up more slowly throughout the solving of her case, it would be more believable. I’m not quite getting the horror and thriller feel of the genre yet, but I can see it progressively getting there. What ruined the suspense for me, however, were the questions at the end of each chapter. It totally broke the story immersion for me because those questions are naturally asked by the readers themselves at the end. It’s redundant to ask such obvious questions. Besides this, I enjoyed the story! I like how Mark is half-Indian because most MCs on here are Chinese. Good job, keep it up!
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Good story with great potential. like the characters and the development of the story. the writing quality need little work but overall okay. good work author.
I originally wanted to read it until 20 chapters, but then I realized I finished it until the end hahaha. I'm half into BL genre, but I didn't hate it so I'll give you a great job for the story. The writing quality would be more awesome if you add some more detail on it. Like how his reaction or how he felt. There were misspelling words or grammars too that need to be fixed and some cleanup. Well, who am I to judge? I'm not an English speaker and when I wrote my novel, I have a lot of mistakes as well XD. Anyway, good job for the story! I'll try to read your new story again in the future ;)
overall i like your book and how you building the story progress, and also the characters. may i know how many chapter will release per day?
Reviewing the latest 3 chapters- would suggest to improve grammer i.e she said, scratching her arm. Readability is fine in general. The sentence below though- what is the main subject? “Father,do you remember Akihito Makoto,the drug dealer?”He questioned. Sentence variety is there and passive voice is kept low. All the best ^^
Hello everyone.Poppy here.If you like my story, please vote a power stone for me.Your votes are like supplements which give me the inspiration to write.Also, feel free to suggest any correction that is required for the story.If things go well, I will continue to provide you all with quality work.
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This is a amazing novel, one of the most interesting. i hope more people will read. i wont spoil it but i am anticipating the end. it has everything so i hope more people will get interested in this novel
Author, you watch too much telenovela. So, first we have seemingly normal cliche 'new kids in the school' plot then somehow it goes downhill from that. Anyway I still give it 5* because one, it is finished [so much better than other's with good story that got dropped] and it is HE.
Membuka SPOILER Why is my name on thisss 😭 my eyes almost popped out of my head when I saw it - oh the confusion. I wonder who this is directed to (being me or another person with the same name) or if it’s just random?
I really like the story so much such a great ending good for the bad characters sych a blessing to have read a story like this hopes that this author will right many more bl stories thank you and godbless
How, What, Why, When... This is what was revolving in my mind while reading the story. In the beginning the Author describes the story as a mess, which I thought would get cleared up when I'd near the end, but sadly NOOO...The story's got too many elements and way too many scenarios; characters are hard to understand, as they all seem to have a multiple personality disorder- mostly they do stuff, without any rhyme or reason...it's basically a jumbled mess which has left me with so many unanswered questions.😖😖😖😖😖
The story that I read so far is really good. I love Akio and Mark's chemistry. This story is getting me hooked. The author know very well how to grab reader's attention. As I will read further I will give more reviews. Author thanks for the story!!! 😊😊😊😍
There's NO SMUT😭😭😭 There's NO SMUT😭😭😭 There's NO SMUT😭😭😭 There's NO SMUT😭😭😭 There's NO SMUT😭😭😭 There's NO SMUT😭😭😭 There's NO SMUT😭😭😭
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This is the first BL novel I read, I'm only a few chapters on but somehow I find the story promising, i would probably give this for my sister to read lol, she likes that kind of stuff I don't know why, but writing is actually good and the character development keep it up
First off, even though this is the first BL novel that I'm reading, I'm not a stranger to BL (manga / anime). Anyway, I would normally review after reading at least 10 chapters, so here goes. I gave a 5* even though the grammar is not perfect (mine isn't either). I do appreciate the Author's efforts in improving it. As for the storyline, it's okay for me and personally, would have liked how their relationship developed slower in the beginning. Still, it's an interesting story. Thumbs up!
So, since it is a BL it kills me on the inside to admit how good the story is and how likable the characters are. So in the end, it's a nice novel, keep up the good work!
The story is really captivating, to say the least. Nearly every chapter ends with a cliffhanger so I was forced to read it in one go. The content would suffice for at least double the chapters. In the beginning the author really formed out the story lines and gave hints here and there which made the reader guess along - it was really good. But when everything seemed to connect there was so much information that it became really difficult to follow (you could follow, but as a reader I felt overwhelmed). Also for my taste there were one or two too many happy endings involved which were not deserved by the characters. But please don't let it fool you - this author is ruthless when it comes to the emotions of the readers and characters alike. Nevertheless I enjoyed the book very much. So thank you for the good read:)
It's already midnight here, but I urge to finish this to settle my mind before sleeping. Such good novel. Well written characters. I love the two, Mark and Akio. But sometimes, I sense a little rush of building the two closer. A little more interaction between the would do. As the other saying, grammar needs some sort of profreading. **. My first BL novel...
So far I've only read the first volume but gotta say you've got a good story line. So far it's been a great journey. Keep up the good work author. And yeah Akio and Mark.... Ah just love them
5 stars***** and another hundred stars****************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************nice work author
this story is way better than i thought. keep it up author.and thank you for the effortwhile reading i was completely immersed in the two boys. they would make a good match. so people if your mind is strong go for it.author i give you stars ******************************
THOUGH IM NOT INTO BL STORIES. IM KEEPING THIS ONE.IT LOOKS INTERESTING EVEN THOUGH IM AT CHAP 3.KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AUTHOR.IM ADDING THIS TO MY LIBRARY AND WILL TRY TO MAKE TIME TO READ IT ONCE. IM A FAST READER AND IM SURE I CAN GET TO THE LATEST CHAP IN A DAY. I GIVE YOU 5 STARS AUTHOR NOT BECAUSE OF SOME COVER BUT BECAUSE ITS A GOOD STORY. ILL BE WAITING FOR DEATHTRAP ALSO.
Membuka SPOILER I really like this. Actually I really like BL stories. Thank you for writing this. I wish more of such stories from you.You are awesome.You
Membuka SPOILER This book was so good, I literally finished it in like three hours. I'm a big fan of BL and am always in search for good BL novels. If you're like me, you have to read this book. Aside from a few ****** mistakes, the plot was very interesting and the characters more so. All in all, I would have given it a 5,if not for the small mistakes. I recommend Author to get an editor if possible.
The writing has frequent punctuation and spacing errors but nothing a little proofreading can’t fix easily. It feels like Mark and Akio’s relationship was rushed somewhat in the beginning and then put on a standstill during Wang Xiu’s case. Perhaps if it was built up more slowly throughout the solving of her case, it would be more believable. I’m not quite getting the horror and thriller feel of the genre yet, but I can see it progressively getting there. What ruined the suspense for me, however, were the questions at the end of each chapter. It totally broke the story immersion for me because those questions are naturally asked by the readers themselves at the end. It’s redundant to ask such obvious questions. Besides this, I enjoyed the story! I like how Mark is half-Indian because most MCs on here are Chinese. Good job, keep it up!
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Good story with great potential. like the characters and the development of the story. the writing quality need little work but overall okay. good work author.
I originally wanted to read it until 20 chapters, but then I realized I finished it until the end hahaha. I'm half into BL genre, but I didn't hate it so I'll give you a great job for the story. The writing quality would be more awesome if you add some more detail on it. Like how his reaction or how he felt. There were misspelling words or grammars too that need to be fixed and some cleanup. Well, who am I to judge? I'm not an English speaker and when I wrote my novel, I have a lot of mistakes as well XD. Anyway, good job for the story! I'll try to read your new story again in the future ;)
overall i like your book and how you building the story progress, and also the characters. may i know how many chapter will release per day?
Reviewing the latest 3 chapters- would suggest to improve grammer i.e she said, scratching her arm. Readability is fine in general. The sentence below though- what is the main subject? “Father,do you remember Akihito Makoto,the drug dealer?”He questioned. Sentence variety is there and passive voice is kept low. All the best ^^
Hello everyone.Poppy here.If you like my story, please vote a power stone for me.Your votes are like supplements which give me the inspiration to write.Also, feel free to suggest any correction that is required for the story.If things go well, I will continue to provide you all with quality work.
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