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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
The background and the premise is certainly exciting! But the grammar and everything else is downright horrible. I'm sorry but the author needs to improve alot.
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Hey Mr Author, After i read your story, I have to angrily state that you perverted both the British and the source material way too much!!!! How the hell the Superpower on Earth just let their allies to fall like that while they have more than enough firepower to destroy Estermage for only 2 weeks Piece of advice: Change the name of the story as Brittania in the New World: Thus the British sit there and watch their allies crumble like a retard!!!
Okay so what is with the idea that a modern army would act like this. Do the words shock and awe me any thing, come on this was not thought out at all!
Hmm. Just the premise the Britain not only Brex****ted but did it this hard gives me great pleasure. Britain is a pox on this blighted world and we all would be infinitely better without the teafags. Now onto the story. Unfortunately the first reactions accompanying such cataclysmic changes would be Mass hysterica with a generous response of collective resurgence of belief in Gods all and sundry, not an organized response Secondly, with Britain being a dysfunctional democracy that can't even decide whether to exit the EU or not, it won't have a single response. Half the country would try to reach out, half would try to kick out the native inhabitants as immigrants and everyone would moan endlessly about a lack of tea and fish and chips. Overall, 3/10, but only with rice. Also no concept of military supply chain and command structure
Wow no clue about military tactics or how modern weapons would work against 1700 style weapons and tactics. Sorry but this story is scattered, clueless and sorry to say stupid. Not worth reading.
So far I like it. Its like that one Japanese light novel where the Japanese navy appear in a new world. Or where Japan as a whole is transported to a magical world. I would recommend any one who liked those to read this. Cant wait to see a modern military destroy a barbarian magic civ.
This is the first story i created in webnovel and i hope you enjoy uwu and im so thankful for those who are supporting my webnovel by simply reading it. May you have a good day! :)
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
The background and the premise is certainly exciting! But the grammar and everything else is downright horrible. I'm sorry but the author needs to improve alot.
Membuka SPOILER Hey Mr Author, After i read your story, I have to angrily state that you perverted both the British and the source material way too much!!!! How the hell the Superpower on Earth just let their allies to fall like that while they have more than enough firepower to destroy Estermage for only 2 weeks Piece of advice: Change the name of the story as Brittania in the New World: Thus the British sit there and watch their allies crumble like a retard!!!
Okay so what is with the idea that a modern army would act like this. Do the words shock and awe me any thing, come on this was not thought out at all!
Hmm. Just the premise the Britain not only Brex****ted but did it this hard gives me great pleasure. Britain is a pox on this blighted world and we all would be infinitely better without the teafags. Now onto the story. Unfortunately the first reactions accompanying such cataclysmic changes would be Mass hysterica with a generous response of collective resurgence of belief in Gods all and sundry, not an organized response Secondly, with Britain being a dysfunctional democracy that can't even decide whether to exit the EU or not, it won't have a single response. Half the country would try to reach out, half would try to kick out the native inhabitants as immigrants and everyone would moan endlessly about a lack of tea and fish and chips. Overall, 3/10, but only with rice. Also no concept of military supply chain and command structure
Wow no clue about military tactics or how modern weapons would work against 1700 style weapons and tactics. Sorry but this story is scattered, clueless and sorry to say stupid. Not worth reading.
So far I like it. Its like that one Japanese light novel where the Japanese navy appear in a new world. Or where Japan as a whole is transported to a magical world. I would recommend any one who liked those to read this. Cant wait to see a modern military destroy a barbarian magic civ.
This is the first story i created in webnovel and i hope you enjoy uwu and im so thankful for those who are supporting my webnovel by simply reading it. May you have a good day! :)
$115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels! + Get Hardcover Publish Hey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing contest! This contest is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi, but if you haven’t worked on these genres, that’s TOTALLY FINE! You can refer to the given examples and tips to develop a new story. As all new stories can get cash rewards, this might be your chance to begin your writing career and start to make a living by writing! Not to mention that you can take your chance to win the big cash and get your books published in hardcover! For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/3tBG7l7