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WOMAN!
She was never just a women. she was a Daughter, a wife, a mother, a colleage and much more.
But she was never that beautiful, sweet, shy, subdued voice, multitasking woman you wanted for yourself. She! spent her whole life to be that perfect version you always wanted her to be.
Because she was always blamed to her own self.
โ you are too loud! why are you so dark? why is your hair so curly? he is your husband he owes you.โ
It's time when she has to decide whether she wants to come out as unique version of herself or to die trying to mold herself the way they want her to be.
-- Peringkat
Power 
-- Power
stone Anda Mungkin Juga Menyukai
3Ulasan-ulasan
- Kualitas penulisan
- Stabilitas Pembaruan
- Pengembangan Cerita
- Desain Karakter
- Latar Belakang Dunia
Bagikan pikiran Anda dengan orang lain
Tulis ulasan
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Yes this is a good story. Also the name of characters look similar to Japan people. Now I want to tell u something ( pls don't mind) that , Firstly u had very clearly written your story and which is understandable too. But if u want your story more interesting then u should make a habit of making proverbs and idioms that too also hard. By doing this not only your English speech will become clear but the reader who is reading your novel should also came across many new proverbs and idioms. If you came across other novel s u had see that there language is different from us ( in general ). Also one thing that u should make your English speech more difficult ( by reading English news papers like; Times of India and India Express etc) By reading this u came across the different languages that how they use. Else everything is good KEEP IT UP Bring this types of other novels also. Thanks
Jilid 1
- 1 letter from 1st goal 5 years ago
- 2 way to dream 5 years ago
- 3 Day I got proposal. 5 years ago
- 4 Turning point. 5 years ago
- 5 Main story begins 5 years ago
- 6 Answer!!!!: which will change the future 5 years ago
- 7 what...... wife? 5 years ago
- 8 Capability is within me. 5 years ago
- 9 Contractual marriage? 5 years ago
- 10 Am I a puppet to u? 5 years ago
- 11 Way to my heart! 5 years ago
- 12 want to run far away! 5 years ago
- 13 I really want you! 5 years ago
- 14 A new start! 5 years ago
- 15 Let'sโ step into new worlds together! 5 years ago
- 16 Let's enter into each other's world! 5 years ago
- 17 Making way to hearts! 5 years ago
- 18 what a coincidence! 4 years ago
- 19 KAITO is here! 3 years ago
Plss read and write comment. I know this is starting of story but I will make sure I will do less mistakes and make the story more romantic ๐๐