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Me gusta tu historia, espero que no la dejes caer, y si hay algún desarrollo yuri ( ning'er/yang xin) seria muy bien recibido. PD: cuando aparece Xiao Xue?, o ya quedo fuera?
MadSnail XD. ......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................MadSnail XD. ......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I really like the story but I hate when you portray her as weak minded and blushes at guys who act nice or are slightly handsome, like cmon wtf are you thinking?
Having a tales of Demons and Gods story with out the over powered nei li but with the timed and quiet Xiao ninga who has to bring both herself and her friends back to their peck self while trying to keep her feelings for Nie li in check at the same time would likely produce the best tales of Demons and Gods if you have a problem with the overpowered Nie li
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i think this is one of the best fanfics of tdg. for me the story has more depth if compared to original. toned down (where it matters), more mature version of original story. there's no easy groundbreaking/wish ability for transmigrated person, so if you are looking for super op mc in easy mode, this story might not be for you.
Need more updates! Good quality for a fun fan-fic especially waiting, waiting, waiting for MadSnail story. Thank you, author-san, keep going!
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This is a good novel. I think this novel have a good potential. Also I think ninger need teach her Grandpa with purifying technic so he can be cure or became a legend rank.
Love this story.... Please don't drop it and if possible please update it weekly unlike madsnail who does it monthly ........................................................
The story is good... it makes my blood boil for excitement.. hopping to have more chapter to read.😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 ...........................................................................
Read this only if you're a fan of the original TDG! The author builds on the world and timelines of the original story, so if you don't have any context, it can be hard to get up to speed. Otherwise, the writing quality is excellent and it's even interesting to see the progression of the writing as different styles are experimented with. The updates have been very regular, the story arcs that differ from the original TDG are creative and interesting, and new characters are being developed like Chen Linjian and maybe Wei Nang? I definitely recommend this if you appreciated TDG!
I've been seeing so many authors out there shamelessly giving themselves 5 stars...and today I'm going shamelessly give myself 5 stars. 😝😝😝 Not because I think my novel is awesome. It's only 10 chapters in and I've barely scratched the tip of the iceberg of the story I want to tell, so no one should claim that it is 'awesome'...at this point of time. But because I have a new-found respect for how authors do this writing thing. Re-reading over and over for spelling and grammatical mistakes, adding in little details where you will only reveal its reason many chapters down the road, making sure that your plot makes sense on the whole, making dialogues and interactions between characters somewhat believable, and the list goes on and on. It's tough. But most of all, it's really tiring. Writing is a consuming and draining activity because you have to be fully immersed in 'the flow' to come up with something half-decent, and then have the courage to post it up in public for anyone with a keyboard to tear down in half a second. I only started this writing journey on impulse 6 days ago, and what a ride it's been so far. I'd never have thought I could complete 10 chapters from scratch in this time frame. 19,000 words and two big eye bags later, I can look back with a tiny sense of accomplishment. I've sacrificed sleep, gym time and even my focus at the workplace to get this out. I don't know how long it will continue but it's been a wild, fulfilling ride so far which I'm not sure if I'm quite ready to climb off yet. That is why I will proudly and shamelessly give myself a 5-star rating. 😘😘😘
I know this story has just begun but I fell in love with the first few chapters the moment I started reading it!! For a fan-fic, the writing quality is superb and the updating has been regular...so far. At least once a day. The character design and interaction is actually quite entertaining and deeper than I expected. The world background seems to be based on a different novel which I'll have to check out soon but it seems pretty complete. And the story development is maybe my favourite part so far in terms of pacing and maintaining the reader interest. Love it and fully recommend it...as long as the author keeps updating. 😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅
I am now like the same with tdg keep refreshing to see if there is a new chapter and keep reread ing i liked tdg the besg untill they went to that dark world with the lord of death faceslapping and outsmarting everyone. Curieus what she will do will she just save glory city and relax?? The sage emperor was nie li goal because bloody vengance she rlly doesbt have that.. she coild decide all those elfs and everything not her problem and just run around all over the world glory city us in since ghe sage emperor had no way of reaching it. And she wont be able to save that firegod so she would need different oportunities if she does want to revebge nie li... but can she still trust him?? I wouldnt...
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I just wanna give you a five star purely because you mentioned the "incredible pace" of MadSnail XD. ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
wooww good story but sadly i'm not a fan of female novel😂😂😂.So i cann't gave you 5 stars ,but your story have good reason after all ning'er is a gainus.
very unique premise, I quite like your imagination. Interested in seeing what you can come up with. ......................................................
Me gusta tu historia, espero que no la dejes caer, y si hay algún desarrollo yuri ( ning'er/yang xin) seria muy bien recibido. PD: cuando aparece Xiao Xue?, o ya quedo fuera?
MadSnail XD. ......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................MadSnail XD. ......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I really like the story but I hate when you portray her as weak minded and blushes at guys who act nice or are slightly handsome, like cmon wtf are you thinking?
Having a tales of Demons and Gods story with out the over powered nei li but with the timed and quiet Xiao ninga who has to bring both herself and her friends back to their peck self while trying to keep her feelings for Nie li in check at the same time would likely produce the best tales of Demons and Gods if you have a problem with the overpowered Nie li
Membuka SPOILER i think this is one of the best fanfics of tdg. for me the story has more depth if compared to original. toned down (where it matters), more mature version of original story. there's no easy groundbreaking/wish ability for transmigrated person, so if you are looking for super op mc in easy mode, this story might not be for you.
Need more updates! Good quality for a fun fan-fic especially waiting, waiting, waiting for MadSnail story. Thank you, author-san, keep going!
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This is a good novel. I think this novel have a good potential. Also I think ninger need teach her Grandpa with purifying technic so he can be cure or became a legend rank.
Love this story.... Please don't drop it and if possible please update it weekly unlike madsnail who does it monthly ........................................................
The story is good... it makes my blood boil for excitement.. hopping to have more chapter to read.😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 ...........................................................................
Read this only if you're a fan of the original TDG! The author builds on the world and timelines of the original story, so if you don't have any context, it can be hard to get up to speed. Otherwise, the writing quality is excellent and it's even interesting to see the progression of the writing as different styles are experimented with. The updates have been very regular, the story arcs that differ from the original TDG are creative and interesting, and new characters are being developed like Chen Linjian and maybe Wei Nang? I definitely recommend this if you appreciated TDG!
I've been seeing so many authors out there shamelessly giving themselves 5 stars...and today I'm going shamelessly give myself 5 stars. 😝😝😝 Not because I think my novel is awesome. It's only 10 chapters in and I've barely scratched the tip of the iceberg of the story I want to tell, so no one should claim that it is 'awesome'...at this point of time. But because I have a new-found respect for how authors do this writing thing. Re-reading over and over for spelling and grammatical mistakes, adding in little details where you will only reveal its reason many chapters down the road, making sure that your plot makes sense on the whole, making dialogues and interactions between characters somewhat believable, and the list goes on and on. It's tough. But most of all, it's really tiring. Writing is a consuming and draining activity because you have to be fully immersed in 'the flow' to come up with something half-decent, and then have the courage to post it up in public for anyone with a keyboard to tear down in half a second. I only started this writing journey on impulse 6 days ago, and what a ride it's been so far. I'd never have thought I could complete 10 chapters from scratch in this time frame. 19,000 words and two big eye bags later, I can look back with a tiny sense of accomplishment. I've sacrificed sleep, gym time and even my focus at the workplace to get this out. I don't know how long it will continue but it's been a wild, fulfilling ride so far which I'm not sure if I'm quite ready to climb off yet. That is why I will proudly and shamelessly give myself a 5-star rating. 😘😘😘
I know this story has just begun but I fell in love with the first few chapters the moment I started reading it!! For a fan-fic, the writing quality is superb and the updating has been regular...so far. At least once a day. The character design and interaction is actually quite entertaining and deeper than I expected. The world background seems to be based on a different novel which I'll have to check out soon but it seems pretty complete. And the story development is maybe my favourite part so far in terms of pacing and maintaining the reader interest. Love it and fully recommend it...as long as the author keeps updating. 😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅
I am now like the same with tdg keep refreshing to see if there is a new chapter and keep reread ing i liked tdg the besg untill they went to that dark world with the lord of death faceslapping and outsmarting everyone. Curieus what she will do will she just save glory city and relax?? The sage emperor was nie li goal because bloody vengance she rlly doesbt have that.. she coild decide all those elfs and everything not her problem and just run around all over the world glory city us in since ghe sage emperor had no way of reaching it. And she wont be able to save that firegod so she would need different oportunities if she does want to revebge nie li... but can she still trust him?? I wouldnt...
Membuka SPOILER I just wanna give you a five star purely because you mentioned the "incredible pace" of MadSnail XD. ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
wooww good story but sadly i'm not a fan of female novel😂😂😂.So i cann't gave you 5 stars ,but your story have good reason after all ning'er is a gainus.
very unique premise, I quite like your imagination. Interested in seeing what you can come up with. ......................................................
Finally, something new! Not another harem trash!