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I don't know why he always wants to preserve history when he already made big changes. In short, history becomes very boring and is not worth reading.
Honestly one of best system stories ice read in a while Despite lin Chen kinda being a bit mellow sometimes he generally wasnt that bad of an mc honestly liked him tbh though I do wish the romance was written about more but hey still good in my eyes Sad to see this go๐ญ thanks for writing it man
I can't believe this journey has come to an end I started this fic when there were less than 10 chapters uploaded and it's so good I loved this fic so much It has zero potholes , the system is perfectly explained,even the time travelling is very well done. The Mc's power growth is so logical, and side characters aren't useless at all overall a very good read On to the next fic!!
I have finished reading this novel(chap 622) and quite surprised itโs really a good reads for chinese novel and Mtl translations. Props for the great work translator did in this translation. The story itself is typical dragon ball story which Mc always fighting stronger enemies. but the difference is the Mc most of the time are stronger compare to the enemies. The timeline start before goku was born where saiyan planet is still exist. The Mc will become the king of saiyans and the story will progress into the cannon of dragon ball. The novel itself is combination of other dragon ball series such as dragon ball gt, super, heroes and movies as well. Except for some nonsense where some readers couldnโt accept such as almost killing frieza in his first form in the beginning of story, the rest of the story is good. In my opinion itโs normal to have some loopholes in fanfic. Even it happened to some popular novel or manga as well. So, give this Fanfic a try if you are dragon ball fans! P.S. Pls give me other recommendation for dragon ball fanfic since there are only few dragon ball fanfic that actually good.
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ูุงู ูุฐุง ุฑุงุฆุนุง ุงุชู ูู ุชูุฒูู ุงููุตูู ุงููุงุฏู ุฉ ุจุฃุณุฑุน ููุช ู ู ูู ู ุชุญู ุณ ุฌุฏุง ูู ุง ุณูุญุฏุซ ุงุชุณุงุฆู ุงุฐุง ูุงู ูููู ุณูุชูู ุงูุบุฑูุฒุฉ ุงููุงุฆูุฉ ุงู ูุง ูุงุฐุง ู ุง ูุงู ุฌูุฑูู ุณูุนุฑู ุงูุญูููุฉ ุงู ูุง
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it's really interesting and I hope that the author continue to update it๐
Vraiment beaucoup de problรจmes de traductions dommage car l'histoire est gรฉniale si on arrive ร lire ร travers la mauvaise traduction !!!!!!!.!??
Aunque no dirรฉ que es el mejor fanfic que eh leรญdo ciertamente estรก bueno no gusta que tenga sistema pero estรก pasable por quรฉ no puede andar comprando cosas como en otras historias .....al menos por el momento ciertamente recomiendo leer el fanfic si tengo algo de que quejarme serรญa el echo de nunca se nos diรณ como se mira el prota aunque se nos ah dado uno que otros rasgos fรญsicos aรบn no estรก del todo claro como es ๐คท
One of the best I've read so far ๐ ๐ ๐ โค ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ โค ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ โค ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ โค ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ โค ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ โค ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ โค ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ โค ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ โค ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐
A lot of people forget that shin is stronger then frieza in dbz (not dbs)..............................................................................
Tell the author to stop making excuses to travel to other different space-times, and to stop calling him Lin Chen when his sayajin name is Links. Also, if the novel is based on him being a Saiyan king, let it focus on kingdom building, not adventure.
It's actually pretty Mtl translation. Out of all the translations I've read this is one of the best and its all great. I jave nothing else to say Except WELL DONE Sir.๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
not gonna lie , starting of the story is really good and likeable, but in later parts its too much Androids , well may be its just me but why can you just die Dr. Gero #frustrated ๐๐๐dont mind the last line, anyways keep it up ๐
Membuka SPOILER
I read all the chaps, what can I tell youโฆalthough the plot has no differences like just read and u can understand butโฆdragonball is essentially thatโฆnew enemies with new problems, lol! Just read it, for me, itโs quite balanced, the author keep the PL logical and realistic. The transformation although the name can be better but meh. The fight scene is also good but not the best BUT letโs be honest if itโs too complicated then itโll be boring too. Just read it, when i finished 200+ chaps yknow what I did, I cursed bcs I need to wait for more chaps!!
This was one of the first fanfics Iโve ever read so im being completely biased when I give this a 5 star. The story while kinda mid is entertaining nonetheless. Using the raw ver Iโve read forward to about chapter 500 or so and I can pretty confidently say that this is a power fantasy where the mc will never lose and if thatโs your thing than this is a pretty good novel. It also has some kingdom building as well but itโs kinda sidelined.
As the one translating it, i would just say read this novel past 100 chapters, it gets better. Android arc is completely different in this novel.
Expresรกndolo en pocas palabras una historia con poco desarrollo de personaje, se siente muy apresurada y deja a medias las cosas, estรก en total discordancia con lo que representa un Saiyan un guerrero orgulloso que ama las batallas no alguien pacรญfico me llamo la atenciรณn el tรญtulo pero no es lo que buscaba no me gustรณ
From the very 1st chapter , everything is very strange ! For 4 years , he could not raise his strength because he has a bad pedigree ? all he had to do was fly to earth , order a bulma gravity room and food for 10 years and go to the time room and that 's it , or did he just want to cultivate ? like not going through heavy training and just cultivating ?
Membuka SPOILER
the MC killed Frieza in the first way, too ridiculous, the author forgot that the Freezar race has the greatest physical resistance in history, Frieza with half his body survived in space, Frieza blew up planet earth in his movie and was still alive, it's impossible for him to die with pathetic 1 million power
*spoilers* mc becomes king and immediately abandones his race, after 5 years he comes back to ruins and his priority are his hormones towards the first female he sees. Then immediately he abandoned his ppl again for a few years living in luxury leeching of a rich guy on another planet. He didnt need to stay to order and send med and gravity machines as his excuse to leech off doc.briefs. Mc finally comes back to the planet and immediately leaves when he realizes noone had anything to do but fight each other, so mc got saiyans a job at galactic patrol. After some idling which he claims as learning turtle school martial arts, ( mc claims to learn skills by just seeing and its guaranteed hed watch goku closely anyways) mc realizes that the obvious vengeful frieza that mc let off has killed his "wife". ~after the fight he let off frieza goons after announcing draginballs info so he can get another wife killed. If you love the above then you can read this *arbage too!
Membuka SPOILER I don't know why he always wants to preserve history when he already made big changes. In short, history becomes very boring and is not worth reading.
Honestly one of best system stories ice read in a while Despite lin Chen kinda being a bit mellow sometimes he generally wasnt that bad of an mc honestly liked him tbh though I do wish the romance was written about more but hey still good in my eyes Sad to see this go๐ญ thanks for writing it man
I can't believe this journey has come to an end I started this fic when there were less than 10 chapters uploaded and it's so good I loved this fic so much It has zero potholes , the system is perfectly explained,even the time travelling is very well done. The Mc's power growth is so logical, and side characters aren't useless at all overall a very good read On to the next fic!!
I have finished reading this novel(chap 622) and quite surprised itโs really a good reads for chinese novel and Mtl translations. Props for the great work translator did in this translation. The story itself is typical dragon ball story which Mc always fighting stronger enemies. but the difference is the Mc most of the time are stronger compare to the enemies. The timeline start before goku was born where saiyan planet is still exist. The Mc will become the king of saiyans and the story will progress into the cannon of dragon ball. The novel itself is combination of other dragon ball series such as dragon ball gt, super, heroes and movies as well. Except for some nonsense where some readers couldnโt accept such as almost killing frieza in his first form in the beginning of story, the rest of the story is good. In my opinion itโs normal to have some loopholes in fanfic. Even it happened to some popular novel or manga as well. So, give this Fanfic a try if you are dragon ball fans! P.S. Pls give me other recommendation for dragon ball fanfic since there are only few dragon ball fanfic that actually good.
[img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Good night]
ูุงู ูุฐุง ุฑุงุฆุนุง ุงุชู ูู ุชูุฒูู ุงููุตูู ุงููุงุฏู ุฉ ุจุฃุณุฑุน ููุช ู ู ูู ู ุชุญู ุณ ุฌุฏุง ูู ุง ุณูุญุฏุซ ุงุชุณุงุฆู ุงุฐุง ูุงู ูููู ุณูุชูู ุงูุบุฑูุฒุฉ ุงููุงุฆูุฉ ุงู ูุง ูุงุฐุง ู ุง ูุงู ุฌูุฑูู ุณูุนุฑู ุงูุญูููุฉ ุงู ูุง
Membuka SPOILER it's really interesting and I hope that the author continue to update it๐
Vraiment beaucoup de problรจmes de traductions dommage car l'histoire est gรฉniale si on arrive ร lire ร travers la mauvaise traduction !!!!!!!.!??
Aunque no dirรฉ que es el mejor fanfic que eh leรญdo ciertamente estรก bueno no gusta que tenga sistema pero estรก pasable por quรฉ no puede andar comprando cosas como en otras historias .....al menos por el momento ciertamente recomiendo leer el fanfic si tengo algo de que quejarme serรญa el echo de nunca se nos diรณ como se mira el prota aunque se nos ah dado uno que otros rasgos fรญsicos aรบn no estรก del todo claro como es ๐คท
One of the best I've read so far ๐ ๐ ๐ โค ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ โค ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ โค ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ โค ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ โค ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ โค ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ โค ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ โค ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ โค ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐
A lot of people forget that shin is stronger then frieza in dbz (not dbs)..............................................................................
Tell the author to stop making excuses to travel to other different space-times, and to stop calling him Lin Chen when his sayajin name is Links. Also, if the novel is based on him being a Saiyan king, let it focus on kingdom building, not adventure.
It's actually pretty Mtl translation. Out of all the translations I've read this is one of the best and its all great. I jave nothing else to say Except WELL DONE Sir.๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
not gonna lie , starting of the story is really good and likeable, but in later parts its too much Androids , well may be its just me but why can you just die Dr. Gero #frustrated ๐๐๐dont mind the last line, anyways keep it up ๐
Membuka SPOILER I read all the chaps, what can I tell youโฆalthough the plot has no differences like just read and u can understand butโฆdragonball is essentially thatโฆnew enemies with new problems, lol! Just read it, for me, itโs quite balanced, the author keep the PL logical and realistic. The transformation although the name can be better but meh. The fight scene is also good but not the best BUT letโs be honest if itโs too complicated then itโll be boring too. Just read it, when i finished 200+ chaps yknow what I did, I cursed bcs I need to wait for more chaps!!
This was one of the first fanfics Iโve ever read so im being completely biased when I give this a 5 star. The story while kinda mid is entertaining nonetheless. Using the raw ver Iโve read forward to about chapter 500 or so and I can pretty confidently say that this is a power fantasy where the mc will never lose and if thatโs your thing than this is a pretty good novel. It also has some kingdom building as well but itโs kinda sidelined.
As the one translating it, i would just say read this novel past 100 chapters, it gets better. Android arc is completely different in this novel.
Expresรกndolo en pocas palabras una historia con poco desarrollo de personaje, se siente muy apresurada y deja a medias las cosas, estรก en total discordancia con lo que representa un Saiyan un guerrero orgulloso que ama las batallas no alguien pacรญfico me llamo la atenciรณn el tรญtulo pero no es lo que buscaba no me gustรณ
From the very 1st chapter , everything is very strange ! For 4 years , he could not raise his strength because he has a bad pedigree ? all he had to do was fly to earth , order a bulma gravity room and food for 10 years and go to the time room and that 's it , or did he just want to cultivate ? like not going through heavy training and just cultivating ?
Membuka SPOILER the MC killed Frieza in the first way, too ridiculous, the author forgot that the Freezar race has the greatest physical resistance in history, Frieza with half his body survived in space, Frieza blew up planet earth in his movie and was still alive, it's impossible for him to die with pathetic 1 million power
*spoilers* mc becomes king and immediately abandones his race, after 5 years he comes back to ruins and his priority are his hormones towards the first female he sees. Then immediately he abandoned his ppl again for a few years living in luxury leeching of a rich guy on another planet. He didnt need to stay to order and send med and gravity machines as his excuse to leech off doc.briefs. Mc finally comes back to the planet and immediately leaves when he realizes noone had anything to do but fight each other, so mc got saiyans a job at galactic patrol. After some idling which he claims as learning turtle school martial arts, ( mc claims to learn skills by just seeing and its guaranteed hed watch goku closely anyways) mc realizes that the obvious vengeful frieza that mc let off has killed his "wife". ~after the fight he let off frieza goons after announcing draginballs info so he can get another wife killed. If you love the above then you can read this *arbage too!
Membuka SPOILER