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The story is interesting so far. I would like to know more about the current state of the world. Also what this Sombra disease is and why her Dad is so paranoid. Otherwise, grammar is really good, keep up the good work!
The story is interesting so far. I would like to know more about the current state of the world. Also what this Sombra disease is and why her Dad is so paranoid. Otherwise, grammar is really good, keep up the good work!