Business-Man Naruto Unknown Path

LV 6

Murdekai

I've seen stories with worse grammar, but that doesn't excuse this novel for having bad grammar. I was intrigued by the story's premise but I couldn't even make it past the first chapter. The first chapter wasn't unreadable but the errors quickly broke immersion for me. I highly recommend the author, if you are reading this, to fix your chapters if you have time.

LV 5

Shaikh_Tohaa

Those who are new, I am going to help them know that the Mc was a multi talented businessman from earth died from a accident and tramsmigrated in the body of Naruto and fused with his soul and became one person but for having a strong soul and knowledge a new person was created with a smarter mind and ideas and Now this is when the Journey of our New Mc begins. Don't worry he will not have a negative carecter nor positive but in a was only perfect for himself. So only he could improve and won't give a dam about anyone else in the long run.

LV 6

CelsoMarques

5 star. Worth it! No harem please. True love rules.

LV 13

Slesk

As previously mentioned by those who have posted before me, the grammar is horrendous. I understand people who write not having English as their first language but there are plenty of sites and programs that will correct spelling and grammatical errors free of charge. Posting such unpolished work is the author telling us readers that he doesn't really care all that much for his work. Besides the god awful grammar the story is somewhat ok.

LV 13

FrostFire

The author's grammar needs improvement (a lot). Barely readable grammar..almost gave me cancer. Interesting concept though. Any harem? I might increase my rating if you add harem.

LV 14

illegal_incognito

For all the fans of this.... i made a correction.....you made read this if you want but pls do mind that this is just me having nothing to do and just want to make a fixed version of this....pls give this original novel your power stones and leave me some reviews. "Business Man Naruto -fix grammar"

LV 6

Leinar32

Very inconsistent with the history of naruto. Grammar is worst that I have read so far... Kurenai x Naruto age gap is too different and he is like 11 or 12 that makes it grounds for arrest.....

LV 6

Sage_HiddenBear

Bottom line. The author tried. I realize he tried real hard. But it is simply illegible. Cant read it. Please get someone to edit this. Im not sure how this was successfully published. I will note that for something with such horrendous grammar and sentence structure the author did at least persevere in outputting chapters. So kudos to him. Just please edit and clean it up.

LV 1

ReaderBreeder69

There were lots of typing mistakes and I don't really understand the plot of the story but if this book is for you I guess it's ok. I don't know where the naruto part came from but ok.

LV 15

DeadEye12

Our author decides to write and spoil the future of the story as the story process's. The future he rights about has no significance for the story except spoil the future. if you want to know the huge spoil that you will find out as you read look down - - - - - - - - - - - - - Naruto is dead. Even though the soul of naruto changed and he has a harem, somehow only boruto and (Original naruto and hintas daughter) are his children fighting. this is so annoying for an author to do and honestly ruined the story for me

LV 5

musti48

güzell.xdd...................................................................................................................................

LV 4

DarkCarnage

If english is your trillith language go ahead and Read if English happens to be your main language id recomend smashing your head into a wall while Reading this garbage

LV 4

ReaderLens

It had so much potential but the author ruined it with excessive harem. I admit that I'm no big fan of this genre, but that had never stopped me from giving 5 stars to many harem works. But this one is too much.

LV 3

Dj_Rakesh

Man why you stopped writing. I like your thoughts about harem in Businessman Naruto. It was good. Super good. Awesome story. Wish that you change your mind and write nxt chapters ASAP. PLz.... Write more chapters.

LV 4

8999

for this novel I think the author need to express his story more clearly ,explain more also don't add just random timeline in. it will just make the story complex and difficult to understand. also try to use dot comma to separate sentences. another one is that vocabulary there are a lot of miss-spell.

LV 5

frizald

Very nice 👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👍👍👌👌👍👍👌

LV 5

DevilsArray

Dude why can't I vote power stone her? More chapters chapters keep going Great work review review review review review review review review review review review review review review review review review review review review review review review review review review review review review review review review review

LV 14

illegal_incognito

For everyone who are reading this... the early chapters have been edited to something easier to read,,, find the fix grammar version if you want an easier time reading this,,, though it is still fairly behind the original... it will soon catch up to atleast only 2 or 5 chapters behind the original.... I promise before december or january ends... I hope

LV 4

Dragons_Paradox

Gotta say, Naruto is way more b*da*s in this novel than the original... At least he’s actually smart (unlike a certain blonde whiskered kid we all know, and only kinda like...)

LV 5

XiaoHuoHaHaHa

This is interesting line of story till present chapter. But really, you need some editing grammar and some words correction. Over all it funtastic novel. Good job! XD