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In his early twenties, Joe, finds it complicated to accept the bare truth behind the curtain. A wife, A father, An old time friend...all of whom confuse him the most.
What is the way out, find out!!!
by Xamjos Laumu
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- Pengembangan Cerita
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- Latar Belakang Dunia
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Need to revisit it and do a lot of editing. The general setting should be vivid and well understandable. The characters are , well, lets say a bit built but not to the latter. Need to get enough familiarisation with the language first, but that will pick up as time goes by.
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