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An Uchiha in One Piece world (NEW ON MRGABRIEL ACCOUNT)
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His soul has returned from the other side and appeared in the world of One Piece. More powerful than ever, Indra obtains the body and bloodline of Sasuke Uchiha. Follow his adventures and travels around the world of One Piece.
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i like your fanfiction one piece is one of my favorite manga/anime the story really well written release are consistent, i don't know what else to say other that this must be read ! Keep up the work i'm looking forward how it continues
Nice story, mc not to weak or to op, dev good to. but u have many gram mistake,, well im bad to bso cant complain much,, but u should try fix mistake on 'she he it his her they etc' itks kinda make 'itc' when read it imo
Muito bom a novel recomendo à todos a acompanhar, não vão se arrepender. Muito bom a novel recomendo à todos a acompanhar, não vão se arrepender. 😎😎
Un argumento que me gusta mucho, buen contexto de la historia, y un Uchiha que me gustaría ver cómo evoluciona y si tiene waifus o sexo no se espero con ansias
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So the story is honestly kinda good? But the writing is insufferable and a few chapters in with POV going from third to first to third person being confusing and unbearable. I find that his way of convincing his nakama to join him not convincing at all. Like his first nakama wants to be justice like and then he convinces her by kind of threatening her to either become a pirate with him or leave her to die she goes with him and then they say she wants to be the best swordswoman in the world out of nowhere for her dream. It kind of throws info out their and has a rushed feeling where he is doing missions instantly and then has a bunch of system points where he wastes them to immediately buy a fishing boat. Those are REALLY small and he wants to travel the ocean in it? with (at the moment of writing this but not reading further) 3 people? Seems hopeless. The writing quality makes it hard to read and the characters dont seem like people but thrown in plot devices that have no personality. The system also has a personality? Though it is just a system? Like he was given a game system but it suddenly talks to him as if it were a person and sometimes it says things in weird ways making it confusing.
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I hate one piece so I’m giving 2and a half stars for no originality and No taste in anime cus that anime has been manipulating there loyal fans for how long for there money the tv show has barly any world flow and crappy graphics/art so just take this as a complaint out Of any world you picked one piece I mean I have not. Seen a single bezerker fam fic or even a d.greyman fan fic or even a soul eater fan fic that starts out in soul eater so that’s the reason for this crap revue I have not read your novel but I would not want to cus it’s one piece next time pick something that will end in the next 5 to 7 years cus that anime started I think around the 90s and is still going And pick something that has a good world flow that’s one reason Naruto is so popular for fan fics the would has a good flow it can immerse you and 99 precent of the world is. Not covered in water in my opinion try kenichi cus the whole show is about martial arts and training with comidy and has a partial harem that every tru fan wants it to be a full harem lol I hate the anime’s mc just cus he made it a partial harem
Jilid 1 : South Blue
- 1 New World, New Life 5 years ago
- 2 The eyes of the heart 5 years ago
- 3 The masked man 5 years ago
- 4 Rewards 5 years ago
- 5 A new ship 5 years ago
- 6 The first nakama 5 years ago
- 7 Big Eater 5 years ago
- 8 The cook 5 years ago
- 9 The tournament begin's 5 years ago
- 10 The end of the tournament 5 years ago
- 11 Drakkar, of the celestial eyes. 5 years ago
- 12 Red Line 5 years ago
- 13 Phoebus Catastrophe 5 years ago
........ umm..... shouldn’t the order be reverse? I mean sasuke bloodline originated from Indra so why would you make it sound like sasuke has a more powerful bloodline? And don’t say because he got that special rennegan, that was a gift from the sage of six path, have nothing to do with bloodline quality