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DROPPED:Juvenile Entertainer
4.45 (53 peringkat)
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Warning: Harem, system, slow-paced, CRINGE and system with a bad personality.
This has been dropped. This is my first novel which had a lot of problems from the pacing, power scale and grammar. Read knowing that it has no end.
To be a star is a simple Idea but to turn a boy that's been secluded from Society into one is much more difficult. Even if you took on his body you still felt his anxiety, insecurity and more. It's slow but worth it.
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Authors Note: The novel you are about read contains strong language and some vivid sexual content
The Mc is beta at the start as he is a character that suffers from anxiety due to his upbringing. Although it did take 23 chapters for the Mc to show visible growth that's just due to my naturally slow pacing.
Don't expect too much, especially since this is my first time writing a novel. It's also best not to take seriously as I am just writing for fun and to just something to do on my downtime
This novel will share a lot of similarities to other novels that I particularly love and mostly because I lack originality but it will be in my style.
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I will be honest that this story pisses me off. I love the scenario of a guy going in a parallel world where the entertainment industry is behind and using the original worlds entertainment to become incredibly famous and rich. But I hate the system. Usually I am a big fan of stories with a system but I hate systems that are a douche. I loved his magicians act but then the system ruined it by basically stealing his money. Donating to the hospital that cared for him could have been a touching scene but all I felt was pissed off by the system. Then the same thing when he wrote the book. What's the point of him writing books if he is not gonna make any money off of them. I kind of wanted to give it a 2/5 because the story makes me want to punch someone but I can't. Everything else is so good that the least I could give was a 4.4/5. I am currently on ch30 and can't force myself to read on. I think I will leave it on my library and if I get desperate I will come back to read it.
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A story so good and unbelievable, which just makes it that much harder to believe that this is the authors first story. (Definitely Recommended to anyone looking for a good story to read and anyone who likes stories such as Choices, I am Hunter, Start by Becoming a Mangaka, IRAS ect.) It's a great magical realism story, that tells the story of Theodore Hunt(from our Earth) later known as Theodore Smith(a parallel universe that isn't a developed in their entertainment industry as ours), as he evolves from a tiny and skinny "misfit" (for a better lack of word) to an amazing and extraordinary person that's capable of a lot of things(Singing,Sewing,Animations,ect.), which makes him af perfect versatile star. And at the same time it's also a really sweet and heartfelt story that just brings a smile to your face. It's also hinted at, that there will be a "harem"(which involves fully developed characters and romance thats has been filled and obtained over time, and not just instantaneous love and dedication) in the future, where two of the "members" already have a sweet, adorable and kind daughter each. ...But enough ranting, Just start reading this amazing work and my hats of for the author
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Writing quality 4/5. nothing to complain. updates 4/5: good release rate. story:3/5 Lets be honest, he is "compared" to the last two that "had" this system pursues materialistic gain and fame. Two of the worst traits of humanity: vanity and greed. so this is a sold 2/5. Also the cliches, the unreal behavior of people and so on. Character: I am biased, one of the things I hate the most is the cliche power\system with its own ego, and this novel the system has a very very ugly and annoying ego, at certain points you just want the "system" to go and die. ontop of that is the failure penalty for missions (spoiler: donate 100k $, or what ever currency it uses, or be registered as a *** offender, yes this came out of no where. Do this **** in a week or loose your hair, so on and so one), this just shows poor humor at best and laziness on part of the author, instead of coming up with original story to light fire under the MC or at the very least think of a proper failure penalty (reward: +2 strength, failure: -2 charisma, etc). MC: To be fair I am at chapter 23 but MC is a spinless yes man. Past 3 chapters we already encountered several situation he was forced to do something he didnt want or feel comfortable with only because the person pushing him has tits (aka his mistress or so it seems). To be honest, most of the time his goal if wanting to be a Star, what ever that means doesn't really seem like something he wants, at least not with that personality: he is shy, does not like crowds, private and so on. World: 2/5 duh, its earth so nothing much is original yet. I will keep reading any may even update this novel but up to here its nothing much. The author would do better to concentrate on his newer novel marvel father something. The worst thing about a novel is when the MC is average at best and you feel he does not deserve what he has.
Really enjoying this. Only wish there were more stories like this one. Keep up the good work. Thanks author XD ..........................................................................................................................................
Thk for updating. Pls update soon!! Cant wait to read next chapter... .................................................................................................
The novel is all around very good, the author's writing skills are top-notch if you're considering the level at which most writers on webnovel write like. The only thing that could be negative about this novel is the stability of updates. The novel either way is very entertaining and unique in its own way.
Loved this story cant wait for more chapters. I loved the kind mc and how he wasnt racist like anouther certin showbiz novel. While the system at first was kind of annoying but as the story goes on everything improved 10 fold. Good work keep it going
Love the story so much. Kind of dislike the system but oh well and its personality has gotten better so it's fine I guess. The only reason I'm not giving it a 5 is because updates aren't as frequent anymore.
This has a nice MC that can be said "OP". He god damn perfect and has some flaws though and it just makes him more human. Some how thinking he would lean twards being a star but with his skill from latest chapter... He could moon light as a vigilante with his Ai... He clinches victory by what he does and I enjoyed how he gets the people he loves. Great stuff!
Really enjoyed reading this, have to say I'm looking forward to see where you take this. Just a note for readers if that have yet to read it, I was actually put off due to some of the character personalities and minor story related things but I pushed through the bits I didn't really like. I can say that overall, it was actually getting better over time and I could see how the author attempted to fix or change the direction the story went instead of half *ssing it. Notes: - The system has a b*tchy personality. Good thing is that there isn't a whole lot of dialogue between the mc and system after story gets past the early stages (training, gaining fame, etc.). I'm just glad the author had started to change the system's attitude when MC was finally 'proving' himself to be worth respecting. - MC had a few beta male moments and is a bit too selfless that it almost got annoying. The author eventually straightened out his character and did it in a way that seemed legitimate and showed how the MC grows through his experience. - There are moments where I question if the system is too cheat or more realistic than others that just give out points and rewards like candy. This story does have those moments but at other times I don't know. I guess it's more up to personal preference for that.
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This story really looks to be a very interesting story I think I just might end up liking it very much just by reading the reviews and summary. It’s definitely a story I will read for sure from start to finish! I wonder which characters I will end up hating and loving.😜 I’ll give it a high rating for now😋😋 Great job translating or writing the story!!
Well guys, what is a amazing novel with good MC who keeping improving?? This!! Author really makes a awesome job there. Thank you. I wanna moar and really nice job with the fluffy angels. Thank you, again. You make my day. 👊❤
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Ich habe mir die Frage nach dem Motto der Arbeit mit dem Auto fahren und dann noch die Möglichkeit die ich nicht mehr so viel wie möglich zu halten und die anderen beiden Seiten des Tages noch nicht so gut wie keine andere Wahl
Recently found this novel and not sure why its not ranked higher as it def. does. Give it a read and i'm sure it'll soon end up in ones library.
Please keep up the good work Author-kun ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
A hidden gem thank you for the story ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Your story his really Nice keep the good work Author's-san. Love you mwa 😚................................................ ...... .... ... .. .
Jilid 0 : Auxiliary Volume
Jilid 1 : Stuggle
- 1 Chapter 1 Tough Kid 5 years ago
- 2 Chapter 2 Goals 5 years ago
- 3 Chapter 3 Plans For The Future 5 years ago
- 4 Chapter 4 Start The Grind 5 years ago
- 5 Chapter 5 Reality Check 5 years ago
- 6 chapter 6 Interview 5 years ago
- 7 Chapter 7 Performance 5 years ago
- 8 Chapter 8 Well Deserved 5 years ago
- 9 Chapter 9 Crisis 5 years ago
- 10 Chapter 10 First Impression 5 years ago
- 11 Chapter 11 Big Ending 5 years ago
- 12 Chapter 12 Rewards 5 years ago
- 13 Chapter 13 New Appearance 5 years ago
- 14 Chapter 14 Snow White 5 years ago
- 15 Chapter 15 Thankful 5 years ago
- 16 Chapter 16 Weak Resolve 5 years ago
- 17 Chapter 17 Magic Hoodie 5 years ago
- 18 Chapter 18 Final Reward 5 years ago
- 19 Chapter 19 Lessons 5 years ago
- 20 Chapter 20 Badass 5 years ago
- 21 Chapter 21 Fairy 5 years ago
- 22 Chapter 22 My Bottom 5 years ago
- 23 Chapter 23 Title At The End 5 years ago
- 24 Chapter 24 Unmuted System 5 years ago
- 25 Chapter 25 All Of Me 5 years ago
- 26 chapter 26 Time Skip 1/2 5 years ago
- 27 Chapter 27 Time Skip 2/2 5 years ago
- 28 Chapter 28 Good-Bye 5 years ago
Jilid 2 : Opportunity
- 29 Chapter 29 Main Task 5 years ago
- 30 Chapter 30 Little Neighbour 5 years ago
- 31 Chapter 31 Mother & Daughter 5 years ago
- 32 Chapter 32 Explosion 5 years ago
- 33 Chapter 33 Curious Rose 5 years ago
- 34 Chapter 34 Prep For Stream 5 years ago
- 35 Chapter 35 Alarms Set Off 5 years ago
- 36 Chapter 36 Little Angel 5 years ago
- 37 Chapter 37 Ideal Husband 5 years ago
- 38 Chapter 38 Handsome Genius 5 years ago
- 39 Chapter 39 Dark Secret 5 years ago
- 40 Chapter 40 Friendly Monster 5 years ago
- 41 Chapter 41 My SuperPower 5 years ago
- 42 Chapter 42 Theo's Room 5 years ago
- 43 Chapter 43 Sing Along 5 years ago
- 44 Chapter 44 Montage 5 years ago
- 45 Chapter 45 Flaw 5 years ago
- 46 Chapter 46 Proof Of Work 5 years ago
- 47 Chapter 47 Red Vulture 5 years ago
- 48 Chapter 48 New Task 5 years ago
- 49 Chapter 48 Kids Stamina 5 years ago
- 50 Chapter 49 Mature Charm 5 years ago
- 51 Chapter 50 Second Opinion 5 years ago
- 52 Chapter 51 First Real Step 5 years ago
- 53 Chapter 52 First Meeting 5 years ago
- 54 Chapter 53 Just A Nobody 5 years ago
- 55 Chapter 54 Fire Burning 5 years ago
- 56 Chapter 55 Dread 5 years ago
- 57 Chapter 56 Take It Off!! 5 years ago
- 58 Chapter 57 Instincts 5 years ago
- 59 Chapter 58 Trouble 5 years ago
- 60 Chapter 59 Another One 5 years ago
- 61 Chapter 60 Congratulations 5 years ago
- 62 Chapter 61 Is 'IT' Real 5 years ago
- 63 Chapter 62 Dessert 5 years ago
- 64 Chapter 63 Defying Logic 5 years ago
- 65 Chapter 64 Little Angels Debut 5 years ago
- 66 Chapter 65 Listeners = Victims 5 years ago
- 67 Chapter 66 L.A Fame 5 years ago
- 68 Chapter 67 Mob Of Women 5 years ago
- 69 Chapter 68 Classics 5 years ago
- 70 Chapter 69 Spontaneous 5 years ago
- 71 Chapter 70 Life In Hospital 5 years ago
- 72 Chapter 71 Virgin Vs Yoga Pants 5 years ago
- 73 Chapter 72 Icey Paradise 5 years ago
- 74 Chapter 73 One Amazing Cake 5 years ago
- 75 Chapter 74 Classic 5 years ago
- 76 Chapter 75 Pressure 5 years ago
- 77 Chapter 76 Freak 5 years ago
- 78 Chapter 77 There's Effort Then There's Genetics 5 years ago
- 79 Chapter 78 Make Over 5 years ago
- 80 Chapter 79 Skill Creation 5 years ago
Jilid 3 : Conquest
- 81 Chapter 80 The Only Reward Needed 5 years ago
- 82 Chapter 81 A Gamer Rise's 5 years ago
- 83 Chapter 82 TradeMarked 5 years ago
- 84 Chapter 83 A Dark Game 5 years ago
- 85 Chapter 84 Blood Boil 5 years ago
- 86 Chapter 85 Gamer Vs Game Developer 5 years ago
- 87 Chapter 86 Business Emails 5 years ago
- 88 Chapter 87 Sharing 5 years ago
- 89 Chapter 88 Living In Fear 5 years ago
- 90 Chapter 89 DIBS!! 5 years ago
- 91 Chapter 90 Misunderstanding 5 years ago
- 92 Chapter 91 Dinner For Two 5 years ago
- 93 Chapter 92 New Task's 5 years ago
- 94 Chapter 93 End It 5 years ago
- 95 Love and Cherish 5 years ago
- 96 Zarner Bros 5 years ago
- 97 Best Performance 5 years ago
- 98 Young Hero 5 years ago
- 99 Profession's 5 years ago
- 100 Down In History 5 years ago
- 101 Getting over It 5 years ago
- 102 Update: not dropped 5 years ago
- 103 Hell Is A Climb 5 years ago
- 104 Winner 5 years ago
- 105 Time No See 5 years ago
- 106 Small Boss 5 years ago
- 107 A Mistake 5 years ago
- 108 Dinner And The Future 5 years ago
- 109 Good Bye Mom's Hello Dad 5 years ago
- 110 VIP Zoo 5 years ago
- 111 Travel 5 years ago
- 112 Not Dropped 5 years ago
- 113 The Zoo 5 years ago
- 114 Staged? 4 years ago
- 115 Your Welcome 4 years ago
- 116 Mary's Friend 4 years ago
- 117 New Beginnings 4 years ago
- 118 Helping The Neighbors 4 years ago
HELLO this is the Author I finally wrote enough chapters to do self review and all I can say is that this will NOT be dropped but will progressively get more exciting as time passes and I'm excited to show my weird imagination.