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This was a amzing novel, too bad it came to a end. Splish spLash, word limit trash Splish splash, word limit rptrashy DU du du du Aplish splatsh
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The heck do you writing bro making mc a fighting maniac I don't like MC's behaviour . He likes to kill people because they are weak In dbz Vagita was also incredibly prideful and jerk but he still changed but here broly's character is getting bad to worse In a chapter he decided to kill hinata to fight kurenai. And he fought so many jonins and lost but he still don't understand that they can kill him, they are letting him free because he is kid and he still don't understand it. And some people are commenting why broly is so weak. So I want to ask those people what do you want he should as powerful as in dbz and destroy the planet because he got bored and go to another anime do the same until reachr dbz universe agin???because as far as I know dbz universe is pretty overpowered
Tbh I don't care if there was a lot of problems with the novel it was fun and it was an enjoyable journey so to me it gets a pass.........…………………………………………………...……………………………………………………………………………..
FU*K YOU AUTHOR !!!!!!!! What the fu*k did u do to Broly u tranisht his Name and you literlly SHIT on Sayajin´s FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU*K
Why the hell is legendary syanin is weak as fuq you.he can literally eliminate hokage since birth. You made him simple as a normal human you sh*thead
He wrote a story about Broly, someone born with a power level of 10000 and only growing stronger, making him less of a genius than itachi or kakashi. it's just some low-class saiyan with "broly's" named slapped on and a similar personality.
A absolute must read for Disturbed Individuals K a m e h a m e h a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a. A a a a a a a a a a a. A a a a my throat hurt I mean who is stupid enough to yell there attacks. It seems very damaging in the throat
I thoroughly enjoyed reading through this novel. I love that while slightly overpowered it came from an intellectual and hard work angle. I’ve never understood why shinobi only look at jutsu use for battle. Like seriously no shadow clones for hokage paper work lmao mix of science and battle tactic really a fun read with cool crossover concept
I really enjoy this story there’s one of my favorites. It’s well written and is in a Boy Scout kind of book which I like.I’ve always enjoyed Naruto fan fiction but this is probably one of my favorite ones I’ve never really gotten into dragon ball Z but this fanfic got me to start looking at some of it
This story is basically where madman,insane and ruthless win and I love it. If you don't like when the hero gets beat the **** of him then dies and favourite character dies like don't read this ****. The basically gives no **** about peoples kills another his family. Whether innocent or evil he kills them. Good book
Broly is increadibly weak in terms of dragon balls tandards, his super sayian forms are as strong as the regular characters so if you are expecting the mc to be strong then this is not the novel for you. Naruto is stronger or on par with the mc so there is one example, maily the mc is nerfed beyond believe.
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if you want your character power with the standard of naruto world, you should just make him some genius from that naruto world .. why make him a super saiyan with incorporating its power .. just pure nonesense
Its sort of depressing that your favourite characters get their ass kicked ..but anyway sort of finish it....the later part was lame though cause i espect much better
Membuka SPOILER
So we going with the old broly from the legendary super saiyan instead of the new broly movie damn I like the new movie broly better he away strong and better.
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Nice story. Non naruto characters could have a more complex personality. Broly is quite overpower. His team is well balance. I always wonder if there are aliens in naruto universe and how big is the world of naruto. In general, i like it. Nice job.
Captain Boyhole took an intruiging inspirational seed of an iconic charcter like Broly threw him into Naruto and blossomed his story into a marvelous forest of badaasery. Fantastically moraly grey I liked the fact original Broly movie Broly evolved from being just psychotic to a real warmonger with brains and his own code to back up his innate brutality. The only "downside" (if i can really call it that) was the fact that Broly had to share his spotlight. Saying that I loved watching Jabie and Esumi grow just as much as Broly did and because of that the slow timings in the story were tolerable to me. I hope for some cameo's in the next story XP Good on ya Captain.
Just read it .....…......................................................................................................................................
This is a great story to read it....................................................................................................................
This is a great story to read it....................................................................................................................
I just finished reading this book in one go and I'm not sure what to say. I'm a fan of Broly and the legendary Super Saiyan being nerfed so much and being compared to the likes of Naruto characters is very upsetting. To much lack of logics. No ki because it is a different energy? What kind of nonsense is that. Every living thing, even plants have ki (AKA life force). It's a universal energy. Why would broly not have life force? It doesn't make sense at all.
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One of the best Naruto fanfics I’ve ever Read Highly recommend Should read Highly recommend Should read. Highly recommend Should read Highly recommend Should read. Highly recommend Should read. Highly recommend Should read
I like the story but I don't like how the legendary Super Saiyan is nerfed so much. From the time he was born, broly had enormous levels of power. And.... Why can't he use ki? It's an energy every living beings have. And too much attention to side characters instead of Broly.
This was a amzing novel, too bad it came to a end. Splish spLash, word limit trash Splish splash, word limit rptrashy DU du du du Aplish splatsh
😄😄😎😋😍😙😚😗😙😗😚😙😚😗😙🤗😚🤗😎😗😍😎😍😋😎😋😅😆😄😆😄😂😁😂😀😂😀😆😁😆😋😅😊😅😋😍😗😎😗😚🤗🤔🤗☺😙😚🤗😚😙☺🤩😚😗😉😙😉😎😆😎😉😅😉😅😆😄😆😋😍😗😍😗
Membuka SPOILER Its good for most of you canhdhdhdhdnrhehehehehhrhjehehehdhdhrhd#hhhhddjdjdhhdhddjdjdjdhdhhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhhdhdhdhddjdjdjdhdjjdjdhdjdjdjdjdhhdhdhdhdhdhhd
Membuka SPOILER The heck do you writing bro making mc a fighting maniac I don't like MC's behaviour . He likes to kill people because they are weak In dbz Vagita was also incredibly prideful and jerk but he still changed but here broly's character is getting bad to worse In a chapter he decided to kill hinata to fight kurenai. And he fought so many jonins and lost but he still don't understand that they can kill him, they are letting him free because he is kid and he still don't understand it. And some people are commenting why broly is so weak. So I want to ask those people what do you want he should as powerful as in dbz and destroy the planet because he got bored and go to another anime do the same until reachr dbz universe agin???because as far as I know dbz universe is pretty overpowered
Tbh I don't care if there was a lot of problems with the novel it was fun and it was an enjoyable journey so to me it gets a pass.........…………………………………………………...……………………………………………………………………………..
FU*K YOU AUTHOR !!!!!!!! What the fu*k did u do to Broly u tranisht his Name and you literlly SHIT on Sayajin´s FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU*K
Why the hell is legendary syanin is weak as fuq you.he can literally eliminate hokage since birth. You made him simple as a normal human you sh*thead
He wrote a story about Broly, someone born with a power level of 10000 and only growing stronger, making him less of a genius than itachi or kakashi. it's just some low-class saiyan with "broly's" named slapped on and a similar personality.
A absolute must read for Disturbed Individuals K a m e h a m e h a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a. A a a a a a a a a a a. A a a a my throat hurt I mean who is stupid enough to yell there attacks. It seems very damaging in the throat
I thoroughly enjoyed reading through this novel. I love that while slightly overpowered it came from an intellectual and hard work angle. I’ve never understood why shinobi only look at jutsu use for battle. Like seriously no shadow clones for hokage paper work lmao mix of science and battle tactic really a fun read with cool crossover concept
I really enjoy this story there’s one of my favorites. It’s well written and is in a Boy Scout kind of book which I like.I’ve always enjoyed Naruto fan fiction but this is probably one of my favorite ones I’ve never really gotten into dragon ball Z but this fanfic got me to start looking at some of it
This story is basically where madman,insane and ruthless win and I love it. If you don't like when the hero gets beat the **** of him then dies and favourite character dies like don't read this ****. The basically gives no **** about peoples kills another his family. Whether innocent or evil he kills them. Good book
Broly is increadibly weak in terms of dragon balls tandards, his super sayian forms are as strong as the regular characters so if you are expecting the mc to be strong then this is not the novel for you. Naruto is stronger or on par with the mc so there is one example, maily the mc is nerfed beyond believe.
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if you want your character power with the standard of naruto world, you should just make him some genius from that naruto world .. why make him a super saiyan with incorporating its power .. just pure nonesense
Its sort of depressing that your favourite characters get their ass kicked ..but anyway sort of finish it....the later part was lame though cause i espect much better
Membuka SPOILER So we going with the old broly from the legendary super saiyan instead of the new broly movie damn I like the new movie broly better he away strong and better.
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Nice story. Non naruto characters could have a more complex personality. Broly is quite overpower. His team is well balance. I always wonder if there are aliens in naruto universe and how big is the world of naruto. In general, i like it. Nice job.
Captain Boyhole took an intruiging inspirational seed of an iconic charcter like Broly threw him into Naruto and blossomed his story into a marvelous forest of badaasery. Fantastically moraly grey I liked the fact original Broly movie Broly evolved from being just psychotic to a real warmonger with brains and his own code to back up his innate brutality. The only "downside" (if i can really call it that) was the fact that Broly had to share his spotlight. Saying that I loved watching Jabie and Esumi grow just as much as Broly did and because of that the slow timings in the story were tolerable to me. I hope for some cameo's in the next story XP Good on ya Captain.
Just read it .....…......................................................................................................................................
This is a great story to read it....................................................................................................................
This is a great story to read it....................................................................................................................
I just finished reading this book in one go and I'm not sure what to say. I'm a fan of Broly and the legendary Super Saiyan being nerfed so much and being compared to the likes of Naruto characters is very upsetting. To much lack of logics. No ki because it is a different energy? What kind of nonsense is that. Every living thing, even plants have ki (AKA life force). It's a universal energy. Why would broly not have life force? It doesn't make sense at all.
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One of the best Naruto fanfics I’ve ever Read Highly recommend Should read Highly recommend Should read. Highly recommend Should read Highly recommend Should read. Highly recommend Should read. Highly recommend Should read
I like the story but I don't like how the legendary Super Saiyan is nerfed so much. From the time he was born, broly had enormous levels of power. And.... Why can't he use ki? It's an energy every living beings have. And too much attention to side characters instead of Broly.
I hate this story this is truly the worst story I’ve every read